I grew up hearing stories about running at night stories from my
dad and uncles about pounding dirt roads, under a vast Sky
filled with stars For Navajo people running is more than
exercise. It's part of tradition identity.
Something deep-rooted? My father said, running brought
Clarity, connecting you with something old and strong that
slept beneath the red desert Earth.
I thought about those stories, as I laced up my shoes, stepping
out onto my grandmother's porch near Chinle.
Winter break, brought me back from ASU where life had felt
hurried and disconnected. I missed the quiet of home.
It was late. December, two days before
Christmas? The evening air was cold heavy.
The sun already dipping below the Masons and painting The
Horizon Red. I zipped up my jacket.
Pulled my hoodie over my head and took off down the dirt road
toward Junction. Overlook the first mile felt
good. My lungs filled with sharp are
the dirt crunching rhythmically underfoot.
It was exactly what I needed. Solitude familiar terrain, the
soothing rhythm of my stride. But then as I crested the hill,
something broke my concentration, a large coyote
stood motionless on a dirt berm. A short distance ahead watching
me. Coyotes were not uncommon,
especially at dusk, but this one was unsettling.
Its eyes glowed back at me, catching the fading sunlight
steady and fixed. I slowed down, half expecting it
to Dart off into the scrub. It didn't its gaze remained
locked on to me, unmoving. Just a coyote I whispered to
myself steadying my breath. Still unease.
Crawled up my spine. I ran past the animal
deliberately avoiding looking at its way again.
My heart rate quickened no longer just from running.
I tried to dismiss the feeling. It's just nerves coyotes.
Follow people all the time. My dad always said, animals were
more afraid of us than we were of them, but something felt
different. Now, as the road curved, my eyes
flicked to the Berm. Again, the coyote was keeping
Pace sliding effortlessly along the ridge matching my speed, but
making no sound at all. I picked up my Pace hoping to
shake the feeling of dread building in my gut.
Soon, I reached the old water tank where my dad had taught me
to hunt rabbits years before and there it was again the same
coyote, but now it stood directly ahead perfectly still
staring at me. Impossible, I hadn't seen or
heard it passed me. I stopped chest heaving feeling
pinned beneath. Its unblinking stare, Fear cold
and unfamiliar prickled at my skin.
A sudden instinct told me to leave fast.
I turned sharply and started back toward my grandmothers.
Abandoning the route to Junction Overlook all together.
Daniel, I froze mid-step. The voice was mine.
Clear, as day, echoing strangely, from the desert
around me. Not whispered, not carried by
the wind. It was my own voice calm in
perfectly familiar Iran. My legs pumped furiously,
adrenaline. Surging the cold are cut into my
throat, but I didn't slow down Panic.
Made me Reckless desperate to leave the road behind.
I glanced down briefly and my heart, slammed against my ribs
beside my own Footprints, fresh marks mirrored.
My stride perfectly. Two sets of identical shoe
prints moving side by side through the dust.
Know I guessed pushing harder ahead, light flickered, faintly
from a Hogan Ray yazzi's place, my dad trusted Ray called him, a
medicine, man, who knew things, my legs burned.
As I raced toward the small structure Longs raw from the
cold, the lights seemed impossibly far away never
drawing closer. The desert had fallen completely
silent except for the harsh scrape of my breath and the
hammering of my footsteps. I resisted the urge to look
behind me, terrified, I might Glimpse, whatever had spoken.
My name what ever had matched? My stride.
Second stretched endlessly until finally, I reached raise Hogan.
Ray was at the doorway eyes, narrowed his face serious.
Inside. Now he said, sharply pulling me
Across the Threshold. He locked the heavy wooden door
behind us, a strange thing for Ray, whose doors were always
open. I stood there.
Trembling sweat soaked into my hoodie.
Despite the chill, my words came in ragged bursts.
Rey, I saw something a coyote but not it.
Ran with me. I heard it.
Spoke it spoke in my voice. He silenced me with a raised
hand already reaching for Cedar and Sweetgrass hanging from the
rafters. I watched as he began burning
the herbs smoke, filling the small room.
Ray didn't speak again. Only drew a careful line of Ash
Across the Threshold and whispered softly his face tents
determined. I sank onto a chair near the
stove. Heart still racing breath
gradually slowing outside the desert remained, silent the sky,
dark and unforgiving. I stared at the locked door.
Unable to shake the feeling that something out there.
Still waited patiently in the shadows, watching and listening,
and for the first time in my life, I understood clearly why.
Some roads were never meant to be running at night.
Inside the Hogan. The air was thick with cedar
smoke and something else. A heavy silence.
Ray moved, quickly deliberately He laid more Sweetgrass onto the
smoldering bundle. It sent mingling.
Sharply with the cedar the smoke was dense.
Enough to make my eyes water. I started to speak but Ray shook
his head once sharply. Quiet.
He murmured, don't speak about it, not yet.
Rey was older than my father by at least a decade with deep
lines carved into his skin by years of sun and wind.
He wore his long grey hair tied, back strands, escaping and
framing his tired eyes. He moved with an urgency.
I'd never seen before his usual, calm replaced by something
sharper. I stared at the locked door.
Heart still thumping painfully in my chest.
Outside nothing stirred as though the entire landscape was
holding its breath. I wanted desperately to ask
questions to understand, but the look on Race Face kept me
silent. He knelt at the door, placing a
thin line of Ash along. The threshold, his fingers,
trembling slightly. Beside it.
He carefully laid a smooth black stone.
Only then, did he look back at me?
You ran on that Old Road past the water tank.
He said, quietly, it wasn't a question, I nodded slowly
swallowing hard. Yes, REI closed.
His eyes, briefly a flicker of something passing across his
face. I told your father a long time
ago never to run their after Sundown, he listened He glanced
at me shaking his head slowly. He should have told you A sharp
wins slammed against the Hogan suddenly rattling.
The door and walls. I jumped every muscle in my body
tightening at once. Raid didn't Flinch instead he
reached for a Leather Pouch, hanging on the wall, untying the
drawstring carefully. What was it?
I finally managed. My voice.
Barely above a whisper. He didn't look up.
Instead he continued methodically working fingers.
Moving deftly. As he carefully, removed herbs
and small objects from the pouch, placing them onto the
worn wooden table. Something old.
He finally said softly, but clearly something that's been
there much longer than us. It wanted you to notice it.
I did notice it, I whispered hoarsely, it called my name in
my own voice. How could it do that?
Ray paused meeting my eyes again.
It's not human. Daniel never was it.
Borrows voices uses them to get attention.
His jaw tightened slightly and he turned away but it can't come
inside, not tonight, not with this.
He began chanting softly, in Navajo words, I could recognize
but couldn't fully understand each syllable, deliberate and
clear. Outside the wind howled.
Louder. Dust pelting, the walls.
The entire Hogan seemed to shudder under the force of the
wind. Yet, raise voice remains steady
firm protective for hours. I sat stiffly in that wooden
chair, not daring to move or speak.
Every muscle ache, my body exhausted, but wired with
tension. The windows were darkened by
Nightfall and the Shadows inside.
The Hogan, felt heavier as Ray continued.
His quiet chant, I must have drifted in and out of sleep,
because when I snapped away, the wind had stopped replaced by a
deep unsettling silence. My eyes darted toward Rey, he
sat still cross-legged on a woven rug watching me.
His gaze was steady and serious. It's gone.
I whispered hopefully Rey shook his head slowly.
It's patient waiting. He rose stretching his stiff
joints carefully and went to peer out the small window beside
the door. His shoulders relaxed.
Only slightly. But its nearly Dawn.
Now, it won't stay when the Sun rises.
Why me? I asked voice cracking why
tonight Ray turned from the window eyes grave.
It sensed something. Maybe loneliness.
Maybe something missing. Whatever it was.
He caught its attention, but it won't take you if you don't let
it I shuddered pulling my hoodie tighter.
What is that mean? Raise voice dropped, even lower.
Never answer when it calls, never acknowledge it.
It has no power if you ignore it, but if you speak back, if
you show Fear, He Stopped Turning Away abruptly.
He didn't finish but I understood the first faint glow
of mourning, crept, under the door.
Breaking the long Darkness. Ray finally, moved toward the
door and unlocked it, the metal latch sounding strangely loud.
He swung it open allowing, cool morning, air to seep into the
Hogan. Everything outside was silent as
though, nothing unusual had happened at all.
Ray motion for me to follow. And I stood shakily my legs
stiff and sore, The sun was Rising chasing the Shadows away
but it couldn't erase the dread. Still coiled tight in my chest.
We stepped out onto the road together, Ray scanning the dirt
carefully. Come.
He said we need to go back. You have to see.
He started walking and reluctantly, I followed the
morning air was sharp clean and painfully bright making last
night seemed even more surreal. Ray walked silently beside me
down the dirt road eyes focused intently on the ground ahead.
Neither of us, spoke much the Stillness between us felt
necessary as if words might disturb something fragile.
The road stretched ahead familiar yet.
Now deeply unsettling. My footprints were clear in the
dusty Earth, from my frantic run the night before.
Seeing them again, brought a rush of panic quickening, my
pulse each step closer to the spot near the water tank, felt
heavy or race stopped. Suddenly kneeling down in the
road, running his fingers over something etched clearly in the
dirt. My stomach clenched painfully.
What? I asked cautiously stepping
closer. What do you see?
Ray didn't answer immediately, he stayed quiet studying the
marks carefully. I moved beside him looking down.
At first the prince appeared normal my shoes.
Clear and deep from running. But as I stared a second set of
prints became obvious narrow split down the middle.
Unmistakably cloven, what is that?
My voice was barely audible almost lost in the desert
silence. Hooves Ray answered quietly.
His voice measured not dear, not livestock these prints move
exactly with yours perfectly matched stride for stride, my
throat tightened painfully, and I forced myself to breathe
slowly. How is that possible?
Race stood, dusting his palms on his jeans.
He scan the surrounding brush eyes, narrowing, lips pressed
together tightly. It ran next to you, he said
voice call but firm, not behind you.
Not in front of you next to you. He walked further up the road
following the strange tracks. They remained consistent
alongside mine, the space in precise in unnatural.
I felt sick in imagining, whatever.
Had been beside me in the darkness.
Silent unnoticed race. Stopped again gazing out toward
the empty rolling desert He reached into his pocket and took
out a small pouch, pulling, ash from it.
Carefully. He sprinkled Ash over the hoof
prints murmuring softly under his breath.
His movements were calm purposeful.
When he finished Ray turned back toward me his face set with
determination. It wasn't chasing you Daniel.
He said firmly it. Mirrored you it wanted you to
look to see it clearly to acknowledge it.
If you had, he paused eyes meeting mine.
Seriously, you might not have come back.
I swallowed hard did it want to hurt me?
Ray shook his head slowly not the way.
You think it doesn't care about hurting you physically, it wants
your attention, your fear. It takes something deeper than
skin or bone. We stood quietly for a long
moment, staring down at those impossible.
Prince, the sun continued. Its slow, climb, heating the air
around us. In the daylight, the mark seemed
even more unnatural like, they belonged somewhere else
entirely. Can we stop it?
I finally asked race sighed heavily.
You stopped it already by running to my door.
It can't cross Ash and Cedar easily, but it can wait
patiently, hoping you slip up again.
So you can't ever run here not alone, not at night, I nodded
numbly accepting his words completely After last night, I
didn't need convincing. I didn't want to be on this road
alone ever again. Rey, put a gentle hand on my
shoulder squeezing once firmly, you'll be all right.
Daniel, you know, now you understand it doesn't get
another chance. We walked back slowly leaving
the prints behind as we approach.
My grandmother's trailer. I saw her standing outside arms
crossed tightly waiting for me. Her face held the same knowing
seriousness as Rays. Grandma I'm sorry I began but
she raised a hand to silence me. I dreamed last night she said
firmly Coyote's outside the windows circling in watching.
It was a sign. Clear enough.
We're moving closer to town relief washed over me.
I hadn't realized until then just how much I'd wanted her to
say those words Rey nodded quietly eyes steady and
approving within days we packed up our belongings and moved
closer to Chinle away from Junction, Overlook away from
that Old Road. Life returned to something.
Almost normal though. Quieter more cautious.
I graduated college eventually moved forward, but never forgot.
Even now whenever I drive home, I glanced uneasily at the dusty
ridges and distant berms. sometimes if the evening Shadows
are long enough, I think I see a single coyote sitting perfectly
still watching but I never stopped not anymore.
Fort Defiance Arizona. It's a quiet corner of the
Navajo Nation where the desert stretches wide beneath star
heavy skies and silence comes naturally.
My family's land sits, just west of town near Black Creek.
Wash. Growing up.
I learned to respect this land to acknowledge its stories.
It's not just dirt and June of juniper, its history tradition
and something deeper. That's hard to explain to
outside hurts. Maybe that's why bringing my
military friends out. Here felt complicated.
They'd seen enough overseas to be skeptical about anything that
couldn't be explained by Logic or bullets.
I knew better but I kept it to myself. the fire snapped gently,
as we sat around the pit built from Flat Stones, I had stacked
myself, The six of us, John Ty, Nathan, Chris, Devon and me were
sharing drinks and swapping memories from our service.
The whiskey had loosened everyone up laughter flowing,
freely under the Amber glow of the fire.
The moon hung low painting, the edges of the mesas, silver blue,
We'd all recently gotten out of the military adjusting to
civilian life in our own ways. John a former soldier from New
Mexico. Never missed a chance to mock
anything. He didn't understand.
I'd invited him out here, hoping the piece might ease his
bitterness. I soon regretted it.
John took a swig from the whiskey bottle and grind at
Chris. Who had been telling a story
about something strange he'd seen as a kid.
You don't actually buy that. Skinwalker crap.
Do you John asked shaking his head?
His laughter was harsh mocking. It's just stories.
Bored Shepherds. Tell each other to pass the
time. I felt a sharp on ease spread
across my chest tightening like wire My grandfather had always
worn me. Don't mock what you don't know.
Careful man. I said softly trying not to show
my discomfort Something's around here aren't meant to be joked
about. John scoffed again tossing,
another log onto the fire with exaggerated Force.
Sparks, leaped upwards swirling Skyward.
Chris stared into the dark beyond the firelight uneasy a
sudden violent crack. Echoed from the fire pit, and I
flinched as a burning log. Burst spitting Embers into the
air. Thai swore loudly shielding his
face. Nathan laughed nervously,
brushing glowing. Bits off his jacket calmed down.
Just wet wood. John insisted though?
His smile had faded slightly. No one spoke for a moment.
The atmosphere shifted quietly into tension.
A silent awareness that something had changed.
I glanced at Chris who was staring intently into the
Shadows, beyond the flickering light, he shifted on comfortably
What is it Devin asked notice in Chris's expression.
Chris hesitated before answering his voice quietly earlier.
When we were setting up, I thought I saw something.
Move up there on the ridge tall. Real skinny didn't move, right?
John laughed again though less convincingly.
Probably just a coyote, stop letting this place get to you.
I tried to convince myself John was right?
But the hair at the back of my neck.
Prickled Coyote's didn't move like men and men.
Didn't move like that thing, Chris described the land had
gone too quiet. Then, Ty leaned forward, head
tilted, slightly straining to listen.
You guys hear that. We held our breath. the faintest
crunch of gravel echoed softly somewhere, just beyond the dim
circle of firelight My heartbeat quickened, it sounded rhythmic
deliberate like slow footsteps pacing circling around our camp.
Dear. Nathan asked hopefully though
his voice trembled. Know, I answered automatically
surprising myself with my firmness.
John chuckled on easily stood up and stretched.
You're all too jumpy, relax. I'm gonna go take a leak.
He wandered off into the dark beyond our trucks deliberately
loud, whistling to show, he wasn't afraid.
His shape dissolved into the Shadows between June Peppers.
The crunch of his boots fading gradually.
A minute passed. Then too.
Then 5 taking his time. Nathan mumbled.
I glanced toward where John had disappeared waiting for his
footsteps to return. But silence lingard stubbornly
thickening the night air around us.
The fire crackled softly. The only sound cutting through
our anxious quiet. John, I finally called out.
The night absorbed my voice offering nothing in return.
Hey John, you good? Nothing unease, spread.
Rapidly Among Us. Ty got to his feet eyes weary.
Maybe we should go check on him. I nodded standing slowly.
My legs strangely heavy the Shadows beyond our Circle seem
darker. Now deeper somehow Chris handed
me a flashlight. His hand, trembling slightly you
coming. I asked him.
He shook his head eyes, flickering toward the darkness.
Someone should stay here, just in case.
Nathan stood, instead flicking on his flash light Illuminating,
the patch of Dusty Earth between the fire and the Juniper
Thicket. I could see John's Footprints.
Clearly, they LED toward the trees straight into the
darkness. John, I called again.
Louder. This time again, silents.
We moved slowly forward flash, light beams carving thin
tunnels, through the blackness. Each step echoed painfully loud,
gravel crunching beneath our boots.
The Juniper Stan loomed ahead. Twisted branches starkly
silhouetted against the Stars. We reached the first juniper
tree. Its branches, reaching out
crookedly. I swept my flashlight around
catching movement just behind the trunk.
My pulse quickened. As I moved closer, Nathan just
behind me, breathing rapidly, John crouched, low hunched
behind the tree, his hands clawing frantically at the dirt.
His eyes were wide and unfocused fixed on something.
We couldn't see he murmured rapidly incoherently.
The word spilling out in a panicked stream.
John, Nathan reached out cautiously.
Hey man, what happened? John flinched violently jerking
away from Nathan's, touch continuing to whisper on
sensitively, his hands trembled, fingernails caked with dirt and
Blood. Let's get him back to Camp.
I said urgently together, we lifted John to his feet.
He moved like a man in a trance. I still staring past us towards
something in the darkness behind our backs.
My own skin crawled with Dread. As we carry him slowly back
toward the fire. John Suddenly stiffened his
voice. Trembling clearly through the
silence for the first time since we'd found him.
Its following us he whispered hoarsely.
Don't turn around, it's right there.
The walk back to Camp felt impossibly long.
John's weight pressed heavily against my shoulder.
His body shaking so violently I could feel it rattling through
my bones. Nathan's flashlight beam
bounced, chaotically ahead, Illuminating uneven, patches of
dirt and clusters of scrub brush.
None of us spoke but John's panicked, Whispers filled, the
silence. Hissing out between clenched
teeth. It's right behind us.
He repeated over and over voice. Barely audible strained with
fear. Don't look back.
I fought against every Instinct
in my body not to glance over my shoulder.
My grandfather had warned me many times growing up.
Never looked directly at certain things, especially when they're
watching you. The air felt thick and
oppressive pressing down like a weight.
I couldn't shake. Each step echoed loudly
painfully slow across the dirt. By the time, the firelight came
back into view, my heart felt ready to burst.
Chris and Devin stood anxiously waiting by the fire.
Chris was clutching a heavy stick like a club eyes wide and
alert Devin had retreated behind the truck watching us with
visible dread Is he okay? Chris asked shakily as we gently
lowered John to a folding chair near the fire, John curled
inward arms locked, tightly around himself eyes, fixed
somewhere beyond the darkness surrounding us.
His lips continued moving silently.
The sound. Now, just a faint hiss.
Ty brought him a blanket. Draping.
It around John's shoulders. I knelt down my voice low and
calm forcing steadiness. Despite the hammering in my
chest. John, I said quietly gripping
his shoulder. It's okay.
Now you're safe. Can you tell us what happened
out there? John's eyes flickered toward
Mine, haunted and distant. It was it was wearing something
wearing someone's face. The words chilled me straight
through, I felt Nathan recoil. Next to me breathing sharply, I
exchanged a silent glands with Chris, whose eyes had gone wide
with recognition. you mean, Chris began, softly then stopped
himself abruptly as if unwilling to speak the thought into
existence, The air shifted and a sudden foul odor.
Swept into Camp sharp and putrid, like, rotten meat baking
in the Desert Sun, I instinctively brought a hand to
my face. Trying to Shield myself from it
but the smell lingered thick and suffocating John gagged
violently his body convulsing as he hunched forward breathing
raggedly Did you hear that Devin whispered, suddenly his voice
thin and strained? What?
I asked trying to hide my own trembling.
Someone's breathing. He replied faintly backing
further behind the truck. His eyes darting wildly, right
behind us, over by the tents. Every muscle in my body tense,
as I strain to hear, they are there.
It was a slow raspy sound rhythmic.
Deliberate barely audible over the crackle of the fire.
My stomach churned. I'll go look, Ty said, abruptly
voice, firm with forced bravery. He grabbed a flash light and
moved cautiously toward the tents.
His silhouette elongated by firelight we watched in
terrified silence as he stepped further into the Shadows.
There's nothing. Tice started, then stopped
suddenly Flash. Light Beam shaking slightly.
Wait, what's that? Come back tie.
I said, sharply alarm rising in my voice.
Now He didn't move at first staring into the darkness
shoulders. Rigid with tension, then he
backed up slowly carefully returning to the fire eyes wide.
What did you see? Chris asked his voice hoarse Ty
shook his head, slowly unwilling to meet anyone's gaze.
I'm not sure something standing out near the trees look tall
watching us. My mouth went dry pulse
hammering painfully in my throat.
We had to leave. We had to get out now.
But something deep within me, resisted the idea of abandoning
this place not without understanding.
Exactly what had followed John back from the darkness.
Chris, I said urgently turning to him grab the Cedar and corn
pollen from my truck now. Kristen question me hurrying
toward the vehicle. I moved to John again, kneeling
to steady his shaking hands. He stared blankly passed me
eyes, wide and vacant Your safe here.
I lied softly hoping my voice sounded convincing enough for
both of us. We won't let it come closer.
John's eyes suddenly locked onto mine clearer than they had been.
Since we found him. His fingers gripped, my wrist
painfully Nails biting into my skin.
It's already here. He whispered voice, trembling
it. Followed us in.
Behind me, Chris dropped, the pouch of Cedar his hands shaking
as he stared past my shoulder eyes.
Fixed on something, just beyond the glow of the fire, a shadow,
flickered, briefly tall and slender moving fluidly between
the juniper trees. The breath Frozen, my chest and
I fought every impulse to turn and look directly at it.
Don't look at it. I warn the others harshly
forcing Authority into my voice, despite the terror burning
inside me. Whatever you do, don't look
directly at it. Nathan's breathing grew quick
and uneven Panic building visibly in his posture.
Devin, stood Frozen by the truck refusing to even glanced toward
the trees. Thai moved slowly closer, flash
light gripped, tightly eyes, wide, and locked onto the fire.
Trying to ignore the faint rustling of footsteps, just
beyond the perimeter of camp. A distance scream Rose suddenly
from somewhere in the darkness. Hi and piercing chilling, my
blood instantly. John shuttered violently
murmuring, something too low and frantic to understand.
The wind died, abruptly. Leaving a heavy oppressive
silence pressing down on us. I knew we had no choice but to
stay awake and alert until dawn. As I reached down to lift
another log onto the fire Nathan suddenly jolted upright eyes
wide with fear. What's wrong?
I asked sharply gripping his shoulder tightly.
Someone whispered my name, he replied voice shaking right
behind the tent. It sounded just like John, but
John hasn't moved. My eyes drifted involuntarily to
John's on moving figure, he sat curled tightly under the blanket
eyes. Unblinking whispering to
something only, he could see we settled into a terrified vigil.
Our bodies tense, adrenaline pulsing relentlessly. each sound
around us became magnified every rustle of leaves every distance,
snap of branches sparking renewed dread John's murmurs
Blended softly Into the Night, a quiet and persistent.
Reminder of the Unseen threats circling slowly silently.
Just beyond our sight. By the time Dawn broke
exhaustion clung heavily to my bones.
My eyes burned from staring into the darkness, afraid, to Blink,
afraid to let down my guard even for a second.
The first pale rays of sunlight spilled slowly across the
Horizon, bathing our camp and faint comforting warmth.
But there was no relief, just the heavy reality of what we'd
experienced settling uncomfortably into silence Among
Us. John had finally fallen asleep
just before Dawn. He lay curled awkwardly in the
bed of my truck. Still wrapped in blankets.
His breathing had settled into something steady, but I couldn't
shake the sense that something had broken in him during the
night, something deeper than fear.
I turned at the low Rumble of an approaching vehicle relief
washed over me as my grandfather's old faded blue.
Ford pickups slowly came into view down the dirt road trailing
dust in its wake. He parked beside my truck and
climbed out slowly his movements steady careful.
My grandfather said nothing at first, his weathered face
unreadable, but his eyes, scan the camp sharply absorbing every
detail without greeting us. He moved silently toward the
fire. Pit holding a small, Leather
Pouch in one hand and dried sage in the other.
He dropped herbs onto the fires dying Embers, breathing quietly
and steadily as smoke Rose in thin gray ribbons.
He began chanting softly, his words rhythmic low and
comforting echoing faintly against the dawn.
I felt Chris move closer beside me.
His shoulders rigid with tension, should we say
something? He whispered know, I said softly
eyes fixed on my grandfather's movements, let him work.
The wind shifted gently as my grandfather continued, his
ritual. The air around us seemed to
lighten just slightly as if a weight were gradually being
lifted. John Suddenly stirred in the
truck bed gasping sharply as if waking from a nightmare.
Ty quickly stepped over helping him, sit up, John stared around
wildly for a moment before. Focusing on the old man at the
fire. Slowly Clarity returned to his
eyes along with a haunted recognition.
My grandfather continued chanting gently tossing, pinches
of Cedar into the fire. The smoke thickening and
swirling upward After a few moments, he paused turning to me
with sharp. Penetrating eyes You should have
known better. He said simply his voice low but
firm. Shame flooded through me
instantly. I know.
I said quietly, I didn't think you brought Outsiders here.
He interrupted nodding slowly toward John and they mocked what
should never be mocked. John's face flushed painfully
and he lowered his gaze unable to meet my grandfather's stare.
Will it leave? I asked almost afraid to hear
his answer. It has no reason to stay.
He said, simply, but some wounds take time to heal.
Some never do. He glanced pointedly at John who
shivered. Visibly beneath the blanket.
You saw it. John hesitated, swallowing hard.
Then finally nodded slowly. It wore a face.
He whispered voice barely audible but the eyes were not
human. My grandfather, studied him
closely. Then turned and gently placed
another pinch of Cedar Into the Fire.
Resuming his quiet chanting. As the smoke Rose higher, I
watched carefully feeling the heaviness of the previous night
slowly beginning to lift replaced by something closer to
calm. Chris shifted uneasily next to
me his voice hushed last night I looked toward the ridge when
your grandfather said not to there was someone something
standing there tall and thin watching us watching me don't
say anything more. I cautioned quietly.
It's better if you don't speak of it.
He nodded grimly staring silently into the smoke.
Eventually my grandfather finished, his ceremony
carefully, tucking his pouch of Cedar and pollen back in to his
pocket. He walked slowly toward his
truck pausing only briefly to grip my shoulder.
Respect this land. He said, softly voice, heavy
with warning. Never forget what lives out
there and never invited closer. He climbed into his truck
without another word. The engine rumbling gently, as
he drove slowly away. Dust clouds, settling silently
behind him. We packed up camp quickly
afterward. Barely speaking as we loaded our
trucks, John sat silently in the passenger seat of Ty's vehicle
staring. Blankly out the window.
Whatever he'd seen had left a permanent Shadow behind his
eyes. Within days, John moved to
Albuquerque cutting off contact entirely.
He didn't return our calls, or texts.
Chris left shortly after catching a one-way flight to
Oregon and we heard nothing more from him either.
Ty and Nathan stayed closer, but we never spoke openly about that
night. Again months passed.
Before I saw Nathan again, bumping into him outside a
grocery store in Window Rock. We stood awkwardly for a moment
silence hanging heavy between us.
You good. He asked eventually his voice
hesitant. I nodded slowly eyes meeting his
you. Better.
Now he admitted quietly, it still follows me some nights but
your grandfather helped. I've learned not to look back.
I reached into my pocket, pulling out a small pouch of Ash
and Paul in my grandfather had given me weeks before.
Take this. I said softly handing it to him.
Keep it with you. He nodded solemnly slipping it
into his jacket pocket that night.
I finally, slept soundly, the quiet Assurance of my
grandfather's protection, easing, some of the dread that
had lingered But the warning stayed clear in my mind.
A heavy truth rooted in generations of stories passed
down, respect the land and never speak lightly of the things that
move quietly in the dark. The Arizona strip has always
been a special place for serious Hunters, including guys like me
and my buddy Jace. It's a remote isolated stretch
of wilderness north of the Grand Canyon an area known for big
mule deer and harsh country. We'd been hunting together since
high school. And we were rookies, we'd spent
weeks planning. This hunt after we'd secured
written permission to hunt near Mount Trumbull in Chi, Bob
National Forest, A friend told us about an old Ranger Shack.
We could use as a base camp and we jumped at the chance.
Free accommodations in Prime, mule deer territory, sounded too
good to pass up. The road from Cedar City down to
the Arizona strip was bone jarring and rugged, but my
Tacoma was built for exactly this kind of terrain.
We left town, early fueled up and cruise through hurricane in
Colorado City before, hitting the dirt roads, leading into
Kaibab National Forest. The farther, we drove the more
remote, it felt no towns, no houses, just endless, Juniper
Sagebrush and red dirt, stretching in every direction.
Jace checked, the coordinates on his handheld, GPS.
And finally, pointed down a faded, two track leading deeper
into the trees. This should be it, he said, and
we bounced along for another 20 minutes before we saw it, a
squat rundown structure tucked between the junipers.
The Shack looked forgotten by time itself.
It had rough log walls and a corrugated metal roof.
Rusted and dented with a stovepipe, poking crookedly from
the top looks cozy. Jay said, sarcastically as we
parked I laughed and grabbed my gear inside the air smelled,
musty and stale. Dust floated in beams of fading
sunlight coming through cracks in the walls.
There was a busted cot frame in one corner, an ancient wood
stove and another and in the middle a small wooden table with
two mismatched chairs. It wasn't luxurious, but it
beats sleeping in a tent. Check this out.
Jay said pointing toward the far window, I moved closer and
noticed that the boards nailed, over the broken pane were
charred around the edges. Like they'd survived a quick hot
burn. Probably just someone being dumb
and lighting a campfire in here. I Shrugged.
Yeah, but why boarded up from the inside Jace frowned.
He looked uneasy for a second but shook it off, whatever.
Let's get some sleep, we're glassing for deer first thing.
We cooked a quick dinner on our propane stove, the smell of
canned stewing the small room. Darkness fell quickly outside
and a deep. Unsettling silence seemed to
fall over the woods. Usually we'd hear coyotes or at
least insects, but tonight the forest felt empty after eating,
we zip ties our sleeping bags and settled in for the night
rifle's within easy reach, just out of habit.
I don't know how long I'd been asleep.
When something jolted me away a heavy solid, thud on the roof.
My heart instantly, slammed against my ribs.
Adrenaline, flooding, through me beside me.
I heard, Jay stir Whispering harshly.
You hear that? Yeah, I whispered back, probably
a cougar jumping onto the roof, we sat perfectly still rifles in
hand. Another thud came harder heavier
than before than silence, my pulse roared, in my ears.
As I strain to listen, the silence stretched out painfully
and I had just begun to relax when a different sound filled
the shack a slow, deliberate scratching against the front
door. It wasn't frantic like an animal
desperate to get in. It was measured careful and
deliberate. I glanced over at Jace.
His eyes wide in the Darkness. Cougar.
He mouths silently. I shook my head.
Unsure cougars don't call me scratch doors.
Not like this. I inched toward the door and
stood with my rifle ready. Every muscle in my body tense,
waiting for whatever came next. Then, as abruptly as it started,
the scratching stopped. We waited for minutes.
Barely breathing ears. Straining to hear anything
outside. Finally unable to handle the
tension. I cracked the door.
Open slowly aiming, my flashlight and rifle into the
Blackness, nothing, no tracks, no eyeshine, nothing but empty
Darkness, stretching endlessly into the trees.
The forest Stood Still eerily, quiet and empty.
I shut the door again pushing an old wooden chair in front of it,
for good, measure. J said nothing but I could see
the uneasy questions in his eyes.
Neither of us slept again that night.
We sat silently rifles, close counting down the hours until
dawn broke through the cracks in the walls.
When morning finally came the first faint grey Light breaking
through gaps. In the laws we stepped outside
cautiously I circled around the shack scanning the ground
carefully looking for paw prints or drag marks.
Jace walked beside me silently rifle.
Slung Loosely over his shoulder, his head down, as he studied the
dirt. But there was nothing.
No Disturbed Earth, no claw marks, no Footprints, it was as
if whatever had come around last night, had simply vanished Into
Thin Air. Maybe we imagined it.
Jason said, half-heartedly kicking at a dry.
Juniper branch. You and I both know, we didn't I
replied quietly? something was up there something
heavy We decided to inspect the shack again in daylight inside
everything looked exactly as we'd left it.
I approached the boarded-up window.
The same one we'd noticed the night before.
Something caught my attention, something that made the hair
rise on my neck. Jace.
Come. Look at this.
He stepped close following my gaze along the inner window.
Ledge beneath the boards. Three deep scratches cut
vertically into the wood. They were not thin lines or
shallow grooves. They were gouged deep into the
timber clearly. Fresh Splinter's still curled
upward. What the hell?
Jace muttered voice suddenly quiet?
How's that even possible? Those boards have been moved.
I felt a cold. Wait settle into my stomach.
He was right. Nothing had moved those boards.
They were nailed solidly from the inside yet.
Here we were staring at three claw marks, two, large and two
deep to belong to a cougar or any animal I'd ever seen.
I don't like this. Jason said, flatly will hunt
today but maybe we leave tonight.
I said trying to sound steady, even though my voice betrayed,
my nerves, I don't want another night like that Jason nodded
slowly. We spent the day hiking a nearby
Ridge glassing for mule deer. The sun was bright but a strange
Stillness hung over the forest. No birds called.
No squirrels scrambled through the junipers just silence and
empty. Are it felt unnatural
oppressive? We saw nothing move.
Nothing worth chasing. The whole Forest seemed empty
devoid of life. The day passed with
uncomfortable silence between us, both of us, felt unsettled
weary jumping at every cracking twig or rustling leaf.
By the time evening came, neither of us mentioned staying
another night. We packed our gear quickly and
loaded most of it into the Tacoma, determined to get out
before the darkness returned. But as the sun dropped behind
the Horizon, the Shadows seemed to grow dense and threatening
around the shack. It felt colder as if something
heavy and unseen had settled around us.
We just thrown the last of our packs into the truck bed, when
the first heavy thud echoed from the roof.
Again, louder, and harder than the night before.
Jace spun toward me eyes wide face pale.
Let's go now, he hissed urgently, I didn't hesitate.
We both moved swiftly toward the truck, but before we reach the
doors, a slow metallic. Tapping rang out like claws on
tin from the stovepipe protruding above the shack.
It was deliberate almost rhythmic, and I felt Panic
creeping into my chest. Whatever was here knew exactly
where we were and it wasn't afraid instinctively.
I raised my rifle and swept the flashlight beam across the trees
behind us. The pale beam bounced wildly
before catching something standing, half, hidden behind a
twisted, juniper 20 yards away, my breath caught sharply and my
throat. It wasn't a cougar or a bear or
anything I'd ever encountered before.
The figure was pale and hunched, unnaturally, lean and sinewy,
its limbs Twisted, awkwardly Benton ways that didn't seem
natural it stood upright. But moved with a jerky
unsettling gate slipping, from tree to tree, it's pale flesh,
reflecting dully in the flash light beam.
Get in the truck. I whispered Horsley, as I spoke
the creature stepped forward emerging just enough to clearly
see it was hairless, almost white with elongated Limbs and
ending in Long bony fingers. It's stared at a silently from
sunken black eyes that reflected no light, Jace.
Swung around saw it too and gasped sharply, we both backed
quickly to the truck doors rifles raised defensively, but
the figure moved again faster. This time disappearing into the
Shadows. For a long moment.
The forest was dead quiet again. Then we heard a shuffling sound
footsteps, crunching leaves and snapping Twigs behind the truck.
Moving deliberately toward the trail.
We'd taken in Its blocking the way out.
Jace said his voice strained not for long.
I replied get in. We threw ourselves into the
truck. I slammed it into reverse dirt
flying. As we bounced roughly backward,
down the trail headlights, Illuminating only the narrow
track behind us. Branches clawed at the windows,
scraping loudly against the truck but we didn't stop or look
back. All we could think about was
escape and the pale thing watching silently from the
darkness. The truck lurched violently as
we backed down the narrow rutted Trail.
Branches scraped harshly against the side mirrors and rocks.
Thumped loudly beneath the chassis, but neither of us even
considered slowing down. My heart hammered relentlessly
in my chest. I grip the wheel Knuckles white.
While Jace stared out the back window rifle.
Clutched, tightly in both hands, scanning the darkness behind us.
Keep going Jace urged, don't stop man.
The headlights. Barely illuminated the rough
path behind us throwing distorted Shadows onto junipers
and brush every Twisted. Branch looked like reaching
limbs every shadow shifted unnaturally under our frantic
movements. Finally after what felt like
hours, but was probably only minutes, we reached a wider dirt
road. I spun the wheel sharply, whip
the Tacoma around, slammed it, into drive and hit the
accelerator hard. Gravel flew from beneath the
tires dust billowing behind us as we sped toward for Tonya,
neither of us. Spoke for Miles, we were both
Breathing heavily Minds racing adrenaline still pumping.
The empty Highway offered little comfort.
It was a long silent ride back in to town.
We reached for Fredonia sometime around 3 in the morning
exhausted and rattled. We pulled into a gas station
parking lot under harsh fluorescent lights.
I killed the engine but neither of us moved for a moment.
Finally, Jace. Broke the silence.
What the hell was that thing? I shook my head.
Slowly still gripping the steering wheel.
I have no idea man, but whatever it was it's not something I ever
want to see again. We spent the rest of the night
in the truck catching scattered sleep as Dawn, crept Over the
Horizon. When morning finally came, we
stumbled into a diner seeking strong coffee and some sense of
normalcy, we sat at a booth pale quietly, touching our food and
older man at the counter, wearing a worn, flannel jacket
and Faded jeans, Ida's carefully.
Before finally, approaching you fell as look like, you've seen
something rough, he said, leaning on the edge of our
table. Rough, doesn't begin to cover
it. I muttered exchanging a glance
with Jace. Where were you hunting?
The man asked sipping. His coffee casually up near
Mount Trumbull. I answered quietly. we stayed in
this old Ranger Shack, just east of before I could finish the old
man's expression shifted sharply you stayed where An old Ranger
Shack. Chase repeated cautiously out by
Mount Trumbull. He stared at us both with
disbelief. Boys that Shack burned down
years ago, back in the 80s. Ain't nothing left up there, but
ashes in Old stories. You sure you're talking about
the same place. I felt the blood drain from my
face. My mouth was suddenly dry throat
tight. No way we stayed in it.
Slept there cooked dinner on the table.
He shook his head slowly expression, Grim know you didn't
nobody's used that Shack in decades that fire, gutted it
down to the foundation, everybody knows better than to
camp near there anyway. Jace stared at me eyes.
Wide silently begging me to argue.
But I had nothing to say, we'd both stood inside that Shack.
Felt the Warped wood beneath our boots.
Saw The Shard boards over the window.
But now doubt was creeping into my mind, twisting everything, I
believe just moments ago. Weeks passed, but neither of us
could shake the experience. Finally, after several sleepless
nights. We agreed to return to the shack
One. Last Time, needing closure more
than answers. This time we brought our friend
Ben and his GPS. The drive back into Chi Bob was
10ths silent anxiety. Twisting in my stomach.
With every mile when we arrived my chest tightened painfully,
The Shack stood right, where we remembered but it looked
different. Now, the logs were weathered and
gray Untouched by fire. The windows were perfectly
intact unbroken and onboarded A rusted padlock sealed.
The door clearly undisturbed for years.
There were no tire tracks. No, boot prints.
No sign we'd ever been there. No way.
Jace whispered stepping back on easily been walked around.
The shack twice shaking his head.
This place has been locked up tight forever, guys.
You sure you're not confusing it with somewhere else.
I didn't answer there was nothing to say.
We both knew this was the place we'd run from in Terror.
Just weeks early years yet somehow impossibly it stood here
sealed and untouched. We left without another word.
It was the last time either Jace, or I hunted in Arizona.
We didn't speak about it again, but I still think about it often
at night, lying awake staring at the ceiling.
I hear those heavy thuds, one after another always three in a
row slow and deliberate coming from somewhere above.
I hadn't been back to Shiprock in nearly 10 years.
It wasn't something I'd planned life in Albuquerque.
Just sort of swept me away from my roots.
Slowly replacing memories of the reservation with city noise and
traffic lights. My grandmother Doshi would often
call and gently nudge me about visiting, but I'd always find an
excuse work. Life obligations The truth was
something always held me back something I could never quite
explained. But now, here, I was rolling
down, Dusty Highway, 491 with Emily in the passenger seat.
Her camera already poised in her lap.
She was excited. Her smile was bright and eager,
her blue eyes sparkling with curiosity.
She had insisted on this trip for months, determined to
finally meet my family and see the land.
I came from We passed small clusters of houses along the
highway single wide trailer and cinder block homes.
All coated in the persistent, Rusty film of desert dust.
Emily took it all in quietly. I stole glances at her trying to
read what she thought of this Stark place.
That was so different from her own upbringing in Oregon.
Shiprock Peak Rose abruptly from The Horizon as we turned off
toward the reservation. It's Jagged silhouette stabbed
into the sky dark and imposing against the soft glow of late
afternoon. Seeing it again.
Brought back old feelings. Once I buried years ago.
Awe mixed with something heavier, something
uncomfortable. That's it.
I murmured nodding toward the monolith.
Emily leaned forward, eyes wide. Wow, pictures.
Really don't do it justice. It feels different, seeing it in
person. It's sacred to our people.
I explained my voice quieter than I meant it to be.
We call it the rock with wings. It's an ancient volcanic plug.
No one's supposed to climb or get to close.
She nodded slowly still staring at the formation.
It's beautiful. It's beautiful, beautiful and
dangerous. I added feeling the tension,
tighten, my throat things, happen around here.
Sometimes strange things she turned to me, eyebrows raised,
clearly intrigued strange. Like what I shook my head
slightly? Nothing, just old stories.
We arrived at my grandmother's home, just before sunset.
The small house isolated at the end of a Dusty dirt road was
exactly as I remembered it. Blue, curtains peeling, white
paint, the smell of sage and Juniper smoke.
When she stepped outside. Her gray hair tied.
Neatly behind her head. She smiled and hugged me patting
my back with frail but strong hands, she whispered softly
welcoming me home. then she turned toward Emily, her warm
eyes, flickered, briefly with something cautious before she
embraced her gently Welcome. Dinner was still fry bread and
quiet conversation. Emily asked questions polite and
curious about our family history, the old ways and
traditions. My grandmother answered kindly,
but carefully never revealing too much.
When the meal ended, she caught my eye across the table.
Stay close to the house after dark.
She said, softly, barely louder than a whisper.
Her eyes moved to Emily. Then back to me, it's safer.
Emily glanced at me. Her curiosity visibly stirred
but said nothing later alone in the bedroom where I had grown
up, Emily quietly, examined faded pictures on the wall.
Finally picking up one tucked behind an old dresser.
It was me around 8 or 9:00 standing near the peak.
The corner of the photograph was blackened curled, as if it had
touched fire. What happened here?
She asked handing it to me. I took the photo staring down at
the young boy in it feeling a chill slowly run down my spine.
Nothing. Probably got too close to a
candle or something. I said it back down.
Quickly, feeling uneasy. She watched me unconvinced.
But silent when morning came Emily's curiosity about
Shiprock, Peak was stronger than ever.
Over breakfast. She finally asked, can we go out
there later? Just close enough for pictures?
I hesitated my grandmother's warnings echoing in my mind we
shouldn't Emily tilted. Her head we won't get close I
promise I just want to see it at Sunset.
You grew up here. It's part of you.
I just want to understand against my better judgment.
I finally agreed. After all, maybe I was letting
childhood fears haunt me. Maybe returning as an adult
would finally put old superstitions to rest.
Late in the day, we drove out along the empty Highway and
parked in a gravel turnout as the sun slipped lower Shadows
stretched long across the red Earth.
Emily grabbed her camera. Eager and smiling already
framing shots in her mind. We followed a narrow dirt path,
just a short distance from the car moving slowly toward a
better vantage point, the air grew still silent.
Even the gentle breeze stopped as I looked at Shiprock, Peak
lumine overhead, my pulse quickened old Instinct stirred.
Every nerve suddenly on edge. I took a breath, steadying
myself. Is this far enough?
I asked turning back to Emily. She wasn't looking at me,
instead she stared toward a distant Ridge, eyes wide, Frozen
in place. Did you just call my name?
She whispered barely audible know.
My voice sounded Hollow in the Stillness.
Her face pale as she slowly turned toward me.
Her eyes, moved beyond my shoulder widening in confusion,
that fear. I turned to follow her gaze,
standing Atop The nearby Ridge silhouetted against the fiery,
sunset stood, a figure, my heart, slammed against my chest
as recognition sent a shockwave through me.
It was me an exact image of myself wearing clothes.
I didn't own staring back with dead eyes, the breath caught in
my throat, every story I dismissed rushed back to life in
that instant Emily. I said slowly carefully don't
move. I stared at the figure on the
ridge. Feeling my pulse Hammer,
violently beneath my skin. It was impossible, completely
impossible but the man standing there framed in the fading
Sunset was undeniably me my height, my build my face.
He was perfectly still unblinking watching us intently
Tyrell. Emily whispered her voice tight
with fear who, who is that? I struggled to respond.
My throat felt dry, constricted. All my grandmother's stories
rushed back, Tails. I dismissed for years as
folklore and Superstition. But now those stories fell
dangerously. Real two, real Emily.
I managed quietly Don't Take Your Eyes Off me.
Stay closed. Then she tends to beside me eyes
wide with confusion you. You called my name just now,
didn't you? Know I said firmly, I didn't say
anything. Emily's breathing, quickened
Panic creeping into her expression.
We both turned slowly back toward the ridge.
The figure hadn't moved, but it felt closer, somehow more
present. It stared at us.
Expressionless it wasn't just identical.
It was exact down to the small scarf beneath my left eye.
Suddenly the figure tilted its head slightly like it was
studying us Emily shuddered visibly gripping my arm tightly.
Tyrell, please. Let's go.
She said, softly tugging gently at my sleeve.
Slowly I replied keep facing it. Don't run not yet.
We stepped back cautiously, keeping the figure in our line
of sight. But as we moved, so did it
matching each step perfectly. The synchronicity was chilling.
A grotesque mirror reflection. Then it moved forward, coming
down the ridge steps, stiff and unnatural limbs slightly rigid,
as if unused to motion. My heart pounded harder, every
Instinct screaming at me to get away to escape.
Tyrell Emily whispered voice shaking.
Wait, I murmured my eyes locked onto the approaching shape.
I reached slowly into my pocket fingers, trembling and pulled
out a small Leather Pouch filled with corn pollen.
Something my grandmother had quietly slipped into my hand as
we left. At the time, I had an understood
why the figure stopped abruptly, its eyes narrowing fixated on
the pouch. It's expression shifted,
becoming less familiar, less human Emily.
When I tell you, I whispered urgently turn around and run to
the car, don't look back. No matter what you hear, do, you
understand? She hesitated eyes wide with
fear. What are you trust me?
I interrupted just run without warning the figure suddenly
called out Emily's name in a perfect imitation of my voice, a
sound, that made my stomach. Turn violently Emily run.
I shouted she spun on her heel and bolted back toward the car
feet pounding against the dirt immediately, the figure lunged
forward, its eyes fixed solely on me now, I open the pouch
desperately tossing, corn pollen into the air, as I shouted, an
old Navajo protection. Chant My Grandmother Had taught
me years ago. The figure froze mid-step its
face contorting and sudden rage an ugly guttal cry tore from its
throat. A sound unlike anything human
heart, hammering, Iran legs burning.
As I sprinted after Emily toward the distant shape of our car, I
could hear the footsteps behind me now, heavier rapid gaining
quickly, my lungs ached and adrenaline surged through me as
the distance closed. Emily reached the car, first
frantically yanking, open the door and scrambling inside, She
screamed my name. Again desperation.
Sharpen her voice. I pushed forward feeling the
figure just steps behind. I threw myself into the driver's
seat, slammed the door shut and locked.
It just as the figure reached the vehicle, it stood motionless
outside the window watching. Me closely features twisted and
unsettling familiarity. Its lips slowly curled into an
unnatural cruel smile, a smile. I'd never worn in my life.
It raised a hand slowly Palm pressed flat against the glass
fingers, stretching out rigidly silently demanding entry.
I started the engine tires, spinning wildly on the loose
gravel. As we shot forward, Emily was
trembling curled against the passenger.
Door staring blankly ahead. We sped away from Shiprock,
pique, leaving the dark Silhouettes, standing in the
dust watching silently until it vanished from view in the fading
dust. We drove in complete silence.
The only sounds, the hum of the tires against asphalt and are
uneven breathing. Emily stared out, the passenger
window armed tightly around herself.
Her skin had lost all color. Pale beneath, the Moonlight eyes
Hollow in distant. When we finally reached my
grandmother's home, every muscle in my body ached from tension.
I parked the car and sat quietly for a moment.
My hand still gripping the steering wheel, so tightly, they
trembled. Tyrell Emily.
Finally whispered her voice fragile, barely audible.
What was that thing? I turned to her slowly searching
for words that wouldn't terrify her further.
But none came instead I reached out gently squeezing her hand
trying to reassure her, even though my own heartbeat refused
to slow, we'll find out. I finally said opening my door.
My grandmother was already waiting on the porch.
Her eyes sharp alert. Her expression told me she
already understood more than I could ever explain.
Without a word she waved us inside.
Once we stepped into the small house, she immediately closed
the door behind us and motioned toward the living room.
A small bowl of juniper leaves. And dried Sage rested on the
coffee table. Alongside a cluster of turquoise
stones. She'd known, we would need
protection even before we did. Sit down, she instructed quietly
voice, calm yet, commanding Emily obeyed, instantly sinking
into the warned so far. I stood nervously near her
unable to stop pacing. My grandmother took the Juniper
and Sage lighting them carefully, the soft smoke
drifting around us in a protective Haze.
She began to chant softly, her voice low rhythmic calming my
racing thoughts as the ritual progressed my heartbeat.
Finally, slowed, my breath easing back into a steady
rhythm. After a long silence, my
grandmother stopped chanting. Looking directly at me eyes,
filled with quiet sorrow. Tell me exactly what happened.
She said firmly her gaze. Never leaving mine.
I recounted everything. Emily hearing my voice called
her name. The figure identical to me
appearing on the ridge, the corn pollen, and the terrible cry at
made as we fled Emily shuttered, beside me as I described the
twisted smile, the way it watched us drive away.
My grandmother remained perfectly still absorbing every
word. It's come back.
She finally murmured. Her eyes, darkening with quiet
dread. Items.
You What do you mean? I asked heart sinking. she
sighed deeply looking suddenly weary When you were a boy you
disappeared one evening. It was near Shiprock, just like
tonight. We searched for hours, afraid.
We lost you for good and then you came walking back into the
yard, just before midnight, but you weren't right.
Your eyes were blank like you didn't know us.
You wore clothes. We'd never seen you spoke words
that didn't sound human. Emily looked up, sharply visibly
shaken, what happened? My grandmother turned slowly
toward her expression on readable.
We did this same ritual, the smoke, the sage, the corn
pollen, Eventually the real Tyrel returned to us, but the
thing that took him for those few hours, it never forgot him.
It wore your skin. Once she said, quietly turning
back to me voice, heavy with sorrow tonight.
It wanted it again. A chill ran through me, settling
deep into my bones. Emily reached for my hand, her
fingers, trembling against mine. Will it follow us?
She asked voice barely above a whisper.
My grandmother shook her head slowly.
It lives only in places where its name has power here.
It walks freely away from Shiprock at weekends but it
never fully forgets She leaned closer, her voice dropping even
lower. You can never come back here
again. If you do it will find you.
Emily's grip on my hand tightened, sharply her eyes met
mine, full of quiet resolve and understanding neither of us
spoke. There was nothing left to say.
The next morning, we packed our bags quickly silently.
My grandmother stood on the porch her face Serene though
sadness, lingard deep. In her eyes.
I hugged her tightly Whispering, my goodbyes.
She whispered softly back. Cautioning me one last time.
Be careful, she said touching my cheek gently, never let it see
your reflection. Never say its name.
We drove away from Shiprock under grace Skies.
My heart heavy carrying the quiet truth of what had
happened. Emily never asked to return,
never spoke of the reservation again.
We moved, North settling far away in Oregon a place where
desert and dust became Distant Memories.
Still years. Later, even after our lives, had
found their quiet rhythm again. I kept mirrors turned toward the
walls, never fully meeting my own gaze.
Because I knew the truth, my grandmother never had to say
allowed again. It had worn my skin once and it
would never stop watching. My dad had always been a quiet
man. The type who'd rather drive 18
hours straight than talk about his feelings for 10 minutes.
But Silence has a funny way of stretching distance between
people and after my parents split that distance grew.
A year passed then five. Eventually I realized I hardly
knew him anymore. When he asked me to join him on
a camping trip near the lukachukai mountains, I figured
it was his attempt to bridge the gap.
It felt like an overdue apology wrapped in an invitation so
despite my reservations, I agreed.
Dad whose real name was James but who'd always gone by Jimmy
had driven long-haul trucks most of his life.
He was familiar with nearly every Dusty back road from
Gallup to Tuba City. Every shortcut through the
Navajo Nation. But one route always stuck out
to him. Highway 13.
Winding through the Luca chukai range.
He told me strange stories about something that followed him.
Along, that lonely, stretch, something he called Dark.
I'd always dismissed these as Tall.
Tales born from sleepless nights, and the endless monotony
of the road. We arrived late in the afternoon
at our campsite, an isolated spot along.
A dry wash off a neglected forest service road, The place
felt empty hollowed out a patch of barren.
Earth, marked by cracked sediment in a few stubborn
junipers. Dad glanced at the tree line,
every few seconds, as if expecting someone or something
to step out and greet us. I pretended not to notice.
Rusty my dad's. German Shepherd was probably the
happiest of us. He bounded around the wash
sniffing the dry ground, seemingly oblivious to Dad's
unease or my skepticism. As dusk closed in, we set up
camp, pitching a tent and building a small fire.
We ate canned chili and bread rolls and silence finally, after
the sun disappeared behind the distant Ridge.
Dad spoke up. You know Evan he began quietly
staring into the fire. I haven't been here in 30 years
I nodded waiting. I drove through here all the
time, but after one trip I swore I'd never come back.
I glanced at him eyebrows raised.
Why? Dad shifted on easily stirring
Embers with a stick. There was something on the road,
followed me from here, clear? To the other side of the range,
like an animal, he shook his head, slowly eyes still fixed on
the Flames. No animals.
Don't stay behind your truck for Miles without getting closer.
They don't walk upright. Either I laughed softly.
Assuming he was joking or exaggerating for effect, but his
serious expression, never wavered Dad.
Come on. I finally said it was probably
just Shadows headlights, bouncing off, rocks.
You'd been driving too long. He didn't respond.
Only shook his head again, eyes, Hollow Rusty, suddenly stops,
sniffing the ground and froze. Ears pointed toward the wash.
His hackles Rose in a low, growl rumbled, deep in his throat
Rusty, I called gently leaning forward, the dog ignored me.
His attention locked onto something beyond our circle of
firelight without warning Rusty bolted barking.
Wildly as he disappeared into the darkness of the wash, Rusty
dad shouted rising from his chair.
I followed peering uselessly into the Blackness.
Rusty is barking faded. Quickly, swallowed by the dense
silence. We should go after him.
I suggested nervously. Dad's hand gripped.
My shoulder tightly stopping me. Wait, he whispered, wait, wait
here. Minutes crawled by becoming an
hour then too. We called Rusty's name,
periodically, but received only silence in return eventually.
I convinced dad to sit again, promising, we'd search at first
light. I could tell he wasn't convinced
but he reluctantly agreed. Around 2:30 in the morning.
Just as I was dozing off a shape appeared at the edge of the
fire's glow. My heart left Rusty, had
returned. I Rose quickly relieved.
Hey boy. Come here.
I called Softly. Rusty, didn't move, he stood
there. Perfectly still eyes.
Fixed blankly on us. Rusty.
Dad whispered beside me, something's wrong.
I looked closer chills creeping up my spine.
Dad was right. The dog's eyes were dark
utterly, dark absorbing the firelight in stead of reflecting
it. There was no familiar shine, no
sign of life. Then movement caught my
attention behind Rusty, another shape emerged slowly from the
wash my throat tightened, as I recognized Rusty.
Again, this time limping badly, fur matted with blood eyes, wide
and terrified dad. I started voice shaking.
What the hell? The dog at the edge of our
campfire? Slowly turned its head toward
the wounded Rusty. Then without a sound walked
backward into the darkness. Vanishing completely from view,
I rushed forward dropping to my knees as the injured dog
collapsed against me whining. Weakly Dad approached slowly his
eyes fixed on the empty place, where the other Rusty had stood.
We need to leave. He said voice, trembling
slightly right now. I looked up at him stunned and
frightened beyond words. For the first time I saw
absolute certainty in his eyes, certainty that every strange
story he'd ever told me about these mountains had been true.
My heart was hammering. So loudly in my chest that it
drowned out every other sound around me.
The wounded Rusty Lake hurled beside the fire whimpering
Softly As I cleaned his wounds with shaking hands.
Dad had moved swiftly dismantling, our camp with a
speed and intensity I hadn't seen from him in decades.
We have to go. He repeated sharply stuffing
gear into his backpack. His voice was different now,
stripped of The Quiet uncertainty that defined him.
We can't stay here. I wrapped a bandage around
Rusty's hind leg doing my best to Steady My Breath.
The thought of that thing wearing Rusty's face made bile
rise in my throat. I shook my head trying to banish
the image. What the hell was that?
I finally whispered barely recognizing my own voice.
Dad didn't pause, he slung the backpack over his shoulder,
checking his pockets, for his keys and knife.
It's what I warned you about the thing that followed me on the
road years ago, I stared blankly at him.
My skepticism crushed under the weight of the horror, we just
witnessed But what is it? He glanced around the edge of
the firelight avoiding my eyes. I don't know exactly just
stories warning from the elders. They say it copies things
animals people, it wears faces. My shivered, involuntarily
glancing toward the darkness, beyond the firelight copies.
Why Dad shook his head grimly to get clothes before?
I could question him further, he started walking cautiously
toward the dry wash where we'd seen the fake Rusty vanish.
Reluctantly. I left the real Rusty resting
near the fire and followed carrying a small flashlight and
Dad's heavy hunting knife. We stopped at the edge of the
wash there. In the pale sand was a perfectly
round hole burned as if by intense heat clean Edge and
unnatural dad pointed at the hole with a shaking finger.
This is an right. I knelt carefully examining the
whole more closely. There were no Footprints no drag
marks. Nothing just that unsettling.
Perfect. Circle burned deep into the
Earth. Have you ever seen anything like
this? I asked quietly.
Dad shook his head again, never, but the Elder said it leaves
marks signs. Like it's reminding us.
It's here. A sudden cry echoed from deep
within the wash low and drawn out.
It didn't sound human or animal, just wrong.
It reverberated around us hanging in the air, oppressive
and thick dad's eyes widened in panic.
It knows we saw it. He said, quietly, grabbing my
arm, we need to move now. We returned quickly to the
campfire where Rusty struggled to his feet with a pained wine.
Dad carefully lifted the dog into his arms, holding him
protectively. I shouldered our remaining gear
extinguishing. The fire quickly with sand.
Within moments, we were stumbling down the rocky path
that led away from the campsite following only the narrow beam
of our headlamps. as we hiked deeper into the trees, the
oppressive silence around us, grew heavier, I kept glancing
nervously at the Ridgeline convinced something was pacing
alongside us shadowing our steps.
I'd catch flickers of movement from the corner of my eyes,
something tall, and lean just out of Clear Sight.
Then came the sound subtle at first.
A snapshot twig here, a rustle of branches there, but then
growing closer more frequent, it mirrored, our Pace always just
behind or ahead of us. It's copying us.
Dad whispered, confirming my fears, his face was pale
intense. In the weak, glow of the
headlamp don't stop moving. Rusty wins, softly and Dad's
arms. Since our fear, my stomach
Twisted with guilt at bringing the dog out here of dismissing,
dad's warnings as superstition. I clenched the knife tighter
determined to protect my father, our dog from whatever stalked
us. We crested a small rise in the
path pausing briefly to catch our breath.
My eyes were drawn back toward the wash below, illuminated
dimly in the Moonlight. My pulse froze.
Something was crouched down there in the middle of the dry,
riverbed. The shape was hunched thin with
elongated arms that reached toward the ground.
Its head tilted sideways as if broken.
Even from a distance, I could sense.
Its eyes locked onto mine. Dad, I choked out unable to
move. Dad, followed my gaze.
His face turning white. As he saw it.
He grabbed my arm sharply pulling me forward.
Breaking my paralysis, don't look at it.
He hissed voice shaking with panic.
Just keep walking. I forced myself to look away.
Stumbling forward breathing ragged skin crawling with the
knowledge that the things eyes were still upon us.
And then behind us through the heavy Stillness.
I Heard a Voice clear and familiar my voice Dad.
Wait, I stopped cold my body rigid with Terror.
It was mimicking me but with something horribly wrong in the
tone. A slight Distortion, a hollow
emptiness that drained the blood from my limbs.
Dad, squeezed my arm his grip like steel.
He spoke through clenched teeth. Keep moving it wants you to
stop. Don't listen.
We pressed forward again quicker.
Now, stumbling through the darkness.
The beam of my headlamp shaking as Panic.
Overtook reason, my own voice echoed again from behind quieter
this time. A mocking whisper that crept
along the forest floor, don't leave me here.
Dad, I clenched my jaw and kept walking fighting the
overwhelming urge to look back. Dawn began to break filtering
dim gray light through the dense trees.
We'd been walking nearly nonstop for hours, exhaustion and fear
mixing into a numb mechanical marks.
Rusty was quiet in my father's arms, now his breathing shallow,
but steady. My legs ached with each step,
but every time I thought about stopping the memory of that
thing. Crouched in the dry washed,
drove me, onward, almost there, dad murmured.
Softly his voice raw from hours of Silence.
His eyes never stopped scanning the Shadows around us as if
expecting the creature to reappear at any moment.
The forest felt different now unnaturally quiet.
Empty like everything else had fled long ago, leaving only the
three of us and whatever lurked unseen in the distance.
Finally after cresting a small rise relief, surged, through my
veins at the sight of the familiar dirt parking area
ahead. The Battered outline of Dad's
old trucks, stood waiting at the edge of the service road.
And for the first time in hours, I felt hope stir inside me.
But the feeling quickly faded, as we drew closer, my chest
tightened the windshield was cracked spider.
Webbed from some heavy impact. The hood was marred with deep
scratches Jagged uneven gouges that stretched from the grill to
the windshield. My steps faltered my heart
pounding faster again Dad. I said weakly pointing toward
the damage. He stared silently.
Then quickened his Pace walking around the truck examining every
angle. His expression grew darker with
each step. It followed us here.
He said, quietly placing Rusty gently in the truck bed.
The dog whimpered softly, but stayed curled.
Where dads set him. I moved closer dread pooling in
my stomach as I studied the scratches on the hood.
These weren't claw marks like any animal.
I knew they were deep. Deliberate as if something
powerful had gripped. The metal pulling itself onto
the truck a chill settled into my bones.
As I imagined that thing leaning over the hood.
It's unnatural shape silhouetted against the night.
Then my eyes landed on something worse.
There, smeared clearly against the cracked.
Windshield was a handprint. I moved closer inspecting it
closely, my throat tightened painfully, the print was too,
large, the fingers elongated, thin and spindly.
And there was an extra digit bent and twisted.
Dad moved beside me, his breath hitching, as he saw, the prince.
For a long moment. Neither of us.
Spoke just stared at the evidence before us unable to
deny its existence any longer Finally, dad broke the silence.
Get in the truck. I didn't hesitate climbing
quickly into the passenger seat. I glanced back nervously at
Rusty. Still lying Motionless in the
bed eyes glazed with exhaustion. Dad started the engine with out
another word and the truck rumbled reluctantly to life.
He drove slowly down the rugged Service Road eyes, fixed ahead
jaw set firmly. Neither of us looked back.
Minutes passed the dense trees, finally giving way to open
scrubland as we approach the highway.
The Sky Had fully lightened. Now, bathing the mountains and
pale golden sunlight, but nothing about the morning, felt
safe or normal. The silence inside the truck was
thick. Heavy punctuated only by our
shallow breathing in the engines whom Finally, I broke the quiet.
Dad, I'm sorry. He glanced briefly at me.
Confused for what for not believing you.
I admitted swallowing hard. All those years your stories.
I thought you made them up. I thought they were just trucker
tails. Dad exhaled, deeply eyes
distant. He shook his head, slowly.
I wish they were some things are real, even if nobody wants to
believe it. We drove in silence again for a
long while each lost in our own thoughts, until the first signs
of civilization appeared on the horizon, Rusty stirred gently in
the truck bed, his tail wagging weekly.
It Felt Like A Small Miracle after that trip, I never camped
again. Not near Lucca, Tokai not
anywhere near tribal lands. Dad sold his camper and gave up
camping all together. Rusty healed eventually though
he avoided the trees and trails from then on content to stay
close to home safe behind walls. That seemed too thin now.
Months passed. But the nightmares lingard.
Each night in those moments before sleep took me, I would
see that thing. Crouched in the dry wash had
tilted at an unnatural angle, eyes fixed on mine.
And every time I jolted awake sweating and breathless, dad's
words echoed in my mind, there's a reason, you don't hear these
stories from the people who've lived it, because if you've seen
it once, you don't want to be seen again.
I'd spent most of my childhood Summers down in Flagstaff, but
the Reds had always been home. Even though my brother Marcus
and I grew up going to school off reservation, Our Roots ran
deep in the high Ridges of the chuska mountains.
Our grandmother shim asani Ella made sure of that each year.
She took us back to the Sheep Camp, our grandfather, built
decades ago. It was hidden up near Buffalo
pass, just a little wooden cabin.
Quiet and simple far from anything Marcus and I were
teenagers now and it had been at least two years since our last
visit grandma wore that the fences around the old sheep
Corral might have fallen over the winter and she wanted us to
help patch them up before, monsoon season.
So on a warm Friday, in early June, we loaded tools, blankets
and food into her beat up to Tacoma and set off on a winding
dirt road, deep into the chuska mountains.
The road was rougher than I remembered.
It twisted like a snake between stands of ponderosa pine in
Juniper then climbed steeply to a clearing at the edge of a wide
Canyon. The cabin sat tucked away in the
trees, a weather wooden structure with a low roof in a
porch that Creak when we stepped on it.
Inside the familiar smell of Cedar smoke and old blankets
brought back memories. We dropped our bags near the
wood stove, and stepped back outside, Marcus stretched and
looked around smirking. Still spooky.
He said nodding at the dense Woods surrounding the clearing.
It's quiet. I replied glancing uneasily
toward the Shadows Beneath The Tall Pines.
Almost too quiet. Grandma frowned from the porch.
You boys stay close to night. Don't wander things.
Listen out here. Marcus rolled his eyes, but I
felt her words sink into my stomach heaviest Stone.
Later as the sun began dipping behind the mountain Marcus and I
walked downhill to check out the dryer, Royal near the camp.
We tossed rocks into the empty Creek bed laughing as Marcus
mimicked. Some deep voice storyteller.
Watch out, he teased skinwalkers might get us, don't say stuff
like that. I said glancing nervously, back
toward the cabin, Marcus laughed louder.
Mocking me in a cartoonish voice.
Caleb scared of res Bigfoot, Before I could respond,
Grandma's, sharp voice, cut through the fading light.
She stood framed in the cabin window serious.
As I had ever seen her stop laughing.
She said sternly don't call Things by name at night, you
know better. Marcus fell quiet, suddenly
sheepish. I swallowed hard glancing again
at the darkness creeping steadily toward us from the
trees. We ate a silent dinner by
kerosene lanterns. The conversation minimal.
Grandma checked the locks twice before bed which wasn't usual
for her. She sprinkled Ash and corn
pollen, carefully near the doorway mumbling, something
quietly and Navajo that I didn't understand.
Marcus and I lay awake in the darkness listening to Grandma's
gentle breathing. After a while, the quiet outside
became oppressive. No Breeze.
No animals. Nothing stirred in the forest at
all. Sometimes deep into the night.
I woke suddenly unsure. What it startled me then in the
silence I heard it. Knock knock.
Three slow sharp raps. They Came from Beneath the
cabin, from directly under our sleeping platform, Marcus
stirred beside me and his eyes opened wide in the faint,
Moonlight leaking through cracks in the walls.
Did you hear Marcus started? But Grandma cut him off.
Sharply, don't speak she whispered fiercely don't move
Marcus and I froze, our breath shallow eyes.
Fixed on the dark ceiling my heartbeat.
Pounded in my ears outside. Something heavy moved slowly
around the cabin. It made.
No sound. No crunching leaves.
No snapping Twigs but we felt it.
Circling a presence unmistakable yet unseen.
I wanted desperately to close my eyes but fear kept them wide,
open staring into nothing. We lay Frozen for hours,
terrified to even shift our weight.
Grandma, sat upright the whole time, her lips moving silently
in prayer. The room stayed pitch.
Black filled with nothing but 10 silent.
And the distant terrible awareness of something watching
from just beyond the cabin walls.
Finally, just before Dawn, the silence broke.
A single harsh, scraping noise, echoed through the cabin, one
clean line, drawn, heavily down the wooden door, then silence
returned, heavier and deeper than before Grandma, slowly
released her breath. And whispered, one sentence into
the darkness, It's gone now but don't speak about it.
None of us moved again until the first hint of dawn crept through
the cracks signaling that the long horrible night had finally
ended When the first pale streaks of dawn, finally,
pierced the cracks in the cabin walls.
Grandma stood slowly and moved toward the door.
Marcus and I exchanged cautious, glances waiting silently.
Grandma unlocked, the heavy latch, and pushed the wooden
door open, stepping outside with visible caution.
Immediately I noticed her tense posture her shoulders rigid as
she stared at something directly in front of her.
Marcus moved up behind me. Trying to look over my shoulder.
Grandma said, nothing only stepped aside.
So we could see clearly a single deep line had been gouged into
the middle of the door, fresh unmistakable.
It ran perfectly vertical, sharp and precise, Grandma moved
swiftly. Then, without speaking she
walked to the truck, retrieved a small pouch of Cedar and corn,
pollen and began carefully. Scattering it in front of the
doorway. Her lips moved silently but we
didn't dare interrupt. Her Marcus nudged me.
You see anything else? I shook my head, the clearing
around the cabin appeared. Empty and quiet as though.
Nothing at all had happened. But the mark on the door, stood
as proof that something had visited Us in the night.
Something with intent, we spent the day repairing the fence line
around the Sheep Corral As we worked Marcus and I kept looking
around nervously. Grandma stayed quiet and
watchful saying little accepted instructions.
Her mood had changed drastically from yesterday.
Every movement seemed cautious, even Marcus kept his usual jokes
to himself. By midday, we reached a damaged
fence post at the far edge of the clearing close to a deep
Gulch. The wooden post was twisted.
Sharply bent, nearly in half splintered near the ground.
Grandma, examined, it silently running her hand carefully,
along the brake. Then she froze.
Just beyond the broken fence post etched clearly into the
soft Earth were prints. Deep indentations, large, and
cloven, like those of a goat but too large and arranged in a
staggering pattern. I bent down, examining them more
closely. My blood felt suddenly cold.
They didn't line up side by side, like an animal would
leave, but rather stepped one after another exactly as if
something had stood. Upright on two legs Marcus
swallowed hard glancing at Grandma.
What made those? Grandma only shook her head, her
eyes fixed firmly on the prints. Something heard you last night.
Something we shouldn't speak about the mood dark and even
more after that Grandma hurried us to finish our work.
She seemed to be racing. The sun eager to retreat into
the cabin before. Darkness felt again.
After we finished repairs, she began another quiet ritual.
Placing Ash circles around the perimeter of the cabin.
Her whispered prayers more fervent than before.
Darkness arrived quickly, heavy and oppressive.
Grandma lit, kerosene lanterns hanging them carefully.
In each Corner. The flickering yellow glow cast
strange shapes along the walls. My skin prickled at the memory
of last night's knocking beneath the floorboards.
I dreaded, what might happen next.
We Lay awake again. Grandma, upright near the cabin.
Center Vigilant intense. Just after midnight the wall
behind our heads jolted hard a single heavy blow echoed Through
the Wood rattling the entire structure.
Marcus sat bolt upright. Eyes wide.
I felt my heart racing wildly. But Grandma held up her hand
sharply, signaling us to remain silent.
We waited breathing shallowly ears.
Straining for more sounds none came.
Once again, the cabin settled into a silence.
So complete, it seemed unnatural hours passed in quiet attention.
I felt exhausted yet. I was afraid to even close my
eyes. Around three in the morning.
Grandma suddenly stood up her eyes locked onto the back
window. I hesitated then carefully Rose
and followed her to the rear door.
She didn't tell me to stop but her hand gently pressed my arm.
Cautioning me to stay silent. We stared into the moonlit
clearing behind the cabin, our eyes adjusting slowly.
Then I saw it. A figure stood, just beyond the
Outhouse unmoving silhouetted clearly against the darkness of
the trees. It looked human at first, but my
stomach clenched, as I realized something was terribly wrong.
Its arms hung unnaturally long at its side, its chest was thin
and elongated stretched strangely upward like a shadow
distorted by firelight and Below its legs, bent backwards sharply
and narrow cloven hooves. Like those of a goat, my breath,
caught painful in my throat. Grandma's hand tightened around
my arm. Her other hand moved quickly,
scattering more Ash and pollen on the threshold.
Her quiet prayers fast and urgent.
The figure remained utterly, motionless staring directly
toward us with without any sign of moving closer or retreating.
The moon cast its Twisted Shadow across the clearing, emphasizing
every unnatural detail. My heart hammered so loudly I
thought surely it could hear Grandma's voice trembled softly
in prayer. Repeating ancient words.
I barely recognized The creature didn't move until the first
faint glow of dawn touched, the trees washing away the Shadows.
And then suddenly without any visible movement, the clearing
stood empty again. The figure had vanished leaving
only silence behind Grandma exhaled, slowly her voice
shaking, as she spoke for the first time in hours.
It's over. She whispered though her tone
made it clear, she didn't truly believe that but we must leave
this place quickly. I didn't argue, Marcus was
already up hurriedly Gathering our things in silence, we didn't
speak at all afraid. Even the quietest word might
draw it back at dawn. Grandma hurried us out of the
cabin without another word. Marcus through our belonging to
the back of the truck moving quickly.
But quietly grandma wouldn't let us touch the bedding.
Instead she dragged it out outside herself.
Piling it beside the cabin and setting it Ablaze.
The smoke Rose in a dark column carrying with it.
Something unspoken we didn't say a word as we climbed into the
truck, grandma made us Face Forward.
Gently placing dried herbs behind our ears.
She whispered softly almost too quiet to hear.
Don't Look Back. Keep your eyes ahead.
Marcus sat rigid in the front seat eyes, fixed on the winding
road that led us down from Buffalo pass.
I tried not to think about what I'd seen last night, but the
image stayed Vivid, the distorted shape of that figure
standing motionless at the tree line.
It's goat like legs grotesquely bent backward, beneath a tooth
in torso, A sick feeling Twisted inside my stomach.
When we finally reached our house in Saul grandma, didn't
let us enter right away. She walked around us slowly
burning Cedar and Mountain Tobacco murmuring prayers
beneath her breath. She scattered corn Paul and on
the ground at our feet eyes closed as she sang Softly.
Marcus and I waited silent numb from exhaustion and lingering
fear. Our parents arrived home later
that afternoon surprised by the tension.
They could clearly feel in the house.
Mom looked at Marcus and me, confusion evident in her
expression. What happened out there.
She asked, cautiously grandma didn't hesitate, her voice was
steady but quiet and serious. Something came to the camp, it
knows the boy's names. Dad, exchanged a glance with Mom
uneasy. He turned toward Grandma
carefully, what did you see? She paused for a long moment
before answering. And when she finally spoke, her
words made me shudder. A thing with the chest of a man
and legs like a goat. It watched from the Shadows.
It's not our camp anymore. We must not return there. that
evening grandma called one of our relatives, a traditional
healer from Chinle I recognized him in immediately when he
arrived. An older man with long gray
streaked hair. His face deeply lined with age
and wisdom. Markus, and I sat quietly as he
prepared the room for the blessing way ceremony spreading
woven blankets on the floor. And lighting Sage that filled
the room with dense fragrance smoke.
The Healer began singing softly and Navajo songs I'd never heard
before. The chant Rose and fell gently
calming my nerves and clearing the oppressive feeling lingering
inside me grandma, watched silently from the corner
knotting slowly to the Rhythm. We sat through the night
following his instructions carefully.
Never questioning I understood only fragments of the Navajo he
spoke, but I felt the strength of the prayers in every word, As
the ceremony concluded, grandma looked at us and spoke Softly.
Don't speak about it again. Leave it behind you.
Weeks Later summer was nearly over.
I was riding with some friends from school heading through
lukachukai on our way toward Shiprock.
As the truck climbed up toward Buffalo pass.
One of my friends, joked about camping up in the chuska
mountains sometimes soon. But it spooky up there at night,
he laughed. Maybe we'll finally see a
skinwalker. The others chuckled and joined
in teasing and throwing around casual jokes.
I sat quietly staring out the window at the dark trees lining
the road. I felt a chill run down my
spine, tightening my throat. I spoke with without turning
toward them. My voice quiet, but firm.
Don't joke about things like that.
The laughter died down slowly replaced by an awkward silence.
No. One pressed me for an
explanation and I offered none. I knew what I had seen.
I knew what we'd all felt that night in the cabin and I knew
there were some stories better left Untold.
My name is Frank. I'm 62.
And I've spent nearly all my life ranching cattle on the
same. Dusty stretch of land just
outside Santa Fe New Mexico. My father built the first fences
sinking wooden posts into ground.
That folks around here said, should never have been
Disturbed. The elders whispered it was
sacred land, an old ceremonial place, but my father stubborn as
the Sandstone meses that surround us Shrugged It Off.
He said that tradition didn't feed anyone for decades.
We worked this Ranch without trouble, pushing Superstition,
aside, as easily as we pushed cattle through the cattle
guards. But last winter, everything
changed cattle started going missing. at first, I blamed
rustlers then Coyote's even mountain lions but there was
never a sign of blood or struggle.
No broken fences or tracks that made sense.
Just a space where a steer should have stood and didn't buy
summer. I had lost five animals.
That was thousands of dollars disappearing, like, smoke into
the clear, New Mexico Sky. My sister convinced me to call
our nephew Elias. He'd just gotten home after
eight years in the Marines. And if anyone could keep watch,
it'd be him when Elias arrived, he stood tall and weary eyes,
scanning everything. As if we were already under
attack Uncle, he said, gripping my shoulder tightly show me, I
let him out to the South fence, where the cattle guard marked,
the edge of the property we walked slowly scanning the
ground. The recent disappearances always
happened right around here near the old cattle guard.
I'd welded myself back in the 80s.
The metal was rusted, now the bars crossing the ditch meant to
stop cattle from straying. Any tracks, Elias knelt brushing
Dirt away from something I couldn't see.
Nothing useful. I said shaking my head, just a
few odd Prince. Elias traced his fingers over
deep hoof marks in the dirt, they were strangely spaced and
ended abruptly. As if the animal had simply
vanished, That afternoon Elias helped me rig, floodlights
around the cattle, guard, heavy, metal poles lights, bright
enough to burn away Shadows nearby.
We pulled my battered camper trailer into place close enough
to see anything moving near the fence line by Nightfall.
The Ranch was bathed in harsh, artificial glare inside the
camper, the silent stretched on punctuated.
Only by Elias's occasional shifting Neither of us, spoke
much eyes, trained on the darkness, outside the hours.
Ticked, slowly, just after two in the morning, a chill crept in
cold enough that Elias zipped up his jacket even though it was
mid-july. 58. Am a faint rustling whispered
through the brush. You hear that Elias murmured
instantly alert I nodded we both leaned forward muscles,
tightening instinctively. It wasn't the sound cattle made.
This was too cautious. Two measured at 307.
Exactly a shadow move. Just beyond the brightest reach
of the lights. Elias was already standing rifle
raised. I squinted hard into the
darkness, trying to make sense of the form it stood upright for
a heartbeat human-shaped but impossibly thin Benton strange
ways that made my stomach tighten, then it dropped
smoothly to all fours. Moving forward in a jerking
unnatural gate. it paused at the edge of visibility limbs
twitching, oddly I felt the hair stand up on my neck.
Every instinct told me this was a natural.
What the hell? Elias began the flood lights
flickered. Suddenly dimming just enough to
blur our vision but not going completely dark Elias shouted, a
raw sound, I'd never heard from him and fired one shot the crack
echoed off Sandstone Cliffs and the figure Twisted aside with a
speed. No human could match.
Vanishing behind a nearby bluff. Did you hit it?
I breathed heart hammering against my ribs.
I don't know. Eliza said grimly.
His eyes stayed locked on the place where it disappeared.
His breathing was steady measured like he'd trained
himself to handle fear. We moved cautiously from the
trailer flash. Lights in hand.
Sweeping the scrubby ground It was silent again.
Nothing moving, but us, After a few tents minutes, we found
tracks pressed clearly into soft dirt, Barefoot deep and clawed
something. No human foot could make.
We stood staring at them for a long moment.
Elias's flash light, trembling slightly.
What is this? Uncle Frank.
I didn't answer, I couldn't. Instead, I looked up into the
sky black as tar and felt something I'd ignored for
decades, whisper quietly inside me.
I realized then that the stories, my grandfather told me
weren't just old man's Tales. And what ever had haunted this
land before. We'd claimed it wasn't finished
with us yet. The morning sun rose over the
Mesa pale and hot, casting Long Shadows that stretched out
across the ranch like black fingers.
Elias and I stood quietly by the South fence staring down at yet
another empty spot where a steer had stood just yesterday.
The ground was scuffed, the Earth turned from the weight of
a frightened animal. But again, no blood, no drag
marks nothing except the Deep. Clawed Prince wheat found in the
night. They let off toward the bluff
disappearing, into thick brush, This doesn't make sense.
Elias said finally frustration heavy in his voice He crouched
low examining the prints again. He shook his head lips tight.
It looks almost human but it's not.
I glanced toward the Sandstone outcropping stained red gold by
The Morning Sun. It was less than half a mile
away, and from here, it looked harmless.
I'd walked past that bluff 100 times without giving it much,
thought. today, it felt different heavier somehow I'll
check it out. Elias said, standing and dusting
off his knees. Maybe I can see something from
up there. Before I could argue, he'd
already grabbed his gear rifle slung over his shoulder drone
kit and a GoPro tucked under his arm.
He moved toward the bluff. With the practice, ease of a
soldier, weaving carefully through the brush.
I watched him go something cold and uneasy settling in my chest
hours, passed slowly, and the ranch felt empty or than ever.
I checked the cattle. Three times wrestlers, glancing
toward the bluffy, each time. Elias still hadn't returned and
that tightness in my chest grew worse.
As the son, climbed higher. And then sank toward the
Horizon, I finally saw him emerging from the scrub brush.
He moved fast head down his expression.
Dark What did you see? I asked trying not to sound as
nervous as I felt. He didn't answer right away
instead. He sat on the edge of the
trailer steps wiping. Sweat from his forehead, his
face looked strained, eyes tired.
But sharp I found something strange.
He said, finally, he pulled out his phones swiping through
photos. He'd taken, there's an old fire
ring near the bluff. A lot of Bones, small animals,
mostly but some larger ones too, but that's not the weirdest
part. He handed me the phone, the
images showed an odd black in Stone Mountain, partially
buried, surrounded by dried brittle.
Sagebrush the stones were stacked carefully.
Deliberately yet somehow unnatural as though placed in
haste, by nervous hands. What is it?
I asked quietly dread growing stronger inside me.
Elias shook his head, slowly, I don't know, it didn't feel
right. Soon as I got close, my drone
started, glitching controls froze.
And it crashed camera went dark too.
I handed him the phone. A sense of unease?
Crawling up my spine. You think someone built it
recently? No, Ellie said firmly that
mounts old decades at least but the fire pit looked fresh ashes
weren't more than a couple weeks old.
We sat in silence as the sun dipped lower Shadows,
lengthening and blending together until the land turned
purple and gray. Soon, my sister Mary arrived.
Pulling her pickup truck up close to the camper.
When she got out her face was lined with worry.
I talked to Auntie Lorraine she said without greeting, her voice
tense. She said you need to know the
truth. This land wasn't supposed to be
ours. It wasn't supposed to be
anyone's. Elias and I exchanged looks but
stayed quiet waiting for her to continue.
Mary took a deep breath her eyes haunted, Grandfather used to
talk about ceremonies done here, old ways and enemy way.
Rituals for warriors. Coming back from Battle.
One ceremony was interrupted Long Ago by a storm lightning
struck, the Hogan and killed two men.
They never finished. They never closed it off.
Her words, hung heavily between us, thick with unspoken fear.
My grandfather had mentioned enemy way ceremonies before he
healing rights meant to cleanse. Those who encountered death.
But I'd always thought they were just stories, forgotten history,
that didn't matter now. You think that's why this is
happening, Elias asked quietly. That whatever's taking the
cattle is connected to those rituals.
Mary nodded slowly. That's what anti Lorraine
thinks. She said, you stirred something
awake. The idea Twisted in my gut heavy
and sickening. I had never believed in curses
or evil spirits, but after last night, after what we'd seen, I
wasn't so sure anymore. Night fell quickly, and we
prepared again, this time with more caution.
Elias rigged motion sensors and tripwires around the trailer and
the cattle guard. We double checked, the
floodlights reinforcing the setup, and loading our rifles.
Elias's dog, normally calm and steady wins softly inside the
camper refusing to leave. Just before midnight, we settled
in side watching quietly, the land was silent around us.
The cattle Restless in the darkness Beyond the Lights.
Time crept forward. Slowly each minute feeling like
an hour. At 2:59 a.m. the silence, broke
something scraped, softly against the Earth moving slowly
circling just beyond the lights. Elias stiffened, gripping his
rifle tighter, the sound changed, suddenly a faint
rattling, breath, wet and uneven.
Elias whispered softly its back, I strained my eyes into the
Shadows, trying to find it but it stayed just outside our
vision. Moving carefully, deliberately
avoiding the beams of light. The air grew colder, prickling,
along my skin making every hair stand rigid.
Then the shape emerged. Crawling on elbows, and knees,
jerking, and twitching with an awful disjointed motion.
It moved just beyond the brightest edge of the
floodlights circling a slowly dragging limbs through the dirt.
The motion sensors flashed, urgently lighting up silently
inside, the camper Yet. Nothing broke the beams outside.
Elias aimed carefully, waiting for a clear shot, but the shape
moved unpredictably circling and retreating never giving him the
chance. My breath came faster, sharp
bursts of adrenaline making me dizzy.
I gripped my rifle. Tightly fighting panic.
The creature stops suddenly just at the boundary of the light.
It led out a low ragged growl, a deep animalistic.
Rasp that chilled me through, it seemed to stare right out at us.
Crouched low fingers, digging into the Earth.
For a long moment. None of us moved then abruptly.
It turned away moving silently into the darkness toward the
cattle guard. The floodlights stayed bright
the sensors can continue to flashing wildly but the creature
was gone. When we finally ventured outside
rifles, raised heart still racing, we found fresh cattle
tracks leading toward the gate, but nothing had triggered the
sensors. The gates were still locked
fences intact. We stood there helpless and
silence staring out at the black emptiness, beyond the cattle
guard. Elias shook his head slowly
frustration etched deeply into his features.
Whatever. This thing is, he said quietly
it knows exactly what it's doing.
I didn't answer I just stared into the night.
My grandfather's stories ringing through my mind.
We warned supposed to be here on land where ceremonies remained
unfinished, and whatever we had Disturbed.
Clearly wasn't ready to leave us alone.
At first light, I called hoski Benelli.
He was a retired medicine, man. Living out in sheep Springs
about 20 minutes down. The highway husky had helped
families around sauna Steve for years.
Cleansing home's, blessing, newborns and sending troubled
spirits on their way. When I explained what was
happening, how the cattle vanished, the strange creature,
we'd seen the old Fire Ring, he listened quietly, occasionally
humming under his breath. I'll be there before noon.
He finally said, hanging up with out further, comment, when he
arrived. He stepped from his old truck,
his lined face solemn as he stared across the land.
He was older than me by at least 10 years.
Small, and wiry eyes narrowed with age.
Without greeting, he motioned Elias and me toward the bluff.
We followed silently nerve, still raw from the night before
at the sight hoski. Paused his gaze falling on the
black and stones and Scattered bones.
Slowly, he knelt touching the Earth.
Gently almost as if reading it this place has been silent too
long. He said standing again, in
brushing dirt from his hands. What you found here, it opened
something that was never closed. The old ones performed
ceremonies here to cleanse Warriors who saw death, but the
last ritual was interrupted. Lightning struck killed two men.
That left an open gate one. Nobody remembers.
Now something has found its way through.
Can you stop it? Elias asked his voice tense and
hopeful hoskey stared out across the scrubland deep in thought
before. Finally nodding.
We must finish what was started tonight before it returns.
We spent the afternoon preparing husky guided us to play Cedar
branches, crushed, turquoise Ash and obsidian at Each corner of
the property. He set up a small sand painting
in front of the camper each detail carefully.
Placed as Twilight fell, he lit Sage bundles filling the air
with thick smoke. The scent was strong earthy like
something remembered from childhood.
When night came again, the three of us stood together near the
cattle, guard hoski began chanting softly and Navajo his
voice low in steady Elias and I kept watch rifles ready eyes
straining into the Shadows beyond the glow of the lights.
Hours crawled by slowly tense and silent.
Elias shifted his weight from foot to foot uneasy the cattle.
Stirred nervously out in the darkness sensing something.
We couldn't yet see Just after 3 a.m. a sharp crash came from the
north fence. The sound was violent metal
rattling hard Elias snapped around raising his rifle.
Before I could react the floodlights burst shards of
glass scattering across the ground.
Darkness, surged around us broken, only by The Faint glow
of stars, and Huskies, burning sage bundles.
Yet the perimeter we'd marked held strong.
Whatever was out there, stayed beyond the cedar branches in Ash
weed place. Slowly, a form emerged from the
Shadows barely visible beneath. The dim Starlight, It moved
awkwardly. Now, dragging itself forward,
staying just outside the boundary hoski had made.
Elias inhaled sharply, as we both saw it clearly for the
first time, it was painfully thin tall and stretched limbs
bent at unnatural angles. Its skin visible, even in faint
Starlight was a sickly gray model with patches of Darkness.
The head was elongated skull like with empty Hollows were
eyes. Should have been, it reached
toward us scratching at its something unseen in the air.
I raise my rifle but couldn't bring myself to pull the trigger
beside me, Elias hesitated too Frozen by the grotesque figure
do not fire husky, whispered firmly His chanting grew.
Louder words, urgent and Powerful.
He threw more herbs onto the smoldering fire.
Sending smoke billowing into the darkness.
The creature shuddered visibly. It led out a thin ragged tree.
A sound filled with pain, anger and confusion.
Elias and I exchanged a tense glands.
Slowly agonizingly. The figure retreated crawling
backward into the brush, its movements jerking as if being
forced Away by an unseen hand. For several long minutes
afterward. None of us moved.
We waited, breathe shallow listening to the night.
Eventually the silence returned deeper and calmer now like a
weight finally lifted. Husky stopped chanting, lowering
his hands. Gently its done.
He said quietly exhaustion evident in his voice.
The Gateway is closed. Again, it can't return.
Not here. Not now relief flooded through,
me overwhelming and heavy Elias. Let out a breath.
He'd been holding lowering his rifle slowly.
At Sunrise, the ranch felt different, lighter warmer.
Hoski finished his ritual carefully, dismantling the sand
painting barring, the herbs and Ashes In sacred patterns around
the property. But even as we stood there
watching the sun, climb higher into a clear sky husky looked at
me with somber eyes. You should not stay.
He warned gently. This land remembers what was
done. It might never truly rest.
I nodded slowly understanding what he meant over the next two
years. I kept the ranch but I never
slept there again. When I sold it to an oil
exploration company, it felt like a relief as if I had
finally stepped away from something heavy that had been
pressing against me for decades. Elias moved down to Window, Rock
and we didn't speak often. When we did we never mentioned
what we'd seen at the cattle guard.
Not until months later when I heard he'd share the story once
in a dark corner of a bar, it didn't bother me.
I knew he'd only told it to free himself, hoping to bury those
memories somewhere far away just as I tried to do.
In the end, the ranch sat empty and quiet again, reclaimed
Slowly by wind and sun. And though I never returned
sometimes late at night. I still found myself waking
suddenly imagining something Finn and hungry scratching at a
barrier. Desperate to return to a place
at once claimed. I'd driven through Navajo
country dozens of times, working the oil fields near Farmington,
but I'd never lingered long enough to absorb much beyond the
scenery. My younger brother, Raymond had
never even been this far. North We'd planned a road trip
from Santa Fe pushing Northwest through Arizona's four corners
and into Monument Valley hoping to snap pictures of Shiprock
Peak at sunrise. Raymond who fancied himself a
photographer insisted that golden hour at Shiprock, was
worth, skipping, a motel stay for, I'd reluctantly agreed.
Thinking, the drive would be smooth enough.
Around midnight, we turned off the main, Highway heading north
on Navajo Route. 33 through Cove.
Chapter aiming for a shortcut, Raymond had found through red
Valley. I felt good about the route.
I'd vaguely. Remember driving parts of it
before, but the optimism faded quickly about an hour passed
Cove. Just, as we passed Sawmill
Trail, I noticed the temperature gauge needle jumps suddenly into
the red. Julian, something's wrong
Raymond, said leaning forward anxiously, his voice tight.
I see it. I muttered pulling the truck
onto the shoulder. There was a Sandstone Bluff.
Overlooking, a wide Valley lit. Dimly by a thin Crescent Moon.
I killed the engine immediately letting the truck roll to a
stop. Stepping out into the biting
winter. Are we popped the hood letting
steam spill upward into the darkness I Shone my flashlight
down and saw what I had feared. The radiator was almost empty.
My stomach sank. We had water in the back but
pouring it into a hot engine wrist.
Cracking, the radiator leaving us stranded for good.
We had no choice but to wait until morning and let things
cool off naturally. Raymond rubbed, his gloved hands
together and shook his head, breathe forming Vapor Clouds.
Perfect timing. At least we have blankets and
snacks. I said trying to sound
reassuring Raymond was clearly uncomfortable.
Glancing nervously toward the dark Ridgeline.
There was no cell service, of course, not way out.
Here we settled back into the truck cab.
Trying to find comfortable positions preparing ourselves,
mentally to endure a cold restless night.
Raymond drifted off after about half an hour.
I tried to follow suit but found myself Restless staring through
the windshield into the darkness.
It was around 2 in the morning. When I first heard the sound, a
deep low, howl, carrying far across the valley.
I knew Coyote's well enough, this wasn't a coyote.
This was longer lower. Almost Human, but raw and
animalistic at the same time the hairs on my neck prickled and I
nudged Raymond to wake, you hear that, he sat up slowly eyes on
focused. Hear what as if answering the
howl came again closer this time and from the opposite Ridge,
Raymond stiffened, instantly staring into the darkness.
What is that? He whispered, no idea.
I said trying to mask my unease, maybe an elk or something
Raymond shook his head, his eyes locked forward.
I've never heard an elk sound like that, we stepped out of the
truck again straining, our eyes in the dim moonlight The valley
stretched ahead of us dark and Silent.
Now, the howls faded into echoes.
Just as we turned to get back into the truck, Raymond grabbed
my arm pointing wordlessly at the Sandstone Ridge across the
road. I followed his gaze.
My blood ran cold. Standing on the top of the
outcrop was a tall figure backlit By Moonlight a dark
silhouette hunched and he elongated.
It looked oddly Twisted limbs longer than seemed possible.
Its stance. Almost predatory.
The thing was silent completely still we watched Frozen
ourselves unwilling or unable to move then it tilted its head
back and let out a howl identical to the ones we just
heard the sound was deafeningly loud, unmistakably animal.
Yet disturbingly humans, Raymond took a step backward, breathing
hard Julian. I slowly reached into the truck,
opening the center console and gripping the revolver.
I'd stash their My fingers shook as I loaded rounds into the
chamber, never taking my eyes off the figure.
We both stood perfectly still as if locked in some silent
standoff. My heart hammered in my chest
every muscle tensed. Then without warning the thing,
began to descend from the ridge. It moved strangely its limbs
jerking. As if Unsure, how to carry its
own weight Something in its movements seemed almost
bird-like awkward yet, terrifyingly precise.
Get back in the truck, I whispered sharply.
Raymond obeyed scrambling inside, but I held my ground
raising the revolver Skyward. The creature pause about 50
yards away and under the faint glow of moonlight.
I saw its head clearly elongated snout like eyes reflecting in
the dark, its mouth slightly open revealing sharp teeth.
Then it dropped to all fours. I expected it to run at us but
in Stead impossibly at crawled swiftly backward up the slope.
Its grotesque form Vanishing behind a large Boulder.
I stumbled backward, nearly falling as I climbed into the
truck. We sat wordlessly in shock doors
locked, breathing raggedly as we stared out into the silent
Darkness. I kept the revolver clenched in
my sweaty Palm knowing sleep, wouldn't come again until dawn.
for the next hour, neither of us said, a word We sat and stunned,
silence breath fogging, the windows eyes, locked on the
Sandstone Bluff. The truck cab felt cramped
suffocating my palm was sweaty around the revolver grip finger
resting nervously, along the trigger guard.
Raymond shivered. Next to me, fists clenched
tightly in his lap. I tried convincing myself.
We'd imagined it that fear and exhaustion had warped reality,
but every time I closed my eyes, the image was clear.
Its long limbs bending at unnatural angles, its head
tilted back howling The sound still echoed.
Clearly in my memory impossible to dismiss.
Julian, what the hell was that thing?
Raymond? Finally broke the silence.
His voice. Barely audible of the Throne of
adrenaline, in my ears. I don't know, I whispered back,
I still fixed ahead. Let's just stake quiet, he
nodded leaning forward, eyes. Scanning the darkness outside.
The moon offered barely enough light to outline shapes beyond
the truck. Shadows stretched long and
distorted across the sand, shifting with every passing
Cloud minutes dragged on endlessly, my eyes burned from
staring unblinking then, Raymond stiffened, suddenly his back
pressed hard against the seat its back.
He breathed I leaned forward, squinting into the Gloom at
first, nothing seemed different, just the same desolate landscape
of rock and brush but as my eyes adjusted, I saw movement near
the base of the ridge. It stood upright.
Now Frozen in place staring directly toward us.
My heart slammed violently in my chest.
Without warning, the creature began to sending again this time
rapidly. It moves strangely knees,
turning inward stepping forward in jerky, halting motions its
limbs swung awkwardly too long for its body.
Each stride felt unnatural disconnected, like it was trying
to imitate something human but failing horribly.
It's coming this way Raymond's voice, trembled Panic seeping
through, I gripped the revolver tighter swallowing hard, stay
calm, but calm felt impossible. The figure dropped onto all
fours, head still locked forward and began crawling fast
disturbingly fluid. But backwards, the speed was
shocking like watching a film play in Reverse Raymond's
breath, hitched, sharply. I fumbled for the flashlight in
the center console, desperate to see, clearly snapping it on, I
aimed the bright beam straight toward the approaching form.
It froze, instantly bathed in the harsh white glare.
My stomach Twisted, violently the creature slowly stood again,
rising to its full height. It was taller than I had guessed
nearly seven feet its long limbs hung Loosely from its gaunt
frame covered on evenly with patches of dark fur In places
bare skin stretched tight palette under the beam of light.
But worst of all was its head elongated canine like eyes
reflecting back, a sickly yellow glow, its jaw was partially open
revealing rows of sharp irregular teeth.
Shoot it. Raymond shouted frantically, I
raise the revolver Skyward and squeezed.
The trigger, the sharp crack of The Gunshot reverberating across
the valley The creature recoiled sharply at the sound its head
jerking backward, then without hesitation it dropped.
Once more to all fours with a speed, I'd never imagined
possible. It bolted sideways disappearing.
Instantly behind a cluster of rocks.
My hands shook uncontrollably. I glanced at Raymond whose eyes
were wide. Pupils dilated with Terror.
Neither of us moved or spoke. We barely breathed.
The revolver felt inadequate, now, small and useless against
whatever was out there. For another long stretch of
Silence. We waited to frightened to even
shift position then from behind us a faint scratching noise.
Started metallic scraping gently along the truck bed.
Julian, Raymond, hissed, softly. I hear it.
I answered through clenched teeth glancing into the rearview
mirror, Nothing showed in the limited view but the sound
continued a careful deliberate. Scraping along the medal.
My nerves felt Raw. Slowly cautiously.
I cracked open the driver's door flashlight.
In one hand revolver in the other.
My pulse hammered painfully in my ears.
Stepping out, I shine the beam toward the back of the truck,
heart lodged in my throat, the bed was empty, no marks, no
Footprints no animal or shape retreating into the darkness,
only sand and rock quiet and still I climb back inside,
locking the doors firmly, neither of us relaxed.
Raymond stared forward blankly arms, folded tightly across his
chest, breathing Shallow by 4:30 the world beyond the windshield.
Felt lifeless. Then I caught movement again on
the ridge ahead. This time, it wasn't just one
figure. It was several Shadows crouched
low perched. Silently along the Sandstone
rim. They didn't Advance didn't howl.
They just waited unmoving eyes reflecting doli in the thin
moonlight. Raymond.
Let out a long shaking breath. They're watching us.
He whispered numbly I know I murdered back dread settling
heavy inside me. We just have to make it to
Sunrise. Neither of us spoke again.
All we could do was stare back waiting desperately for the
first hint of Dawn when the first faint glow of Sunrise
began to seep Over the Horizon, it felt as if the weight
pressing on my chest. Finally, loosened Raymond was
still rigid beside me gripping his knees as if bracing for
another nightmare to emerge. Neither of us had managed, even
a moment of sleep after seeing those things watching silently
from the Ridgeline. In the pale Dawn, everything
around us slowly, transformed, the jagged Cliffs, softened into
shades of red and gold the dark brush.
Brightening the landscape becoming more familiar less
threatening. I forced myself out of the truck
legs stiff and shaking. My breath fogged in the morning.
Chill as I moved cautiously toward the hood revolver still
firmly in hand. Raymond followed nervously,
scanning the hills, as I lifted the hood in peered inside the
radiator. Had cooled down enough.
Now with careful, slow movements, I began pouring the
water into the reservoir, it trickled, and gurgled quietly,
steam Rising slightly, but no longer violently hissing like
before I breathed a small sigh of relief.
Think it'll hold Raymond asked Voice Low and cautious eyes.
Never leaving the surrounding landscape.
It better. I muttered.
We're not staying here. Any longer.
Just as I twisted the radiator cap, shut the quiet hum of tires
approached from the distance startling.
Both of us, we turned quickly shielding our eyes against the
glare of mourning, son and watched as a white dying,
utility truck, slowed and pulled up on the roadside behind us.
An older Navajo man climbed out dressed in Warren coveralls with
a weather face that showed years of working Outdoors.
His expression was unreadable as he moved toward us, Trouble with
your vehicle. He asked plainly glancing.
Briefly at the revolver, I was still gripping.
Embarrassed, I tucked it into my waistband.
Overheated, I answered cautiously eyeing, him
carefully. Think it'll be okay now.
The man nodded thoughtfully, his eyes calmly scanning, the valley
Beyond us. With out further comment, he
walked back to his truck, pulled a large plastic jug from behind
the seat and returned to hand it to me.
Here, drink some water, we drink greatly, the water cold and
sharp helping to clear the fog of exhaustion and fear.
The man watched patiently, as we finished.
Never once questioning why two young men look, so pale and
shaken in the early morning. Chill.
Finally, he gestured vaguely toward the canyon walls, and the
Sandstone ridges that stretched across the Horizon.
He spoke softly, but clearly, you boys should head out.
Now, he advised gently things, move between those Canyons when
the moon is thin best not to linger.
His tone carried, certainly not superstition.
He'd lived here, knew these lands and their secrets better
than we ever could Raymond. And I exchanged to glance, both
knowing it was time to leave. No, explanations, no questions.
The man's warning had been clear enough.
We climbed back into our truck as I turned the key, the engine
rumbled smoothly to life, bringing instant relief. without
looking back, I guided us carefully onto the road headed
toward US, Route 191 Neither of us.
Spoke as we drove South Shadows gradually shrinking under the
climbing Sun at the junction leading toward Shiprock.
Raymond pointed, hesitantly ahead.
Should we still try for the photos?
He asked voice week, almost uncertain, know I said, firmly,
we're going west through Montezuma Creek were leaving
Arizona behind. He nodded quietly, visibly
relieved, leaning back against his seat closing, his eyes
briefly for the first time since the night began.
The miles passed quickly as we put distance between ourselves
and Cove. By the time we crossed into
Utah. The sun was bright.
Overhead the landscape, empty and open.
Even in the broad daylight, the memories from the darkness clung
stubbornly refusing to fade a few days later back home in
Santa Fe, I found myself sitting on the front porch, staring
numbly into space, the phone Loosely in my hand.
All the plans sightseeing, photographs and stories.
We'd meant to gather had vanished replaced by the uneasy
weight of something. We couldn't explain something
that still lingered at the edge of our consciousness.
My phone buzzed, sharply, startling me.
It was Raymond a simple short texts appeared on my screen.
Did you tell anyone? I hesitated only briefly then
typed back a quick response. No, let's never go back there.
I tossed, the phone onto the table beside me leaning.
Back in my chair above, the sun was warm the air calm and clear
yet somewhere deep inside the house, still echoed distant but
unmistakable Rising slowly like a forgotten memory that refused
to fade away. I volunteered for this.
That's what I kept reminding myself as Marcus and I picked
our way through the Tangled Deadfall.
That littered the trail we were fresh out of Sue, NY College of
environmental science and Forestry graduates trained to
understand these Woods better than anyone else and eager for
hands-on experience. But enthusiasm wanes quickly,
when reality hits you like a gut punch, the five ponds Wilderness
had a reputation, a kind of dark respect.
Among the older forest rangers stationed in wanakena and
cranberry Lake. I'd seen The Knowing looks they
exchanged when Marcus and I signed up for the inspection.
Bare mountains, abandoned lookout tower in its battered.
Cabin were little more than scribbles on outdated Maps now.
A forgotten Place buried by time in snow.
Local said that in winter when heavy snow blanketed the
Adirondacks something. Screamed through the woods,
echoing down the empty. Valleys The story seemed foolish
by daylight but as the light dimmed in the trail faded
foolishness became easier to believe Tyler.
Hold up. Markus said from behind
Breathing heavily. He was red-faced panting clouds
into the Frigidaire. This Trail sucks.
Tell me something. I don't know.
I said forcing a laugh my own breath fogged my glasses
blurring, the already indistinct path ahead.
We got to be closed. We pushed forward the snow,
deepening underfoot, hiding slick, roots and Jagged rocks,
Every few steps branches whipped at our faces, stinging, our
skin. It felt like the forest itself.
Resisted our approach by laid after noon, as the last faint
glow slipped below. The Treetops, we finally spotted
the tower The rusted metal framework loomed above us
skeletal and twisted. As if years of harsh Winters had
bent at towards surrender. Beneath the tower was the cabin,
an Old Log shelter. Covered in thick layers of moss
and ice one wall sagged inward, another wore a blanket of fresh
Frost No fire had warmed it in decades.
Home sweet home. Marcus muttered slinging off his
pack. I forced open the swollen cabin
door inside the air. Tasted stale musty, we shuffled
in kicking snow from our boots. Isaac Justin to the gloomy
interior. A rust stained stove sat against
the far wall. It's piped disconnected.
The bunk beds were warped. The wood grey with age Marcus
flicked, his flash light toward the lower bunking suddenly Look
at this, he said, quietly beneath the bunk deep scratches
marred, the floorboards long gouges like something had
clawed, its way desperately through solid wood.
Behind the stove, a dark stain, dry and Flaky smeared upward,
Marcus, knelt squinting. Is that blood probably animal
blood. I said, though, I felt the
unease in my voice. Bear raccoon.
Something nesting here. yeah, Marcus agreed quietly but
neither of us moved our words, hung limp between us outside the
wind picked up, rattling the cabin's brittle walls August
shrieked briefly through the cracks echoing.
Weirdly off, the metal Tower above Marcus laughed, nervously,
standing quickly. We unpacked silently setting up
sleeping bags, and laying out gear.
We attempted the satellite phone several times, but it was
useless blocked by thick Pines and shadowed Peaks.
Snow started falling again, slow flakes drifting lazily through
the fading evening. I'll check out site, Marcus said
abruptly, sounding overly cheerful.
I knew him. Well enough to understand, he
was trying to shake off the tension Building inside this
cramped darkening shelter. I nodded be quick.
He stepped outside the door. Closing heavily behind him.
Muffling, the growing wind. I stood alone in the silence
rubbing, my chilled hands staring again at those claw
marks beneath the bed. Deep frantic slashes.
That seemed to scream out a story.
I desperately did not want to know.
Then I heard it a distant. Sound filtering through the
trees. It wasn't wind.
This was different. Something alive.
Something between a howl and a scream.
Impossibly distant yet. Piercingly.
Clear. My blood ran cold, the door.
Swung open abruptly, Marcus is face pale and drawn.
Did you hear that? He asked.
Breathlessly yeah, I said throat tight.
What was it? Markus shook his head slowly
gaze locked into the swirling snow behind him.
Nothing. He said, finally voice Halo.
Nothing at all. The words sounded empty even to
him. But not neither of us argued, we
simply close the door, locked, it tight and sat in silence
listening to the wind rise and fall.
Pretending that whatever we had heard was gone outside, Darkness
settled over Bear Mountain bearing the abandoned station
beneath the thickening blanket of white When I woke up, Marcus
was gone. My eyes struggled open to gray
frigate, daylight seeping through gaps, in the old cabin,
walls. I sat upright immediately
feeling the chill. Something was wrong deeply.
Wrong Marcus is sleeping. Bag was ripped wide.
Open the torn fabric spilling across the floor.
His boots still stood by the stove.
Exactly. Where he'd left them, his jacket
hung untouched on a rusty Hook by the door.
Marcus. My voice echoed hollowly against
cold logs, on answered. I climbed out of my sleeping
bag. Heart thudding.
Ice cold boards, numbed my feet. As I quickly dressed pulling on
boots gloves coat, I moved toward the door.
Bracing myself. Maybe he'd stepped outside for
firewood or to relieve himself. Maybe I was panicking over
nothing. I pushed the cabin door open, in
my stomach dropped outside the snow.
Lay perfectly smooth, undisturbed no tracks.
LED from the cabin, no sign Marcus had ever left.
The air was silent and utterly still a strange kind of Silence.
Thick enough that it seemed to press against my ears.
Markus, I shouted louder this time, my voice carried bouncing
between snow heavy. Branches, nothing answered.
But the quiet Russell of my own breathing, I circled the cabin
carefully, checking every side for Footprints nothing.
The snow was unbroken and pristine as if he'd simply
vanished from existence. My hands shook, as I scan the
tree line desperate for movement, a flash of color,
anything that might signal, Marcus there was only emptiness,
desperation grew sharper in my chest.
I grabbed our satellite phone again, fumbling with numb
fingers. No signal, the screen.
Mocked me, dead and useless. Helplessness quickly turned to
anger then back to fear my mind raced Marcus couldn't have gone
far. Barefoot could he?
The idea was absurd. I climbed the lookout tower
hoping for a better View. I gripped each icy wrong my
glove sliding dangerously when bit at my face, cold and
Relentless making my eyes water as I reach the top but looking
out over the endless snow covered Forest.
I saw no movement, no Trace only gray and white stretching,
forever beneath clouds heavy with another storm, A sudden
wave of dizziness forced me back down the ladder.
Back on Solid Ground. I leaned against the cabin.
Wall Breathing heavily, eyes, tightly shut.
Calm down. I thought think Marcus was smart
resourceful, maybe he'd heard something and went to
investigate, maybe he'd become disoriented but Barefoot without
his coat the afternoon dragged on.
As I forced myself to expand my search shouting, his name until
my throat burned, The temperature continued dropping
the are sharpening painfully with cold.
Panic clawed at my chest. If I didn't find him soon, he'd
never survived the night out here.
By the time dusk began, draining color from the sky, exhaustion
forced me back to the cabin. I barricaded the door, using the
old bunk frames and the remains of furniture inside.
As Darkness fell completely, I lit the stove with our dwindling
supply of kindling. Shadows dance danced, wildly
against the walls. Deepening the cracks and gouges
in the wood, those gouges Drew my attention again.
I knelt studying the floor closely.
Something about the scratches felt intentional urgent.
One set of marks was deeper than the others carving almost
completely through the board. As if something had desperately,
tried to break free or reach something buried beneath a noise
outside, snapped my head upward, thump heavy, slow Thump Thump,
my heart hammered painfully, I turned off my headlamps, sitting
absolutely still listening, the sound circled, the cabin
measured steps. Crunching through snow, whatever
was out there. Wasn't trying to hide its
presence. I gripped.
The handle of the Old Forest Service Hatchet.
We'd brought along my Knuckles aching the thumping paused
briefly and I held my breath. Every muscle locked rigidly
After several unbearable minutes of silence, I slowly exhaled
thinking whatever it was had moved away.
Then with a force that shook the entire cabin, something slammed
hard against the outer wall directly behind my head.
I bit my tongue suppressing a scream, another slam followed,
then another rattling, the Timbers each impact sent
Shockwave of Terror through my chest.
I squeezed my eyes shut unable to move.
Unable to think clearly. The assault continued for
minutes that felt like hours and then abruptly, it stopped.
The cabin went silent again. Only my shallow ragged
breathing, broke the quiet. I sat Frozen staring at nothing
as Dawn finally crept through the boarded windows.
Slowly, I stood joints stiff, from fear and cold hands,
shaking violently. I pried the barricade away from
the door and opened it peering out into pale Morning, Light the
snow, lay on touched, utterly smooth and unmarked, no
Footprints no sign of anything living having been there at all.
I stepped outside, feeling disconnected numb movement at
the top of the tower, Drew my gaze upward.
Their fluttering, softly caught in a rusted support beam was a
scrap of fabric. Marcus's parka, ripped and
dangling, like a Macabre flag. Its torn edges were stained dark
red. And clinging to one corner was a
single core strand of gray hair. I stared upward a fresh wave of
nausea Rising inside me, Marcus hadn't vanished.
He'd been taken. I had to get out.
After finding Marcus's torn parka.
Something shifted inside me panic.
Gave way to a cold numbing certainty.
If I stayed another night in this place, I would disappear
too. I spent the morning dismantling.
The bunk beds. Prying the ancient boards apart.
My hands already. Raw from cold splintered and
bled as I fashioned a crude sled Ten poles provided binding and
frame twine and rope lashed tightly around warped, wood.
The final product was ugly and uncertain but it was my only
hope. The snow was waist deep and
soft. I'd never make it back without
something to carry my gear. Around midday I shouldered.
My pack secured the sled and started back down the trail or
what I hoped was the trail. With each step, my legs sank,
heavily into the snow. My breath came raggedly misting,
and clouds around me. The path forward felt endless
swallowed by white drifts that blurred into featureless Woods.
As Darkness crept closer. I gathered branches and pine
needles digging a shallow depression.
Beneath the shelter of a Fallen Tree.
I lit a small fire with shaking hands and one precious Flair
warming, my numb fingers and fighting exhaustion.
The smoke Rose straight into the empty Blackness overhead that
night lying half buried in snow and hidden by my makeshift Camp.
I listened Silence, then footsteps steady?
Something was moving nearby. Just beyond my circle of
firelight, I curled tighter into my self gripping, my Hatchet
hard enough to bruise my palm. The steps circled slowly
methodically. They drew close enough that I
could hear Snow crunching beneath heavy weight yet I saw
nothing. No figure.
No Shadow. Only the oppressive Darkness.
It stopped again. Lingering waiting.
I didn't sleep, I didn't move. Eventually the footsteps faded
into the distance leaving, only the faint crackling of my fire
and my own shallow breathing morning came slowly.
The sky a dull oppressive. Gray my eyes burned from
exhaustion. As I stood, surveying the
untouched snow around my Camp. No tracks, no proof anything.
Had been there yet. I knew better.
I trudged onward. Pulling the sled, every muscle
aching from cold and fatigue. My vision.
Blurred at the edges shapes shifting between trees
hallucinations began Shadows took form, dancing figures of
smoke and snow flickering just beyond my focus.
Each time I turn my head. They dissolved.
That afternoon movement among the trees.
Stopped me. Cold ahead partly obscured by
branches stood. A figure.
Human-shaped but far too tall thin and ragged limbs
unnaturally long. It remained motionless watching.
I felt its attention like a physical weight suffocating
freezing me in. Place my heartbeat.
Pounded loudly, the only sound in a suddenly airless, Forest.
I force myself to look away. Staring down at my boots,
counting, my breaths. When I dared look up again, the
figure had vanished into the pail emptiness.
I continued forward, legs barely cooperating, each step slower
heavier. By Nightfall.
My strength was gone. Shivering violently.
I huddled beneath an evergreen too.
Weak to build a fire, too. Numb, to care.
My thoughts. Spiraled inward Fading Into
incoherent, murmurs. I woke sometimes deep in the
night to a voice calling my name Tyler.
It sounded close clear, not whispered but spoken plainly
without warmth or breathe behind it and though, every Instinct
screamed at me not to. I raise my head toward the
sound. Marcus stood, there illuminated
dimly by reflected Moonlight. He waved gently smiling, as if
nothing were wrong. Marcus, my voice cracked
painfully but something was off his face was wrong.
Then stretched his eyes Hollow in dark when his smile white and
I saw teeth that did not belong, sharpen uneven, I staggered
upright Terror. Flooding me with adrenaline,
Marcus is figure shifted, suddenly blurring Into Darkness
becoming tall and twisted limbs too, thin too long, it Advanced
slowly silently through the snow.
A screamed in my throat. I turned and fled blindly
through the trees, lungs. Burning tears.
Freezing on my cheeks. I ran until my legs collapsed
beneath me until my chest heaved so painfully I thought I would
die. I crawled forward.
Mine. Slipping further into delirium
All Around Me shapeshifted. Whispered my name back in from
Shadows. I squeezed my eyes shut crawling
forward inch by inch my world reduced to numbness and fear
When I awoke again, a bright light Blinded Me.
Voices shouted, human voices. Hands.
Lifted me onto something loud. Mechanical.
Snowmobiles. Rescuers from Cranberry Lake
bundled. Heavily speaking urgently.
Their words came muffled distant relief.
Mingled with confusion, but my strength was gone days later.
I found myself in a hospital bed.
Doctors and nurses. Move silently around me, careful
and gentle never asking too much.
They whispered about hypothermia frostbite dehydration, but
avoided mentioning markets, I refused to speak my tongue, too.
Heavy memories too raw. I stared blankly at the ceiling
waiting, for the numbness inside to fade, but it lingered
Relentless. And in The Emptiness, I heard
Marcus's voice again. And again, one night as a nurse
gently adjusted my IV. I finally forced words out
speaking softly flatly, without looking at her, It wasn't
hungry. I whispered it was lonely.
She froze, briefly then continued her work in silence.
I didn't explain knowing somehow she understood.
People around here knew they'd always known even if they never
spoke of it. I turned away closing my eyes
again, trying to push away the memories of Marcus's empty smile
beneath the endless snow and dark trees.
I hadn't spent much time with my dad since mom died.
Truthfully, I hadn't spent much time with him before that
either. Cal Morgan was the kind of
father you admired from a distance and that distance
usually felt like the span of a continent.
He spent most of my childhood overseas.
A career Army Ranger known for his ability to survive in
conditions. Most people wouldn't willingly
visit When he finally retired he didn't settle down.
He chose instead to teach Wilderness navigation and
survival. My mother loved him though, I'm
not sure she ever fully understood him.
After she passed, we became two people, orbiting a painful
silence. When he suggested a week-long
trek through Wyoming's Wind River range.
I almost said no. But something in his voice, a
gentle vulnerability. I hadn't heard before pushed me
to agree. I flew in from Seattle met him
in Riverton and we drove out to the Elkhart Park.
Trailhead on a cold September morning.
The leaves at already turned a brittle, yellow and arranger.
Stopped us briefly. Before we headed out warning us
of bear, sightings in an early snowfall, neither seemed to
bother dad. The first couple of days went by
without issue aside from my growing irritation with the
terrain and weather. By day 3, we'd crossed Island
Lake and were making our way toward Bonneville basin.
My muscles, ache the straps of my pack chafing my shoulders,
but I kept pace with my father. He moved ahead of me with
practice ease constantly scanning The Horizon as if
expecting trouble. It was almost noon when Dad
paused on the trail staring intently into a stand of
Lodgepole Pines. Hold up, he said quietly, what
is it game? Trail curious where it leads.
I sighed loudly enough for him to hear, but he ignored it and
stepped off the main path. The trail, he chose was barely
more than a hint of disturbed grass winding through a Grove.
So dense that branches scratched at our jackets.
I swallowed my complaints following closely behind.
Less than a quarter-mile later, we found it.
My stomach Twisted into a tight knot there, tucked against a
rocky slope beneath Twisted, dying Pines stood, a crude
shelter, the walls were built from elk, antlers cracked bones
and rotting wood, every piece whether by exposure.
It looked like something built by someone desperate or insane.
A heap of sharp angles and organic debris.
My eyes Trail to cross, the Twisted shape and nausea Rosen.
My throat as I realized many of the bones had been nod.
Dad my voice barely carried above a whisper.
He didn't respond, instead he knelt and ran his fingers slowly
over one of the wooden support beams.
Then he abruptly recoiled, eyes narrowing.
I stepped closer feeling the chill seep through my coat
embedded in the grain of the weather would wear teeth.
Human teeth. Ivory white to yelo'd Roots,
intact Force, deep into the timber.
I could feel my pulse Quicken breath fogging in short bursts
Dad. We shouldn't be here.
He nodded his eyes darkening. Without another word, he turned
away and walked back, the way we'd come faster than before I
hurried after him glancing back only once at the terrible
shelter, it seemed to mock our intrusion a dark Jagged shape
standing Stark against the thin Forest.
We hiked in another mile down, a steep slope toward a rushing
glacial stream before Dad. Finally stopped.
We set camp in silence, working quickly as dusk seeped across
the landscape. Dad spoke little only giving
brief instructions. His eyes seemed focused on
something far away. Something only, he could see
Nightfall came rapidly bringing with it a bitter wind.
I zipped myself into the tent and stared at the thin nylon
walls, listening to the stream hiss and churn nearby.
Sleep came in Restless fits, and it felt like only moments passed
before a sound woke. Me crunch crunch.
I sat upright my pulse pounding, in my ears.
The sound came again, slow and deliberate like footsteps
circling above our camp, I turned toward dad, he was
already awake. His eyes fixed on the darkness
beyond the tent. He lifted a finger to his lips
and shook his head, slowly crunch snap, whatever it was, it
circled us twice before moving away.
When silence, finally returned, neither of us, moved waiting
desperately for Dawn, the Morning Light brought relief,
but also dread our camp, looked different Small Things,
scattered items, shifted subtly from where we left the Dad stood
at the edge of our clearing his posture stiff.
I approached quietly Then followed his gaze down to the
ground. Resting on a Flat Rock placed.
There intentionally was a pair of military issue.
Jungle boots, worn down. Split at the souls.
They looked as though, they'd spent years in these mountains.
Dad. Melts slowly staring at them.
His face was pale. What is it?
I asked the part of me. Didn't want the answer.
He exhaled slowly, his voice tight.
These belonged to someone, I knew Sergeant Bill Navara he
disappeared up here. Maybe six years back, they never
found him. The silence that followed was
heavier than any weed. Shared before, I stared at those
boots trying to ignore the way, the wind now felt colder the
trees more oppressive Dad. I finally whispered, I think
someone wants us gone. His eyes met mine, colder, and
more haunted than I'd ever seen them.
Know Rachel, I think someone wants us to stay.
My father didn't speak again until mid-morning, we sat
quietly by the small fire, he'd built sipping, bitter coffee.
My nerves felt frayed, from lack of sleep, in the creeping unease
that had taken hold. I stared into the smoldering
Embers. Hoping he'd break the silence.
First. Finally, he spoke his voice
heavy with something. I couldn't quite identify Rachel
about those boots. I glanced up, he was looking
directly at me, his expression, tents the lines of his face
deeper than I remembered. They were building navarros, he
continued voice hushed as if even the trees might overhear.
He disappeared hiking solo up here.
Back in 2019, no traces, no leads.
Nothing. Search and rescue teams, combed
these mountains for weeks? I knew Bill well enough to
recognize those boots anywhere. How can you be sure my question
felt foolish even, as I said it. The laces.
He said, softly Bill always used red paracord.
It was his way of being prepared.
I taught him that I swallowed hard feeling the forest around
us, tightened like a snare, maybe someone found them, maybe
it's a coincidence. He shook his head slowly, I
don't think so. Whatever we stumbled into here.
It's not random. The silence fell between us
again, oppressive. We broke Camp, intense quiet
packing, swiftly every sound, felt louder, the crunch of pine
needles. Beneath our Boots.
The rustling of gear are breaths, sharp and shallow, the
weight of our packs. Grew heavier as if the air
itself, resisted our movement. By midday weed, moved a few
miles south, along the trail. I tried to focus on the terrain,
the vast Granite faces, the sharp contrast of Alpine grass
against patches of snow, but my eyes kept drifting back up the
ridge toward the shelter. We'd left behind Then around
mid-afternoon, dad, stopped abruptly and pointed to the
distance. A thin ribbon of smoke curled
upward against a pale cloudy Sky somewhere near the ridge.
We'd left earlier, It Rose and dissipated gently far too cold
to be accidental yet. Oddly faint, barely visible.
If someone camping up there, I asked, though, I doubted my own
suggestion, two remote dad murmured eyes, narrowed, not a
good spot. No water source nearby.
We watched it silently for another few minutes.
Eventually the smoke faded entirely leaving, no trace it
had ever existed. Dad's jaw tightened, let's keep
moving. Evening, descended quickly
blanketing The Valley in shades of grey and blue.
Dad chose a new campsite cautiously selecting an open
area with good visibility. We built a larger fire.
This time, arranging rocks, carefully around its perimeter.
He retrieved a hatchet in a flare gun from his pack placing
both within easy reach. His preparation, only
heightened, my anxiety. We barely spoke through dinner.
Ears. Straining to pick up.
Anything on usual. Just as the Shadows deepened I
moved down a shallow slope to gather water from a stream.
My breath caught, when something shifted in my peripheral vision,
I froze slowly, raising my eyes toward the ridge of us.
A figure stood outlined against the fading Twilight.
Tall gaunt and angular. Its form was distorted by the
dimness but clearly not an animal.
Its arms hung unnaturally long at its sides torso, impossibly
thin, I stood paralyzed heart hammering in my chest dad.
I whispered urgently barely audible up on the ridge.
He appeared next to me following my gaze upward but the figure
was already gone. Only empty space remained framed
by rocks and Pines I felt a deep chill settle into my bones.
I saw it I insisted softly fighting back the Tremor in my
voice. Someone was watching us.
He nodded Gravely, I believe you, we hurried back to Camp
building the fire higher feeding it dry wood until Flames leaped
and crackled. I pulled my jacket tightly
around my shoulders, scanning the dark edges of our campsite
As night fell fully dread pressed in around us heavy and
tangible. Then we heard it.
Footsteps. Again, slow and deliberate
circling just beyond the fires glow.
Dad gripped. The hatchet tightly jaw
clenched. The steps moved with Precision
pausing occasionally as if measuring our reactions.
We sat Frozen listening. Barely breathing.
Suddenly something landed near the fire.
Making me jump. I stared in horror as Dad leaned
forward, lifting the object from the ground, his fingers trembled
slightly as he held it up to the firelight an army patch. his
face drained of color, as he turned it over, he traced the
emblem gently with his thumb, his breathing ragged eyes,
glassy with emotion, This is from my old unit, he whispered.
His voice cracked on the words, grief and confusion spilling
from him openly for the first time in my life. this this
belonged to one of the others, One of the missing my stomach
churned. How many went missing?
Dad. He exhaled deeply fighting back,
visible pain, 4:00 for soldiers from my unit, vanished up here,
between 2009 and 2018, always alone, always Without a Trace.
I felt tears, stinging, my eyes, the reality of our situation
hitting me with terrifying Clarity, something followed us
from that shelter. Something that knows you before.
He could respond, a new sound froze.
Us, both directly behind the tent close enough to touch the
thin nylon. Walls, came deep rhythmic.
Breathing it sounded wet and heavy.
Inhaling long and slow. As if taking us in savoring, our
presence dad lifted his finger silently eyes locked on mine,
shaking his head once Neither of us.
Dared to move. Barely breathing ourselves.
We waited muscles, taught Minds frantically searching for escape
until eventually the sound stopped.
But the silence that replaced. It was infinitely worse.
When everything essential was secured, dad reached into his
pack and pulled out a small canister of kerosene.
One, he'd carried for emergencies.
In Swift practiced motions. He began rigging a crude
tripwire between two narrow trees near our campsites Edge.
He laid fishing line at ankle height.
Barely visible securing it. Tightly between two sticks that
supported the canister above. A small prepared mound of
Tinder. What's this?
I whispered sharply confused a warning or distraction, his tone
was flat Resolute when this trip.
It'll flash up quick. If something's following us will
have a few seconds. I swallowed hard realizing.
This wasn't just caution. He was setting a trap.
Whatever stalked us wasn't, just some wild animal.
It was something else entirely something calculated.
We extinguished most of our fire leaving just glowing Embers and
waited in the bitter chill. The minutes dragged on
torturous, snapping twig, or rustling Branch, jolting my
heart. Eventually, I saw Dad glanced at
his watch frowning deeply. Its past one.
He whispered, let's move. We hoisted our packs and took
our first cautious steps away from Camp, barely daring to
breathe the forest. Around us felt suffocating every
shadow hiding unseen threats. We'd made it maybe 50 yards
following our carefully marked GPS, route through dense trees
when a sharp crack echoed from behind.
And instant later a bright orange, flash erupted in the
darkness, briefly Illuminating, the trees like a violent
sunrise. We both spun around eyes
widening and horror as a figure emerged Through the flames,
briefly silhouetted by the flickering Blaze.
My heart lurched, it was impossibly tall.
It may CD with a long gated Limbs and pale.
Ash covered skin. That stretched over prominent
bones. Its jaw hung grotesquely wide
and open Mall of Blackness. And even in that Split Second
Glimpse, I could tell there were no eyes only empty Hallows Run
Dad shouted, grabbing my arm and yanking me forward.
Adrenaline surged through me obliterating.
The pain in my legs as we plunged into a panicked Sprint.
Branches clawed at my face and neck.
I stumbled repeatedly nearly losing my footing on slick,
rocks and Tangled undergrowth. Dad's breathing was harsh beside
me matching mine and sheer desperation.
Behind us, crashing steps. Echoed relentlessly heavy, and
deliberate drawing closer with every stride.
I slipped hard my knee slamming onto Shale sending sharp pain,
slicing upward through my body. Dad hauled me up with out.
Pause his grip, iron tight. We pushed forward blindly driven
by fear and Instinct alone, then the whistles started, sharp
shrill, sounds piercing the night, they echoed strangely
distorted almost mimicking human voices, but Twisted into
something far worse. It felt as though they came from
every direction at once impossible to pinpoint. my
throat tightened in panic, the trail, blurred ahead lit, dimly
by our shaking headlamps, The figure behind us.
Crashed through brush and branches persistent, but
strangely measured matching our frantic Pace as if it were
playing a twisted. Game, my lungs, burned each
breath ragged every step becoming heavier and slower.
Still dad pushed us forward unwilling to slow down just as
the sky began to lighten faint. Hints of dawn Illuminating the
Peaks around us, the terrain leveled out a surge of Hope
jolted me we were close to the parking area.
Our truck parked safely, just beyond this final stretch of
wilderness. Dad, I gasped voice raw from
exertion were almost there. We stumbled together our Pace
frantic and uneven desperate to reach the dirt.
Lot ahead behind us. The creatures Pursuit had
slowed, the whistles fading to silence, replaced.
Only by distant Erie, cracking, sounds, neither of us.
Dare to look back. Finally, our boots met packed
dirt, familiar ground beneath us at last We reached the truck in
seconds hands shaking violently as Dad fumbled the keys.
Finally, on locking the doors. I practically threw myself
inside chest heaving painfully, dad started, the engine
immediately spinning gravel as we pulled away racing down the
narrow road. Neither of us spoke during the
drive back towards civilization. Exhaustion, seeped into my bones
and I stared out the passenger window seeing nothing but dark
trees and shadowed mountains. when we reach the ranger station
in our later, the sun was fully risen bathing the world in an
oddly, normal light, that felt surreal The Rangers listened
carefully to Dad's recounting disbelief and concern mixing on
their faces. Two days later.
A search team returned to the coordinates.
We provided dad and I waited in anxious silence for their
report, but what they found offered, no relief, only further
confusion, The entire Ridge had been burned black charred trees
and scorched rocks, stretching. As far as they could see.
The strange bone and wood shelter, the booths.
The signs of whatever had stalked us.
Nothing remained. Not a single piece of evidence
survived the flames. We never returned to the Wind
River range. Dad stopped.
Guiding trips retreating further into himself.
He began writing letters. Quiet.
Apologies to the families of those lost men from his old
unit. He never shared their replies if
there ever were any Years later, I framed that Army patch
sealing. It carefully beneath glass below
it in small precise. Handwriting I noted the GPS
coordinates, we'd marked bloodrage a place now wiped from
a fisherman Maps existing only in our memories and Nightmares.
I always knew Snowshoe Gulch had a reputation most trails around
Flathead National Forest do especially if you talk to the
locals, who've spent their lives Hunting Fishing and guiding
tourists through these mountains.
Growing up here. I had heard the whispers, The
quiet warnings about places that didn't feel quite right.
My brother Eli and I would joke about it sometimes those strange
stories calling them, campfire, talk or old-timer paranoia.
But neither of us ever laughed too loud and we always watch the
tree line carefully when the Shadows stretched long.
When Eli went missing with his client Eric Halsted in early,
January of 2019, those Whispers came back louder and colder. 3
days after they fail to return, Flathead County, search and
rescue was outcoming. The trails trying to pick up
their tracks, I didn't join the main group even though they'd
asked me, Instead, I teamed up with Nathan, two feathers, a
blackfeet Tracker. I'd known since we were kids,
And two other, volunteers, Deputy Greg Weller from the
sheriff's department, and Jesse a local.
Who'd been riding snowmobiles through these forests almost as
long as I had, We left Before Sunrise engines, cutting through
the silence headlights piercing, the heavy snow.
Flurries that rolled over the mountains it took three hours of
riding. Before we finally reached the
edge of Snowshoe Gulch It wasn't a place meant for snowmobiling
two, steep, too narrow and notoriously unpredictable.
But Eliza GPS had pinged near here before going silent.
Nathan, slowed ahead of me, signaling, we stop.
His expression was solemn beneath the fur-lined hood of
his parka. This place feels wrong, Nathan
said simply killing his engine. He gazed through the trees eyes
narrowed. My grandfather refused to hunt
here. He called a place the forest
wooden take back. Greg chuckled nervously, trying
to lighten the mood. Come on, too, feathers.
Let's not spook ourselves before we even get started.
Nathan ignored him and looks straight at me.
Caleb, if your brother came here willingly, he had a good reason,
Eli was smart. I nodded silently Eli was
experienced careful. If he'd come here, something had
drawn him. We rode slowly into The Gulch
engines growling as we navigated Fallen trees and drifts higher
than our waists the deeper, we went the quieter, everything
became no Birdsong, no rustling of branches, just a thick
oppressive silence. Jesse spotted the sleds, first
pointing wordlessly. They sat in a small clearing
nose to nose in A Perfect Circle.
Headlights, still faintly glowing beneath snowdrifts.
Why would they Park like that? Jesse whispered unease creeping
into his voice. I moved closer brushing snow
from the seat of Eliza sled. His keys were still in the
ignition. The fuel gauge, read half full
it made no sense, Eli was meticulous disciplined.
He wouldn't abandon his machine in such an odd formation Nathan
crouched by the tracks, leading away from the snowmobiles.
Two sets of prints. He said, no Panic.
No running. They walked, we followed the
footprints carefully. Through the snow until they
ended abruptly at a frozen Creek.
Greg stepped cautiously onto the ice, shining his flashlight
through the layers, solid thick. No cracks no signs of someone
breaking through. Impossible.
Greg muttered, disbelief coloring his voice tracks, don't
just disappear, Nathan stood, quietly, studying the trees
above the creek, his breath clouding in the fading daylight.
Something erased them, this place doesn't belong to us.
It never did. The sun sank behind the
Ridgeline bringing Swift Darkness.
We set up camp on a flat rise, overlooking?
The clearing lighting of fire, that crackled softly against the
suffocating Stillness of the forest Nathan silently.
Scattered tobacco to the four directions around our camp.
Greg watched skeptically his mouth forming questions.
He never asked. Jesse paced restlessly near the
fire glancing constantly toward the Shadows. after the others
bedded down, I sat awake staring into the dark trees Somewhere
Out, There was Eli. I couldn't shake the feeling
that something watched us. I glanced at Nathan.
He hadn't moved from his spot by the fire.
I moved closer Whispering. What did your grandfather say
lived out here? Nathan didn't look at me.
Just gazed on blinking into the flames.
He called it. The Eater of men old hungry,
something from the times. When these mountains belong to
no tribe. He said it sleeps until someone
wakes it. I shivered despite the fires
heat before I could reply Jesse jerked awake nearby, his eyes
wide and panic. He scrambled backward, pointing
frantically toward the trees behind me.
I saw someone Jesse gasped, voice, shaking, someone tall,
walking out there behind the trees.
We grabbed flashlights and weapons immediately.
Scanning the darkness beyond the camps glow.
Nothing, no tracks, no movement, only endless Shadows cast by
trees and snow. You imagine it.
Greg grumbled clearly irritated but uncertain, but Jesse shook
his head firmly retreating closer to the fire.
I know what I saw. Nathan watched silently jaw
tenz, then he turns slowly back toward the fire sleep.
If you can tomorrow will be harder.
I tried to rest but sleep wouldn't come.
Each Russell of the branches made my heart leap.
Every shadow became something standing there watching.
I lay awake eyes. Open waiting for more morning.
knowing in my gut that whatever was out here was waiting to
Morning, broke gray, and bitter. A low-hanging, missed shrouding
Snowshoe. Gulch like a damp cloak.
Sleep had eluded me coming only in Restless bursts.
I woke exhausted with Nathan already, packing gear,
methodically Greg stood nearby, pacing, impatiently glancing
between his watch and the silent trees.
Jesse sat close to the dying Embers of our fire staring
blankly into the snow. I pulled my coat tighter
ignoring the knot of dread in my stomach.
We ate quickly mostly in silence our conversation, limited to
planning. Nathan stood shouldered his pack
and spoke quietly. We followed the tracks as far as
they lead, then we reconsider everyone stays within eyesight.
We retraced our steps back to the Frozen Creek.
The footprints remained. Exactly.
As we'd left them, Vanishing, inexplicably at the ice Edge.
Nathan Nelson again, brushing away fresh snow, with a gloved
hand. This wasn't natural.
He muttered softly barely loud enough for me to hear.
Greg, cleared his throat. Impatiently eager to dismiss,
Nathan superstitions. Then, let's find what did it and
be done where wasting daylight? Nathan said, nothing Rising
slowly. I scanning the ridge ahead with
no clear Trail. We climb the Steep incline
ahead, picking our way through Tangled brush and dense Pines.
Snow crunched beneath our boots echoing oddly through the silent
woods the farther. We ascended, the more
oppressive, the quiet became pressing down around us.
Halfway up, Jesse. Stopped abruptly voiced.
Trembling what the hell is that? We turned following his gaze
upward, about 20 feet above wedged firmly into the trunk of
a towering? Pine was the partially eaten
skull of a deer. Its jaw hung crookedly.
Empty eye sockets, staring down at us, grotesque and Hollow.
I felt bile rise in my throat. Who could do that.
Jesse whispered Greg stepped forward examining it closer.
His face of mixture of disgust and confusion.
No blood, no drag marks. Greg said, this doesn't make
sense. Nathan was staring at the trees
around us eyes, wide, and alert. He motioned for silence pointing
to something further ahead. We moved cautiously eyes
searching through the Gloom. A dozen yards up limbs of
animals, antlers deer legs were wedged between branches arranged
deliberately high of the ground. Everything appeared drained
dried almost mummified. I glanced at Nathan whose face
had turned pale. He shook his head slowly voiced
tight, This is a warning. It wants us gone.
Greg, snorted angrily, visibly shaken.
This is just some sick, local playing games.
Nathan met his eyes without blinking.
No man. Did this Silence hung heavy
between us finally. Nathan spoke voice firm, but
quiet. I will go no further, whatever.
Woke up in this place, is older than us.
We have intruded enough I stared at him, anger and fearing inside
me, my brother still out here. Nathan, I'm not leaving until we
find him. Nathan's eyes, softened briefly
Symphony in his gaze. I won't risk all of our Lives,
not for this. Greg said his jaw defiantly,
then stay here. Caleb and I will finish this I
nodded though, my pulse pounded, in my ears, Jesse looked back
and forth on certainly then quietly took a step toward
Nathan. Allstate too.
He said avoiding my gaze. I I can't without another word
Greg and I pressed upward. The air seemed to grow colder.
Biting through my clothing, my fingers tightened on the handle
of my flash light Knuckles aching from the grip after a few
exhausting minutes. We reached the crest of the
ridge Greg stops suddenly eyes wide face, drained of color.
Caleb. He whispered hoarsely ahead of
us, barely visible. In the snowdrift was a dark
shape. A sleeve a bright orange Park.
A sleeve. My heart seized painfully, as we
scrambled forward frantically, digging Eric halstead's Frozen,
face emerged rigid, and twisted into a final Grimace of Terror.
His body was curled in a tight. Fetal position, both feet bare
blackened, with frostbite, his eyes, stared sightless at the
sky. Jesus, Greg breathed stepping
back horror evident on his face, what happened to him?
I stood numb unable to tear my gaze from the expression of pure
dread-locked onto Eric's face. A sudden snapping sound echoed
through the trees behind us, making us both spin around.
Greg raised his rifle Flash Light Beam slicing through the
thickening Gloom. The woods were empty.
Yet, I could feel something there.
Heavy and unseen breathing slowly patiently.
The hairs on my neck as silence, reclaimed the forest, let's get
him back. I finally whispered we carried
Eric down awkwardly, our breath misting, the air, and hurried
bursts, every step feeling heavier than the last Nathan and
Jesse met us halfway their expressions.
Grim Nathan's eyes, never left. Eric's body, leave him here.
Nathan said voice flat Greg, bristled Furious like hell, we
will. Nathan didn't Flinch, didn't
move. Don't bring The Marked One to
the fire. It knows.
Greg cursed bitterly but I waved him silent.
Will bury him nearby. Then I said quietly, ignoring
the nausea rising in my throat. We dug hurriedly placing Eric
carefully in the shallow grave covering him swiftly with frozen
Earth and snow All the while Nathan stood watching the
darkening Woods lips moving softly in prayer.
That night around our fire. We barely spoke Greg.
Stared angrily into the darkness.
Gripping his rifle tightly. Jesse curled up near the fire
eyes. Wide with Terror flinching at
every sound Nathan remained Silent Gaze fixed on the tree
line as exhaustion. Finally pulled it me, I heard it
a slow heavy crunching through the snow.
Circling our camp just be on the reach of the firelight.
Each footfall was deliberate. Patient and close when I lifted
my head to look nothing moved. Yet, the sound continued
circling endlessly. Never quite seen.
I shut my eyes unable to block it out.
As sleep, claimed me one thought echoed relentlessly in my mind.
We were never alone out here. I woke to an Ash and Dawn Frost
biting sharply at my Exposed Skin.
The fire had burned down to Embers, leaving the campsite
gray and lifeless. I sat up stiffly body sore and
mind still haunted by the heavy footsteps.
I heard circling our camp through the night.
Across from me, Nathan was already awake.
Silently sharpening, a knife eyes, distant, and troubled.
I stood stretching out the ache in my limbs scanning the
surroundings. Jesse was pacing nervously.
Head bowed, hands, trembling. Greg, loaded his rifle,
carefully, his jaw set, tight with grim determination.
Nathan, finally spoke eyes meeting mine briefly before
turning back to his blade. We need to leave.
There's nothing left here. We can say.
My brother still out there. Nathan.
I said, voice rough from the cold.
I won't leave him. Nathan sighed heavily setting
his knife down. He stood slowly meeting my eyes.
Caleb, your brother isn't here anymore.
Not the way you remember him. This place doesn't return what
it takes? Greg interrupted sharply
stepping forward. Enough with this Superstition.
We saw Eric's body. There's still hope Eli is a live
out here. Nathan's eyes, darkened, what's
a live out? Here is an Eli anymore.
I hesitated uncertainty tightening my throat.
Then Greg touched my shoulder voice firm and reassuring.
We came here to find him. Let's finish it.
I nodded slowly pushing away Nathan's warning and adjusted my
pack. Jesse shook his head quickly
backing toward Nathan, I am staying here.
I can't go back up there. Nathan placed, a reassuring hand
on Jessie's shoulder watching, Greg and me prepared to leave.
As we moved into the trees Nathan called, softly, his
voice. Carrying clearly in the silence.
If you see it, don't run. Don't look it in the eyes.
The climb back to the ridge was grueling silence stretched
between us broken only by the sound of our breathing.
Greg LED rifle, clenched tightly and gloved hands.
My thoughts, spiraled fear gnawing at the edge of my
resolve. As we crested the ridge, we
froze. The trees here had changed
overnight branches. Snapped cleanly arranged in a
crude Circle. Limbs twisted, like grotesque
sculptures in the snow, clearly visible were Eliza Boot prints
leading deeper into the woods. My pulse quickened, hope and
Dread Tangled painfully together.
Greg stepped forward cautiously examining the tracks.
These are fresh. He said softly, motioning me
onward. We followed slowly scanning
every shadow each breath tense and shallow the prince wound
deeper into the forest disappearing behind a dense wall
of Tangled Pines. Then from just beyond those
trees came, Eli's voice, Finn Halo unmistakable.
Caleb is that you I broke forward without thinking
desperation, propelling me past Greg.
He called out sharply behind me, but I didn't slow I pushed
through the dense branches emerging into a small clearing.
Eli stood at the far end Barefoot in the snow is glazed.
Lips cracked. His parka hung torn from his
shoulders skin pale and blue beneath.
He trembled violently staring blankly through me.
Eli. I said breath hitching.
We're here. We found you.
He didn't move, didn't acknowledge my words.
Instead, his eyes widened focused Beyond me Terror,
flooding his features. A guttural roar erupted from the
trees behind us. Echoing painfully through the
clearing. Greg spun around rifle raised
shouting. I grabbed Eliza arm pulling him
toward me panic surging in my chest.
Run Greg shouted firing blindly into the trees, his shots echoed
uselessly swallowed by the forest.
I pulled Eli forwards stumbling through snow heart hammering
wildly. Behind me.
I heard Greg scream. A raw agonized sound abruptly
silent. I didn't turn back.
We burst through the trees slipping and falling toward
Nathan and Jesse's waiting forums below.
Nathan rushed to meet us eyes wide with urgency.
Keep moving. He shouted gripping Eliza other
arm. Pulling us down toward the camp.
Behind us. Branches snapped violently
something. Massive.
Pursuing unseen its Pace steady relentless, My lungs burned, as
we scrambled to the snowmobiles Jesse started the engines
frantically Terror etched on his face, Nathan shoved, Eli onto
the sled behind Jesse turning sharply toward the trees,
chanting urgently under his breath.
Then he pushed me toward the sled eyes, fears and clear.
Go, he commanded the engines roared to life drowning out, the
deafening Silence of the forest. I hesitated only a second before
climbing on glancing back, just long enough to see Nathan facing
the trees defiantly lips, moving knife, drawn, then we were
speeding away, The Gulch disappearing behind us in a blur
of white and Shadow we rode hard not slowing until we reached
open ground near the main trails.
Only then did Jesse finally killed the engine.
I slid off legs shaking and turned to Eli.
He sat motionless eyes distant murmuring softly to himself.
Jesse stood back breathing heavily pale and shaken.
In that quiet moment, Eliza Whisperers became clear.
It watches through the bone, it watches through the bones.
Two days later. Eli was found wandering.
Barefoot down. An Old Logging Road miles from
Snowshoe Gulch. He remembered nothing offering
only fractured whispers about the tall one and the Eater of
men. Greg's Body was never recovered.
Weeks passed before I visited Eli in the psychiatric facility
in Kalispell. He refused to go near windows at
night, eyes, always fixed fearfully on Shadows.
As I prepared to leave, he finally spoke clearly his voice
strained Halo. You can't see it unless it wants
you to but you feel it. It waits behind the cold.
I left him there. Haunted by his words in the
knowledge, that whatever we awakened out in Snowshoe Gulch
still lingered patient and hungry waiting silently behind
the trees. Lake of the Woods, had always
been a sanctuary for me. A sprawling Maze of ice-covered
water, spanning the border between Minnesota and Ontario.
I'd fished here every winter for more than 35 years sometimes
with my wife but mostly alone. She'd preferred summers at the
cabin near Bemidji. When cancer took her last July,
everything changed. This winter more than ever, I
needed the Solitude. I needed to disappear for a
while to lose myself in the Stillness of ice, fishing, and
silence. I loaded my sled in snowmobile.
At first light packing carefully, I saw her propane
heater caught Lantern, canned, food, water, and extra fuel.
As I drove deeper onto the Frozen expanse toward the
isolated chain of eyelets known as Devil's elbow.
The morning, sun cast, a pale glow over the ice turning, the
world's silver, and Ghostly, It was miles from the resorts in
the crowds. Perfect isolation, just as I'd
planned. The ride was familiar.
I knew every Bend every cluster of pines and every patch of
rough ice I stopped near the southern tip of the largest
island. Checking ice thickness with
practice caution, 18 inches more than enough.
Within minutes, I drilled a hole and had the Shacks set up around
it. The wind breaking against the
heavy canvas walls as I lit my heater and settled in For the
first time in months, I felt truly alone but it was a
comforting loneliness. The first night, passed quietly
dinner from a warmed can coffee brewed in a dented Kettle, a dog
eared, paperback to occupy my mind and sleep on the narrow
caught. Dreams came easy.
Something rare these days and I woke at Sunrise, feeling better
than I had in months after breakfast.
I ventured North on the snowmobile to visit an old shack
belonging to a friend Jim Barrett, who had long since
moved South for better Winters. I hadn't expected anyone would
be around and sure enough The Shack was deserted.
Everything neatly locked up On impulse I drilled a quick test
hole nearby and was rewarded immediately two, good sized
walleye satisfied. I marked the spot mentally
planning to return Again. By late afternoon clouds.
Had gathered dimming the sun to a thin yellow smudge on the
horizon. The temperature dropped sharply,
sending bitter gusts across the open Ice.
I hurried back to my shack. The hum of the snowmobile engine
Fading Into A deafening silence as I parked at close to the
canvas walls. Inside I cooked dinner and ready
to myself for another long, quiet evening.
Sleep took hold quickly again but Sometime Late in the night.
I jerked away. Annoys had Disturbed me, I sat
up on my cot listening intently breathing shallowly, it came
again a slow measured crunch footsteps approaching steadily
over the ice, I froze, heart hammering, my Lantern had gone
out in the shack was dark except for moonlight filtering weekly
through frosted canvas, the crunching continued, methodical
and unhurried. Circling the shack, I gripped,
the edge of the cot listening for any sign of human presence,
a voice breathing anything, but there was none only footsteps
heavy Carefully. I eased toward the small window
slit and peered through a gap in the frost The ice outside was
empty, Moonlight washed the surface white but no silhouette
broke the desolation. Still the footsteps continued
Around Me, Slowly circling sometimes stopping abruptly,
then starting again, each step Hollow and impossibly heavy, I
held still not daring to breathe deeply every muscle rigid after
what felt like ours but might have only been minutes.
The footsteps moved away. Fading Into silence, I didn't
sleep again. I waited listening until dawn
when the sky finally paled, I Found the courage to unzip the
shack and step cautiously outside cold air bit at my face.
The ice bred pristine and empty in every direction.
But as I circled around my shack, my stomach tightened,
clear Footprints and bear had pressed deeply into the snow and
ice looping in an even circle around the shack.
What chilled me to the Bone. Wasn't the size or shape of the
prince though? They were disturbingly large and
elongated. It was that they started
suddenly Midway across the ice with no Trail leading up to them
and ended just as abruptly, a few yards away, whatever had
visited me hadn't walked in or walked away.
It had simply appeared in vanished leaving nothing but
Footprints in silence. Morning broke heavy and gray
shrouding. The lake in thick drifting fog,
that seemed to swallow the distant Islands entirely.
I stood for a long while in front of the shack staring at
those unnatural Footprints and disbelief.
There was no logical explanation.
Nothing in all my years of fishing and hunting this land
that could make sense of it. I shook off the thoughts and
tried to steady Myself by returning to routine.
I reached for the radio calling out on the local channel,
anybody copy. It's Tom Braddock out near
Devil's elbow thinking of heading in early and anyone
around only static replied that wasn't unusual this far out but
today, it felt oppressive My cell phone was useless, no bars
of reception to Anchor me to civilization.
I was completely alone and for the first time in decades, that
truth on settled me, I ate a small breakfast of cold jerky
and stale crackers. Glancing out at the icy, surface
of the lake now blanketed by a fresh dusting of snow.
Memories from the night lingered in the Forefront of my mind, two
real to dismiss. Determined to distract myself, I
climbed onto my snowmobile and decided to return to Jim
Barrett's, old shack. Perhaps there'd be something.
There some overlooked clue something familiar to help
settle. The twisting unease in my gut.
The ride was short but tense, my eyes constantly darting toward
the islands and the Treeline expecting movement that never
came. I arrived quickly but as soon as
the shack came into view dread Rose, sharply inside me.
Something had changed. I parked and stepped off the
snowmobile slowly cautious. The front wall of Jim's Shaq was
ripped outward, the thick plywood splintered as though it
had exploded from within. My pulse quickened.
I approached slowly boots crunching quietly through fresh
snow. My breath, fogging in the bitter
are inside was chaos. The cot Jim had left folded
neatly in the corner was shattered canvas shredded into
ragged ribbons. Blood dark and Frozen stained
the floorboards and pulled in the corner spreading outward
toward the door. Despite the violence evident
everywhere. None of the gear had been
Disturbed. Jim's Tackle Box, sat untouched
and his propane heater and Lantern, were neatly stacked as
if nothing had happened. There was no body no Trail just
blood too much blood for a man to have left behind and still
walk away. I backed out quickly feeling
dizzy, the forested islands. Now seemed to press closer, dark
shapes, looming silently at the edge of my vision.
Panic tightened my throat, as I mounted the snowmobile and drove
back toward my shack, forcing myself, not to glance back at
the devastation I'd found. Thoughts raced frantically
animal attack, perhaps a bear waking early from hibernation,
or maybe someone dangerous, who had hidden out there, but none
of these explanations could silence the fear, Rising sharply
inside me. Back at my own Shack.
I hurried to pack my gear shoving items quickly and
haphazardly into the sled. But as I worked, a sinking
realization crept over me. The sun was already dipping
toward the Horizon. Shadow stretching long across
the ice. If I tried leaving now, the
slush patches forming under the snowpack, could trap me miles
from Shore. Leaving me helplessly stranded
in the Darkness. After a desperate internal
debate, I decided my safest move was to wait until first light
night. Fell quickly darker than I
remembered ever seeing it. I sat silently on my cot flare
gun clutched. Tightly staring at the canvas
walls as wind whispered around the shack.
It wasn't long after Darkness settled completely that I heard
the sound a Halo mournful howl that seemed to carry impossibly
far across the frozen lake. It wasn't the howl of a wolf or
the call of any animal I'd heard in my long life.
The sound seeped through the shack walls, reverberating
through my bones, Primal and wrong.
My hands shook, as I Rose carefully and piqued through the
narrow window, slit toward the nearest Island, scarcely visible
in the dim Starlight. A dark shape stood just within
the Treeline tall gaunt and unnaturally still.
It stood straight and motionless.
Staring directly across the ice to toward my shack.
I stranded my eyes searching for details, but Darkness swallowed
them. The figure remained perfectly
motionless. Waiting watching a lowered
myself, slowly onto the cot, barely breathing muscles, rigid
with fear. Second's turned into minutes
each stretching painfully tension building like pressure
beneath thin ice. Suddenly footsteps approached
again, crunching slowly toward me.
I clenched the flare gun tighter finger, trembling against the
trigger, then came the soft, tap one single knock against the
canvas wall behind me, clear and unmistakable.
My chest tightened heart, racing wildly silence, followed thick,
absolute smothering. I waited motionless for another
sound but nothing followed. The Shack became unbearably
still, the only sound my ragged breath sleep.
Eventually claimed me, though, I fought it desperately terrified
by what, lay just beyond the thin walls that separated me,
from whatever, lurked in the Frozen darkness.
And as I drifted off, I knew beyond doubt that it would
return before morning. I jerked awake at first light
startled by the sharp cold biting my skin, My breath
clouded heavily inside the shack and a thin layer of frost had
formed along the walls overnight.
Everything felt dangerously still.
As though, the lake itself had frozen solid in its sleep.
The memory of last night's tapping resurfaced quickly
making my pulse Quicken I forced myself upright aching and stiff
from tension and began. Hastily Gathering my belongings.
Ignoring organization. I threw my gear into the sled.
Caught heater supplies all jammed together.
I was passed caring about broken equipment.
Panic was taking hold compelling.
Me toward only one goal Escape my hands shook as I secured the
last tie down in glanced, nervously across the ice toward
the tree line, no movement Disturbed.
The Silent Pine's, but the feeling of being watched never
left. As I climbed onto the
snowmobile, the motor fired to life instantly, its growl
breaking, the heavy silence. I glanced behind me once more
expecting to see the dark figure emerging from the trees, but saw
nothing. Gritting my teeth.
I opened the throttle wide accelerating quickly across the
open Ice toward the ranger Outpost. 12 miles away.
For a few minutes, I let relief creep into my thoughts, feeling
my muscles loosen. I was getting away.
It was going to be all right. But then something in the side
mirror caught my eye. Snapping me back into full
alertness. A shape moved behind me, dark
against the white expanse of Ice impossibly Fast, my chest
tightened, and my breath came sharply.
I risked, a quick look over my shoulder.
What I saw sent raw, panics surging through me.
Aunt figure, pursued me relentlessly running upright in
an unnatural jerking motion. It moved too fast bounding
forward. In massive strides long arms
swinging low beside its emaciated body.
Its skin was pale and leathery almost gray stretched.
Tightly over prominent ribs and sharp joints.
Even from this distance, its eyes, burned bright and Hollow.
Desperation gripped. Me and I pressed the throttle
harder. My snowmobile surged forward
engine whining and protest. The figure behind let out a
strange guttural cry. A sound somewhere between
choking and rage. The ice ahead looked fragile now
riddled with pockets of slush and Dark Water seeping through
cracks. I knew I was pushing the limit
but slowing down wasn't an option, glancing back again, the
creature had closed the Gap terrifyingly fast.
In a frantic bid to buy myself Time, I grabbed the flare gun
from my coat pocket, aimed shakily upward and fired.
The Flair rocketed into the gray sky exploding in a bright.
Burst that momentarily. Distracted the pursuing figure
it. Pause briefly shielding its face
from the sudden Blaze and I gained precious distance.
Just as I felt a glimmer of hope the snowmobile alerted violently
skis, plunging into a slush pocket hidden beneath fresh
snow. The machine stopped abruptly.
Pitching me forward ice cracked loudly.
Beneath me water rushing into the newly opened hole pulling
the snowmobile underwear with alarming speed.
I scrambled desperately icy water.
Flooding around my knees and soaking through my clothes
instantly. The shoreline stood less than 30
yards ahead. Crawling forward fingers,
digging painfully into the Frozen slush.
I dragged myself from the widening hole.
I splintering loudly beneath my weight behind me.
Footsteps, thudded, steadily closer.
The adrenaline forced me. Upright and I staggered toward
Solid Ground legs numb, lungs, burning with every painful
breath. The growling choking sound of
the creature. Echoed closer closing rapidly.
I refused to turn knowing that seeing it clearly would rob me
of any strength left. Reaching the shoreline felt
surreal. I collapsed heavily onto solid
snow just as the ice behind me shattered splashing violently as
something crashed through shrinking furiously.
Unable to move. I lay gasping in the snow.
Trembling uncontrollably certain, I was moments from
being dragged back, but the attack never came in instead a
different sound reached me and approaching vehicle.
A game wardens, ATV appeared on the nearby service Trail drawn
by the Flair. He jumped out eyes wide and
shock helping me onto the back of his vehicle.
He wrapped an emergency blanket around me asking questions.
I could barely answer. Two days later, after warming up
and recovering, at the ranger station, I returned to the spot
with the local authorities. The ice had refrozen overnight
erasing, all evidence of my near drowning, except for long claw
marks etched deeply into the fresh ice, tracing away from the
hole. No blood, no animal tracks.
No obvious explanation for what had pursued me.
Just those marks impossibly deep in space, too far.
Apart for any animal. I knew I never returned to Lake
of the Woods. Sold everything.
The Shack, the gear the snowmobile.
Yet, as much as I have tried to forget the memory refuses to
fade. I told my story once to the
Ontario Ministry of Natural Resources.
They recorded it but the tape quickly, vanished.
Officially the incident was labeled an animal attack and
dismissed. Yet every winter, I hear stories
whispered by the locals fishermen going missing out near
Devil's. Elbow leaving only abandoned
gear bloodstained ice and deep impossible Footprints leading
nowhere. I'm a 34 year old independent
livestock hauler based in Gallup, New Mexico.
A few hours ago I agreed to shuttle 8 Angus steers from
Sanders to a feedlot outside Kayenta Before Sunrise.
Triple pay if I arrived before the desert heat settled in.
To meet that deadline. My dispatcher pointed me toward
Indian Route. 13 a dirt Corridor across Navajo Nation, that local
drivers rarely use after Dark. I'd heard scraps of folklore
shape-shifters hitchhiking Shadows, but I chalked it up to
scare tactics for tourists. I logged the Manifest, check the
trailer locks and rolled out just before 11 on a moonless
humid night in mid-july. So walls.
I noted their restlessness but pressed on climbing, Buffalo
pass at a steady 45 At the summit, a sheet of rain, swept
across the windshield, wipers fought mud and grit.
As I ease Down The Descent. According to the odometer
milepost 41 was the first cattle guard passed lukachukai.
I rolled over at a crawl, the steel slats clanged under 18
Wheels and in the beam of my highlights.
I noticed fresh gouges carved deep across several bars.
Four, perfect parallel channels. Each longer than my forearm.
No tire could cut metal like that.
I logged, the anomaly into my Dash recorder and kept the
Kenworth pointed downhill. The road narrowed between
Sandstone Bluffs GPS lost signal entirely leaving me alone with
the engine drone and The Irregular slap of rain.
A sour smell drifted through the vents copper mixed with damp
Sage. I cracked the driver's side
window to clear the cab, but the odor clung to the upholstery a
quarter. Mile later the dash camera
detected movement to head I leaned forward the headlights
washed over a shape crouched, just beyond the next cattle
guard. It was manned size but arranged
wrong elbows. Flared weight, balanced on what
looked like elongated forearms, the figure held perfectly still
facing my truck. I eased off the throttle
shifting down to third ready to stop.
If it was an animal or a person in distress.
The shape rose with abrupt Precision, straight from all
fours to full height without bracing on its hands.
In that instant, I saw limbs that hung too low, a silhouette
easily 7 feet tall and eyes that reflected Amber like a deer at
night before. I could register more detail the
figure pivoted and moved sideways into the Juniper scrub
at impossible. Speed no lunge know, stumble,
just a blur, that cleared 20 feet in seconds, it disappeared
beyond the reach of the headlands Shock tightened my
grip on the wheel. Every Instinct said reverse, but
the hall. Scheduled in my mind, I crept
over the guard at 10 miles per hour scanning the road edges.
Nothing stirred except wind kicking loose, grit across the
asphalt. Past the Bluffs, the landscape
opened to a vast flat where Route, 13 paralleled, Whiskey
Creek, lightning flickered behind me etching, the rigs
Shadow across the sage Flats. The cattle balled in chorus
Hooves striking, aluminum panels hard enough that I felt the
impacts through the seat. The trailers infrared monitor
lit up with a new blob of heat, a signature that didn't match a
steer's outline then blinked off before I could zoom.
Static hissed through the CB, a male voice, cut in for half a
word, crackled and vanished. I try to radio check no reply,
the copper and Sage odor intensified almost metallic
enough to taste While I replayed the image of that uprighting
shape, in my mind, the Kenworth rumbled toward the next cattle.
Guard rain is eased but the sky offered no stars just low
clouds. As if the darkness itself
pressed closer to the cab my headlights, hit the empty,
great, no figures weighted this time only slats of galvanized
steel wet with Rainwater. I released a breath.
I hadn't realized I was holding nudged the throttle and watched
the speedometer climb back toward 45.
Two minutes later, adult clang. Echoed Along the trailer frame
as though. Something had bounced off the
roof, I checked mirrors rain, slick, metal, and empty desert.
The cattle, resumed, their wrestlers shifting and the sour
smell lingard. I reminded myself there were
eight, steers 2000 pounds of piece and I was sealed inside,
solid Detroit, steel doing a job by dunno 100 times.
Yet the desert felt different tonight somehow crowded though.
Nothing moved. Reaching the flats Far Side, I
aimed for the faint glow of many farms, sodium lamps Beyond the
Horizon counting, the miles until pavement.
Behind me, lay Buffalo pass and one inexplicable sighting.
I couldn't justify even to myself.
Ahead. However weighted Darkness
without folklore, just a man, a truck and a deadline at least
that's what I told myself. As I crossed the third cattle
guard and continued East into the unlit miles of reservation
Road 13 By the time I cleared the Sandstone Bluffs.
It was 12:43 a.m. The GPS display still showed a
frozen grid and the odometer placed me roughly 25 miles from
The Junction with us 191. A head stretched to 10 Mi ribbon
of packed, dirt, that locals call The Whiskey Creek straight
away. No turns, no Ranch lights, no
roadside homes. I kept the cruise lever at 45
more out of habit than Comfort. Every sense felt key to the
trailer behind me. The cattle had grown louder
since the sighting near Buffalo pass.
Who have struck the aluminum walls and sharp bursts then
settled into nervous shuffling. I toggled the infrared monitor.
8 heat, signatures drifted in a tight cluster near the forward
gate. No, 9th shape, no glitches, this
time. Still, I couldn't ignore the
metallic taste in the air or the way my forearms tingled as if an
electric fence hovered inches from my skin 5 minutes down the
straightaway, the odor intensified wet copper mixed
with something resonance like fresh cut Juniper, the cab vents
carried it, no matter how wide I opened the side window, my left
hand hovered, over the CB handset, a keyed up.
Anybody rolling West on 130 tonight I'm eastbound with
livestock need a radio. Check static answered.
Then a single word in a low male voice.
Cut through syllables I couldn't translate the transmission
dropped before I could respond. I tried again cycling channels,
same result silence, then a click as if someone lifted a mic
and set it back down the high, beams showed, the next cattle
guard, a quarter mile ahead It sat slightly raised above the
roadway, framed by warped cedar posts.
As I closed the distance, a dark form, blocked the center of the
Great. At first glance it looked like a
man wearing a heavy coat, shoulders hunched, another 100
feet and the shape clarified long arms, braced against the
metal rails, knees, bent outward at an unnatural angle.
My foot eased off the throttle, the Kenworth slowed to 30, then
20, the figure didn't flinch. At 50 yards, I hit the air horn,
three fast, blasts loud, enough to Rattle, the dash the shape
reacted, but not the way an animal.
Would it tilted its head as if measuring the truck then dropped
to all fours and scuttled off the guard disappearing behind a
low berm. The motion was smooth precise
too fast for anything on that terrain.
I felt my scalp tightened, I steered onto the guard,
listening for damage. The tires rolled a cross with
the usual. Metallic Rumble.
Halfway over something clanged against the right rear quarter
panel. A Halo strike, like a tire iron
hitting sheet metal. The steering wheel jerked in my
hands. I corrected the rig straight and
accelerated to 50. In the side mirror, I caught a
glimpse of movement in the dust cloud.
Something sprinting, parallel to the trailer for a few seconds
before veering away. The cattle bald.
Again, this time, a sustained chorus that filled the cab
through the bulkhead The floor vibrated under my boots as 2000
pounds of beef shifted from left to, right.
I glanced at the monitor for a heartbeat.
A ninth heat blob, flared bright, red near the rear gate
then vanished Sweat collected at my collarbones, despite the AC
set to 68. Static burst from the CB the
same. Male voice returned louder, the
Cadence urgent three words, then a sharp crack as if the
transmission had been cut, mid-sentence, And kept it
pressed. Hoping some Highway Patrol unit.
Might hear my location ping nothing.
Came back. 8 Miles remained to the paved Highway.
The straightaway fell twice that length.
I kept the headlights on high eyes sweeping for movement.
A ruined Trading Post building appeared on the right.
Cinder block shell roof long collapse.
My front bumper passed the structure.
When a dark blur shot from behind it, straight toward the
road. I saw a long arm hand splayed
with thin extended fingers, Instinct overruled caution.
I swerved left tires digging into loose gravel.
The trailer fishtailed. I counter steered engine RPM
spiking. Something heavy struck the
sidewall near the third axle, two bangs, and Rapid succession.
Then escaping, that traveled toward the rear doors.
I wrestled the rig back onto the dirt Lane mirrors, vibrating so
hard. The images blurred The cattle
settled. But kept blowing their voices
ragged I couldn't resist stopping no toe or law
enforcement unit could reach me before Dawn.
The only option was to reach many farms in real pavement.
Three miles to go, the smell of copper faded, but the Tang of
dust replaced, it thick enough to scratch my throat.
The side and roof cameras offered no clear picture just
static and brief flashes of distorted shape.
Each flash suggested movement along the roof racks but I
couldn't hold my gaze there without drifting off the road.
A final cattle, guard marked, the end of the straightaway.
I crossed it at 60. No impact.
No figures waiting beyond the dirt strip curved South toward
the US 191 Junction and faint orange light from alone.
Communication Tower glowed against the clouds.
Relief should have followed yet. My pulse stayed High the trailer
rocked once twice as if a heavy object shifted on the roof and
landed inside. The steel frame, I focused on
the tower Beacon ahead, every muscle locked.
Whatever. Had followed me from Buffalo?
Pass felt closer now, perhaps on the rig itself, The next miles
would decide whether I reached town in one piece or joined
those campfire. Tales, I'd written off as
superstition. The communication Tower Beacon,
hovered ahead like a fixed point on a map.
But every bump in the road reminded me, something heavier
than rain pressed against the trailer roof.
I kept one hand on the wheel and the other on the throttle easing
the Kenworth passed 60 fast for this washboard grade.
But short of losing control a metallic rattle traveled from
front to back overhead The sound stopped at the sleeper, berths
rear window. A flat Paul Gray, Mud Street,
extended slap, the glass ones hard enough to spider web the
intercepting layer. I jerked forward in the seat and
nearly veered into the drainage ditch.
The cattle exploded into balls. So loud, the Audio Monitor
clipped, I floored the pedal. The Tacoma Theater Red Line,
diesel Roar filled the cab. There was no shoulder wide
enough to pull over no service turnout, no cell signal to
reach, Navajo, police 8, tons of beef and steel were the only
Shield. I had I pushed the rig through
shallow potholes, trusting momentum to keep the trailer.
Upright each jolt shook the roof, sometimes the weight above
shifted, sometimes it didn't, I kept my eyes on the tower at
117. Am the dirt Lane widened and
joined a strip of cracked asphalt.
The final mile to us 191. Sodium lamps from many farms
Chapter House, glimmered Beyond a low rise.
I downshift to keep track on the pavement, then accelerated
again, forcing the engine passed, its comfort zone.
A final clang landed near the rear doors followed by silence.
The weigh station sign appeared State, Port of Entry.
Its floodlights. Casting, sharp white across rain
dark pavement. I hit the parking apron so fast
the trucks front suspension, bought him down.
Gravel sprayed against the scale house wall.
I cut the engine. Grab my flash light and jumped
down boots skidding on wet concrete.
The night air smelled of diesel and cattle.
Nothing else. Rain eased to am a missed.
I swept the beam Along the trailer roof.
No movement. I circled to the back. the right
hand door hung a jar by half an inch safety chain still hooked,
but latch lever torn loose four gouges scored the aluminum skin
from roofline to floor. Each Groove wide enough to lay
two fingers inside. A wad of coarse black hair
dangled from the upper hinge greasy, with dried fluid the
color of rust. Inside the steers crowded, the
forward stall eyes rolling white, none were cut, none
missing. I slammed the door and dog.
The latch with a spare bolt. Double-checking the pin around
me, the floodlights showed only damp Asphalt in the empty scale
Lane, a dhoti officer stepped from the doorway coffee in hand
Curiosity on his face before. He could ask, I raise the palm
Lost a roof strap on the dirt grade.
I said, steers spooked. I'm fine.
He eyed the clause in the metal opened his mouth then, shut it
under his breath. Came a single word in Navajo, I
recognized the tone from the radio but not the meaning.
He waved me off the scale. Paperwork could wait daylight.
I pulled the rig to arrest slot engine idling at low.
RPM Dawn, edged over black Mesa a thin orange band pushing back
the cloud base, In that growing light, the desert looked
ordinary red, sand Flats, a barbed wire, fence line.
One Gravel Road leading back toward Buffalo pass.
Ordinary. But the rear window, still held
a fractured imprint, the size of a spread hand and the trailer
door. Still bled.
Dark streaks. Where Clause, had raked
aluminum, I reached for the trip manifest on the passenger seat.
The paper listed Sanders, departure Kayenta arrival, and
an estimated runtime that meant. I should be rolling north on 191
right now. I folded the sheet twice and fed
into the trash barrel by the scale house.
Watching the paper dark in the drizzle.
Flagstaff lace, 6 hours, West, all on Mayan Highway.
The Detour would burn fuel in time, but it offered shoulders
traffic and phone service. I climbed back into the cab set,
the route and eased onto the wet pavement.
The cattle settled into tired Huffs.
The cracked sleeper window. Stayed taped for the rest of the
trip. As the sun, cleared the Horizon
I checked the mirror one more time.
The trailer's gashes caught early light Dulce, silver
against gray metal, then faded from sight, when I merge with
Northbound, traffic. Reservation Road, 13.
Dropped behind a low, rise and disappeared.
I kept my speed steady hands locked at 10 and 2 and told
myself overpasses and truck stops were better company than
shortcuts. No matter how many hours they
added the better part of my adult life fighting wildfires
across New Mexico, chasing Flames across mountain ridges
and steep Canyons, cutting fire breaks and choking Heat.
It was dangerous work, but straightforward enough.
You could see the fire, you knew its patterns and you trusted
your team. After nearly 10 years,
stationed, out of Albuquerque, I figured I'd seen just about
everything. The land could throw at me.
Then I got a sign to the chuska mountains on a controlled burn.
The Cisco's stretched along the Arizona.
New Mexico border, Rising sharply from the red, Earth of
the Navajo Nation, they were thickly, forested, Jagged, and
known for unpredictable wins. That could turn even the most
carefully managed fires in to disasters.
We'd set up our mobile Fire camp, just east of tohatchi
working alongside tribal, firefighters who knew this land
better than I ever would. Their cautionary, tales were
abundant filled with quiet warnings about Ravines.
You shouldn't enter after dark places where your eyes played
tricks. I respected their experience,
but I was a man who trusted only what I could see and measure
fire was real folklore, wasn't I didn't know how wrong I was
until it was too late. The late afternoon, sun pressed
down heavy on the ridge, as I double checked my gear.
My crew had spent the morning setting backfires along a steep
draw and now I was tasked with scouting ahead toward a place
called coyote wash to confirm reports of stray.
Smoke blooms The tribal crew leader been hosting approached.
As I clipped my radio onto my vest.
You shouldn't go near that Raven alone after dark been said
quietly noting toward the west. Things down there might fool
you. I smiled politely but Shrugged
It Off. I've worked plenty of ridges
alone. Before nothing down there but
brush and dry heat. Bend didn't smile back, he just
stared at the distance. Slope his expression unreadable
beneath the brim of his Dusty ball cap, Finally, he shook his
head. Just be careful.
Things are different here. I set off toward the Ravine
around half past five. The heat of the day.
Still radiating up from the baked soil beneath my boots.
The ridge was silent except for the faint crackling of distant
fire lines. As I crested the ridge.
Overlooking, coyote wash, I stopped for a moment to wipe
sweat from my face and study the terrain.
It was rugged dry Earth and brush leading down towards
Shadows already creeping across the canyon floor.
A thin tendril of smoke Rose from near the bottom of the
wash. Exactly, where no fire had been
set. Strange.
I keyed my radio. Unit, 49 debase got eyes on
smoke near, coyote wash, requesting confirmation of burn
perimeter. Static.
No response. Unit 49, and anybody copy?
Still nothing I glanced at my GPS signal fluctuated
erratically, bouncing in and out typical of rugged terrain.
I thought With no other choice. I started downhill to
investigate. As I got closer, the smoke
drifted, sideways, moving, almost parallel.
To me staying, just beyond my reach.
When I stopped it, stopped too hanging on naturally.
Still in the fading are I blinked and adjusted my goggles,
certain fatigue was playing tricks on me.
When I took another step the smoke moved again.
Matching my Pace. Exactly.
As if Tethered to my movements, My pulse quickened, as the
silence Around Me, grew heavier. I'd seen Strange Fire behaviors
before but nothing like this. There was no Breeze, no thermal
wind to move. The smoke just dry heat and
unnatural Stillness. I turned around to retrace my
steps up hill but a shadow made me pause.
Mid-stride ahead. Further up the slope.
Now, the same thin column of smoke reappeared drifting
lazily. As if waiting, An uneasy
sensation settled, deep into my chest unit 49 to base.
I tried again my voice tighter something's not right here, need
backup immediately. My radio crackled and response
faint static clearing, just long enough to hear something that
turned, my blood cold. It was my voice my exact
transmission from moments ago warped and low repeating slowly
unit 49. Something's not right.
I stared at the radio, no impossible.
I forced down the chill and tightened my grip on the GPS.
The screen flickered on. Certainly unable to lock onto
any satellites. I had no choice but to rely on
landmarks. Taking a deep breath.
I pressed up hill again faster. Now, I kept my eyes focused,
straight ahead, but the smoke drifted again, reappearing, just
beyond the next rise. It was more dense.
Now, thicker, shaped like a smudged silhouette.
Every rational instinct told me it was an optical illusion, a
trick of heat stroke or fatigued but Illusions don't follow you
and they don't mock you with your own voice.
A sudden snap of branches to my left startled me and I swung my
flash light toward it. Nothing just dry brush shifting
in the growing Twilight. When I turned back to the trail,
the smoke column had vanished leaving only empty are in the
uneasy feeling that I wasn't alone.
I picked up my Pace again, scrambling over loose rocks and
patches of scrub brush. My heart.
Pounded painfully the edge of Twilight closed in the sunlight
draining. Fast from the sky Shadows,
pooling thickly around me. The quiet seemed to press down
harder suffocating it was then with evening's Darkness, only
minutes away that. I heard it again.
My voice. Unit 49, anybody copy?
The words were a harsh whisper coming from somewhere in the
thickening. Shadows behind me garbled.
Slow stretched on naturally, like a distorted recording, I
spun around The slope was empty still and yet I knew something
watched from just beyond my vision.
The smoke or whatever, hid within.
It was taunting me. It wanted me to panic and God
helped me. It was working.
I had been trained to handle emergency while fire Crews
practiced constantly for moments of chaos.
Teaching us how to stay calm. Move deliberately and keep a
clear head no matter what but nothing had prepared me for
whatever. This was something intangible.
Something that defied logic or training.
I was alone. Cut off disoriented.
Everything I had once trusted fell suddenly meaningless.
My heart was hammering. The last Echoes of that Twisted,
mimicry of my own voice still rang in my ears and I forced
myself to breathe deep steady breaths.
I scan the terrain desperately looking for something familiar.
The trail. I'd take him down into coyote
wash. Now seemed to vanish behind me
swallowed by the Gathering dust. I reached into my pack pulled
out the emergency radio and switched frequencies.
Unit. 49 distress call. I need assistance.
Now, does anyone copy? This is an emergency.
The channel crackled then, cut abruptly to silence.
I stared at the radio willing, someone anyone to reply, but no
one answered. The GPS was useless flickering
endlessly between coordinates. I was blind out here reaching
into a side pocket. I found a role of bright orange,
flagging tape, I quickly tied a piece around a nearby tree
branch marking my position logic said, it would guide me if I
circled back, accidentally something tangible to follow.
With one last glance at my makeshift marker.
I moved uphill through the brush boots.
Slipping slightly on loose gravel and dried leaves.
Within minutes, my flashlight caught us of color ahead relief
surged through me. It was the bright orange of
flagging tape. I hurried forward grateful to
find familiar ground. But as I drew closer confusion
turned quickly to dread the tape hung exactly, as I tied it.
But this wasn't a new location. It was my tape, my knot, right
where I had left it. I'd somehow walked in a complete
circle impossible. I'd climbed straight uphill.
I knew it. My pulse quickened, again, a raw
Panic, threatening to break through my discipline.
I had to stay calm. I picked a new direction, using
a distant silhouette of a tall Ponderosa tree as my landmark
and pushed forward. Heart hammering in my chest
minutes passed each step. Deliberate eyes locked onto the
tree yet. When I finally reached it
nauseous surged in my stomach, there was my flagging tape,
fluttering softly from a branch beside it.
Taunting my sense of logic. I hadn't even approached this
spot before I was certain yet here it was again, my tape my
knot. I ripped the tape down in
frustration, throwing it, aside, and pushing blindly forward into
the brush, it was fully dark. Now, the temperature dropped
sharply chilling, the sweat on my skin Shadows moves, strangely
in the beam of my flashlight shapes morphing among the trees
forming and dissolving before. I could fully grasp what I was
seeing. The smoke reappeared.
Only now it moved differently, it seemed thicker darker hanging
low in the underbrush sliding smoothly between branches and
Trunks ahead through the Gloom. I noticed a faintly glowing
outline in the smoke. My throat tightened as the shape
slowly became clearer, a tall thin figure crouched in the
shadows. I stopped cold my flashlight.
Beam fixed directly on it, but it remained vague insubstantial,
almost Fading Into the Darkness. A trick of the light fatigue.
I took a step back slowly watching the shadowed form
closely. It shifted subtly matching me,
step for step in perfect synchronization when I stopped
again. It froze, mirroring me.
Cold. Realization shot through my
veins. This thing was copying my
movements. But how could smoke mimic a
living person? I forced myself to move again a
quick step to the side. It moved with me exactly fluidly
without hesitation my skin crawled with the undeniable
Sensation that I was being mocked.
Get away. I shouted into the darkness, my
voice, shaking more than I wanted to admit.
Leave me alone. The radio hissed, sharply from
my belt and I instinctively grabbed.
It holding it up, as if, to ward off, whatever lurked ahead.
From the static came a distorted echo of my voice mocking me in
an uneven. Rasping whisper leave me alone.
I spun around flashlight. Frantically searching the
Shadows adrenaline. Driving me into a near Sprint.
Uphill. But now, my feet Tangled in the
dark undergrowth, each step felt heavier slower.
My boots sank into patches of Ash covered ground and the
familiar smell of burnt soil and brush suddenly filled my
nostrils stronger than before. As I pushed upward my foot
snagged. Something hidden in the
darkness. Sending me sprawling.
The flash light bounced away, rolling down a small incline in
the dim spill of its distant beam.
I saw a clearly what had caught my boot footprints.
My footprints stamped clearly into the softer Earth facing
downhill. But there was another set
identical yet. Reversed overlapping my own
steps, as if I had already gone both directions on this very
path. Fear pulse through my chest, as
I scrambled to my feet and grabbed the flashlight clawing
at the loose, rocks and dirt desperate to climb out of this.
Nightmare my lungs burned from exertion and panic.
Then somewhere behind me in the darkness, I heard my own voice
again. Clear and cold Whispering, my
call sign with slow broken laughter unit, 4 9, my legs
nearly buckled. I knew with absolute certainty
that if I turned around, I see it clearly that figure that
impossible mocking form born from smoking Shadow.
I didn't look in Stead. I ran faster pushing my body
Beyond exhaustion following Instinct rather than logic
through blurry vision. I caught a distant flicker of
firelight above Camp. It had to be Camp.
A surge of relief gave me strength as I staggered forward
closer. Now believing, I had finally
escaped. But just as I reached the edge
of that comforting glow, something seized my pack.
Violently jerking me, backward. I crashed hard onto the rocky
ground. Gasping choking on dust and Ash.
Looking up through stinging eyes.
I saw it clearly above me. Smoke, curling, downward into a
funnel-like shape descending toward my face with silent
ruthless, Precision in Wildfire training, we learned never to
panic, Panic clouds, judgement slows reaction times and kills
faster than Flames. I'd repeated those lessons 1,000
times but in the grip of something, so inexplicable that
logic slipped away like sand through my fingers.
Alone on my back in the dirt, staring up at a funnel of dark
smoke. Inching toward me.
Every rational thought vanished adrenaline surged through me Raw
Instinct driving my limbs I twisted violently kicking out
and scrambling backward, fingers clawing, the rocky slope.
Loose gravel shifted beneath my boots and I managed to tear free
from the grass of what ever held me.
Staggering upright. I lunged uphill again, breath
coming in ragged gasps. The darkness closed around me,
oppressive and heavy. Behind an unnatural Rhythm
echoed. The unmistakable sound of boots.
My boots matching, my Pace, step for step a fraction delayed
mimicking, my own movements. I didn't dare turn around.
If I saw that shadow again, I wasn't sure.
I had the strength to keep running.
Sweat poured down my face. Mixing with dirt and soot.
Stinging, my eyes my lungs burned fiercely each breath,
feeling sharp and brittle. My Pace slowed and voluntarily
muscles. Betraying me from exhaustion in
that. Desperate moment, as despair
began creeping into my heart. A thin beam of light pierced.
The trees ahead. Hey I shouted voice raw and
desperate over here. Please help the light shifted,
cutting toward me through branches and brush.
My knees, buckled with relief as a familiar figure emerged from
the darkness been hosting flash light in hand expression, grave.
Stay there. He called firmly raising one
hand, don't move another step. I froze obedient and desperate
as been quickly closed. The gap between us.
He glanced sharply behind me eyes narrowing as he scanned the
slope. I turned expecting to see that
funnel of smoke or worse. but now, there was nothing only
empty darkness and still are You okay.
He asked grabbing my shoulder firmly.
I something I gasped unable to articulate.
The terror that still clawed at my throat.
There's something following me. Ben didn't respond immediately
instead, pulling me gently upward toward the faint glow of
the camps perimeter. We climbed steadily silently his
flashlight beam scanning the trees.
Around us searching as we moved been murmured words.
I couldn't understand low and rhythmic likely Navajo something
passed down by Elders, something private and protective I didn't
ask what they meant. Right.
Then I just needed their calm steady sound to Anchor me to
reality. Minutes later we emerged from
the tree line. The sight of the trailers and
distant glow of campfires filled me with a sense of overwhelming
relief. Breaking the final threads of
tension that had kept my body. Upright.
My legs gave way and I sank to the ground near the closest fire
breath ragged and uneven crew members came over quickly, eyes
filled with concern. Someone handed me water, someone
else wrapped a blanket around my trembling shoulders.
I swallowed greedily ignoring their murmured questions
focusing solely on steadying my shaking hands.
After a long moment, Ben knelt beside me.
His voice, low and calm. Can you tell me exactly what you
saw? I don't know, I managed forcing
the words passed my dry throat! It followed me!
It copied me. My voice.
My movements. It wasn't human.
It wasn't natural. A quiet tension settled over the
crew. I shifting nervously toward the
Shadows beyond the campfire. Been stood slowly nodding once
understanding without needing to press further.
That's why we don't burn here after sundown.
An older Navajo firefighter, stepped forward quietly offering
a grave nod of agreement. Smoke doesn't always rise when
it's done. Their words settled over me
heavily, confirming the impossible, reality of what I
had experienced. There were no questions, no
skepticism. They understood completely and
somehow that frightened me even more deeply.
The following morning, I left the camp quietly.
Avoiding I contact. I couldn't bring myself to face.
Those knowing glances or silent nods again.
When the assignment ended, I turned down every subsequent
offer to work in tribal lands. Years passed yet.
That single night stayed etched deeply into my memory.
Always there lingering, just beneath the surface.
To this day in the silence between sleep and waking.
I hear it. My own voice warped and
distorted calling back from the darkness of coyote wash.
Unit 49, anybody copy? I spent 30 years reading the
stories people left behind in the dirt and the job had left
its own story on me. Most of that time was with
border patrols bortac working the harsh, corridors of the
Southwest where the tales were always Grimm.
I learned to read the Earth like a book.
But the ghosts of those stories, traffickers cartels.
The desperate and the dead hallowed me out.
When I retired, I bought this small camper took my aging
Belgian Malinois mix boom. And when looking for silence,
the small jobs I took finding lost hikers or stray.
Livestock were supposed to be simple.
Honest work without new ghosts. The morning are in the Cibola.
National forest was Chris smelling of pinyon and Cold
Stone. The kind of quiet I had been
searching for. I was sipping coffee from a tin
mug while bun in a patch of sun. That's one I heard the engine, a
heavy duty truck pulling off the Fire Road.
The man who got out looked like he'd been carved from the land
itself skin like cured leather a body wound, tight with attention
that seemed to vibrate in the still air.
He introduced himself as Silas, Webb said he had a ranch.
Bordering the Zuni mountains, land.
His family had worked for 100 years.
He was losing cattle. Not a whole herd.
He said his eyes scanning my setup.
One at a time, eight head in two months.
I asked the usual questions. Fences, check daily rustlers.
They take a truckload and leave tracks predators.
A cougar kill is a mess. Webb said, shaking his head,
drag marks blood everywhere, coyotes, leave.
Even more of a seen these, they just vanish no sign of a
struggle, no blood there. There at Sunset gone by morning.
He was offering good money, but it was the puzzle that nodded at
me in my experience, there was always a trace.
I told him I'd take the job, the web branch was a sprawling.
Expanse of juniper scrub, that ended abruptly at the dark
imposing mesa's of the Zuni range.
The place was unnerving, quiet. I noticed the absence of ranch
Dog's right away. When I asked Webb's face
tightened had a couple. They got spooked a few weeks
back, just ran off. I started my work where the last
heifer was seen for hours Boone and I walked a slow grid finding
nothing but the mundane tracks of the remaining heard Then bun
stopped. He didn't bark.
He let out a low guttural whine from deep in his chest.
A sound. I hadn't heard in years.
His ears were pinned flat, his tail tucked tight.
I trusted that sound more than my own eyes.
I knelt beside him. My hand on his trembling back,
my gaze followed, his on a flat piece of sandstone, was a single
dark stain, the color of old rust.
A few feet from it, snagged on a choya was a tough of heriford
fur. It wasn't much, but it was a
start. The faint Trail.
Let away from the open pasture, pointing directly toward the
mouth of a canyon that cut into the mountains, like a black
wound. The farther, we went the
heavier, the air became. The normal sounds of the wild
faded into a deep oppressive Stillness.
Boone's anxiety, grew and he pressed hard against my leg.
A constant, trembling weight. We found the rib cage in a small
clearing. It was shockingly, unnaturally
clean, like an anatomical specimen.
Someone had boiled and placed carefully in the center of the
clearing. I circled it and in a patch of
damp sand, I found the tracks The story was there.
I saw the distinct cloven hoof prints of the heifer and my
blood went cold. Alongside them was another set.
They started as large canine tracks, but as I followed them
the pattern changed. The Stride lengthened, the print
elongated the claw marks receded, within 10 yards, the
tracks were unmistakably, the prince of a large Barefoot,
human I stood up slowly. A profound dread washing over
me. My instincts honed by Decades of
tracking dangerous men, screamed, that this was wrong.
But this puzzle was unlike any I had ever faced I had spent my
life tracking things that made sense.
This didn't the light was starting to fail.
Going back was the safe place but my Professional Pride.
The part of me that was the legendary bortac tracker
wouldn't let it go. I made the call to Camp here to
see what the Morning Light would reveal.
I was a man who tracked Monsters of the human variety.
I had forgotten, there might be other kinds.
It was a mistake. I would regret before the sun
even set. I backed the truck up to the
edge of the clearing, positioning the camper.
So the door faced the canyon a small smokeless fire of dry,
Juniper was more for the illusion of safety than for
warmth. The sun dipped below the mesas
and the Shadows bled together into a solid impenetrable.
Blackness. Bun wouldn't eat.
He wouldn't even take water from my hand.
He crawled into his travel crate in the back of the camper.
And I could hear the faint steady vibration of his
shivering night fell and with it came a silence, so total, it
felt like a weight. No crickets, no Russell of night
creatures. Not even the whisper of wind.
It was the dead sterile Silence of a soundproof room.
I sat in my camp chair for hours, the cold weight of a
shotgun loaded with Buckshot resting across my lap.
My eyes, trying to pierce the darkness.
I saw nothing. Heard nothing around.
Midnight the chill. Finally drove me inside.
I locked the camper door. A flimsy barrier against the
immense emptiness outside. Lying on my bunk the shotgun on
my chest. I stared at the ceiling.
Every nerve fiber stretched taught.
Sleep was an impossibility. The silence was a pressure
against the thin aluminum, walls of the camper.
Then I heard it, it wasn't the Frantic scratching of a bear, it
was a slow methodical scrape. A single hard point like a
sharpened piece of flint being dragged with immense pressure
along the side of the camper, the sound started at the rear
and moved with excruciating slowness toward the front.
A high-pitched metallic shriek that vibrated through the floor
and up my spine. Boone had gone completely quiet
in his crate. The Silence from him was more
terrifying than any sound. He could have made the scraping
noise continued steady and unwavering, until it stopped
directly beside the door. I held my breath.
My muscles locked my finger on the shotgun safety.
I waited for the handle to jiggle for the lock to break.
Nothing happened. Just the return of that
crushing, absolute silence. I didn't move for the rest of
the night. I sat on the edge of the bunk
the shotgun aimed at the door and waited for the dawn.
As soon as the first week gray light, filtered through the
window, I unlocked the door and stepped outside Boone would in
follow. He stayed huddled in the back of
the cab, a low wind coming from his throat.
The first thing I saw was the mark, on the camper, a single
deep gouge was carved into the aluminum running the entire
length of the vehicle. It was perfectly straight.
As if drawn with a ruler, it was a statement. then I turned my
attention to the clearing in the exact spot where my camp chair
had been there was something new A collection of Bones had been
arranged on the ground. They weren't from the cow.
They were from smaller, animals coyotes rabbits, maybe a deer
and every single bone had been snapped cleanly in half.
They were laid out in a tight intricate spiral on the dusty
Earth. It wasn't a kill sight.
It was a sculpture. It was a message delivered with
cold, calculating intelligence. I was here, I watched you.
This is what I can do. A wave of nausea, hit me.
All thoughts of the job of the money of solving the puzzle
evaporated. They were replaced by a single
Primal command that echoed in my own head, leave I moved with a
frantic energy. I hadn't felt in years.
I kicked dirt over the bone spiral, not to hide it, but just
so, I wouldn't have to look at it anymore. my hands shook so
badly that it took me three attempts to properly hitch, the
camper to the truck, Bun seeing his chance.
Leaped from the camper into the truck's cab.
Before I even had the passenger door fully open.
He scrambled onto the seat and pressed himself into the far
Corner. His wide terrified eyes, fixed
on the mouth of the canyon. I threw myself into the driver's
seat and turned the key the engine roared to life shattering
the Stillness. I didn't bother with the rough
track, I slammed the truck into gear and crashed straight
through the scrub brush, the camper, lurching and groaning
behind me. I didn't look in my rearview
mirror, I didn't need to, I could feel the Unseen attention
on my back, every single inch of the way.
The Truck Engine stayed running as I pulled to a stop in front
of the ranch house. A cloud of dust chasing me in.
I left the driver's side door open Silas Webb came out onto
the porch, a flicker of something, like hope in his
eyes. That died the second.
He saw my face. I walked up the steps, my boots,
heavy on the wood and pulled the water of cash.
His deposit from my pocket. I placed it on the porch railing
between us. Jobs off.
I said my voice was flat. Devoid of any emotion, I could
control. What did you find?
Web asked his own voice tight. Did you find what took them my
eyes moved? Past him to the heavy wooden
door of his house? And then, I saw it.
Carved into the dark wood of the lintel of the door.
Frame was a small faded symbol. It was an intricate spiral
identical to the one made from broken bones in the clearing.
In that instant, every piece clicked into place, the spooked
dogs, The Vanishing cattle. The Deep abiding fear in this
man's eyes. He hadn't been hiring an
investigator. I found what you wanted me to
find. I said my voice dropping a rib
cage picked, clean tracks, that start with four legs and end
with two I found the thing. You've been leaving offerings
for The Rancher facade on Webb's face collapsed.
All the tension drained out of him replaced by a look of pure
Soul deep exhaustion. He looked past me toward the
dark line of the Zuni mountains. It's been here forever.
He said his voice a ragged Whisperer.
My great-grandfather. He made a deal an arrangement.
We leave it. Be out on the mesas and we pay a
tithe. So it leaves the family alone.
He swallowed hard, but the last few years, the tithe wasn't
enough. It wanted more.
I stared at him, the full sickening, truth settling in my
gut, like a block of ice. He hadn't been looking for a
solution. He had been looking for a
sacrifice. He was hoping to put a new piece
on the board to give the creature a new toy to occupy its
attention. You didn't lose those cows.
I said the words falling like stones in the quiet air.
You fed them to something that's been watching you for 100 years.
And you were hoping it would take me next.
He didn't have the strength to deny it.
He just lowered his head. A man utterly broken by his
inheritance. I turned without another word,
walked back, down the steps and got into my truck.
I left the money sitting on the railing.
I put the truck in gear and drove away from the ranch away
from the man and his terrible bargain.
The feeling of unseen attention was a physical weight on my
shoulders, a pressure at the back of my neck, that didn't
release until the trucks tires, hit the paved surface of Highway
53. I pointed the hood East and
pressed the accelerator to the floor.
I didn't stop until I saw the lights of Albuquerque spreading
out in the valley below. The endless Anonymous glow of
the city, felt like a shield. The next morning I found the
biggest RV dealership in the city a Salesman in a cheap suit.
Walked out to meet me as I pulled the camper into the lot.
I want to sell the camper I said before.
He could start his pitch. Well, we mostly do Consignment
take a small percentage. I'll take whatever, you'll give
me for it. I cut him off today in cash.
An hour later. I drove out of the lot with a
check in my pocket, and an empty trailer hitch on the truck.
I could still feel the Phantom vibration of that, slow
methodical scrape. I knew I would never sleep
inside. A thin, metal box again.
That night I checked into a sterile motel room on the
outskirts of the city. I double locked, the door
wedged. A chair under the knob and sat
on the edge of the bed across the room curled on the thin
carpet Boone, was finally asleep, his breathing deep and
even the evil was still out there in the mountains, web was
still trapped in his horrifying packed.
But we were out. We were free.
And in that moment, that was the only victory that mattered.
The land west of Albuquerque. New Mexico is a stark tapestry
of sandstone. Mesas ancient, lava flows, and
Sun, bleached planes It is a place where history is not
measured in centuries, but in Millennia.
The Pueblo of Laguna and the Pueblo of Acoma are two of the
oldest continuously inhabited communities in North America.
Their people having carved a life from this demanding
environment for countless Generations.
Their cultural and spiritual identity is inextricably linked
to the land itself. Specific Masons Springs and rock
formations are not just features of a landscape, but living
sacred parts of their cosmology. To announce Outsider much of
this land falls, under the purview of the Bureau of Land
Management. BLM designated for public, use
like grazing Mining and Recreation.
The boundaries are often marked by little more than a weather
fence post, or a faded sign. For weekend adventurers from the
city. These are abstract lines on a
map for the people who have always been there.
They are. The border between the mundane
world and a place of immense power a place where the oldest
laws still holds sway. I had the spot picked out for
weeks. A perfect Sandstone, rise
coordinates cross-referenced between three different
topographical maps and satellite imagery.
It offered a clean unobstructed view of the Western sky far from
the light pollution of Albuquerque.
Yet, it was less than a 90-minute drive.
It was by every metric. I valued the ideal location, the
four of us me my girlfriend, Chloe our friend Ben and his
colleague Maya Cruise. West on I-40 The Familiar
silhouette of the Sandia Mountains shrinking in the
rearview mirror of my truck. Been was telling some loud
rambling story about his CrossFit gym and Chloe was
laughing Maya. A grad student in anthropology
was quiet in the back, watching the landscape slide by She had a
way of looking at things at the Masons and the Arroyos as if she
were reading a text. I couldn't see Exits coming up.
I announced breaking into Ben's story, not the main one for
Laguna. The one after A few miles past
the casino in the Old Mission Church, I took an exit that led
to nothing but a frontage road. A minute later.
I turned the truck onto a dirt track.
That was barely more than two Tire ruts in the pale Earth.
The suspension grown, as we bounced over rocks and washouts.
20 minutes of this and We Came Upon it.
A single rust. Browned.
Metal t-post driven into the ground.
Voltage to. It was a faded signed with what
looked like holes from a shotgun blast.
The words were barely legible private Pueblo land.
No trespassing. I stopped the truck.
This is it been asked from the back?
This is the old boundary I said tapping a finger on the
laminated BLM map. I had on the passenger seat The
land swap agreement was 10, maybe 12 years ago, this sign is
obsolete. According to the federal
government, the official reservation line is another two
miles east were on public land here, perfectly legal Maya
leaned forward, her gaze fixed on the sign.
Are you sure Liam sometimes those things are?
Complicated. It's not complicated.
I said maybe a little too sharply.
It's a line on a map, a legal survey were fine.
Been clapped his hands together good enough for the government,
good enough for me. Let's find this five-star Resort
of yours. Liam.
I put the truck in gear and drove past the post in the side
mirror. I saw Maya look back at the sign
until we rounded a bend and it was gone.
The spot was even better than the maps suggested.
A wide flat topped Sandstone formation that Rose about 100
feet from the surrounding scrubland.
It gave us a commanding 360 degree view.
To the east, the sky was already starting to show The Faint Dome
of City glow. To the West nothing but the vast
dark. Expanse of the El malpai lava
fields. Across a wide shallow Canyon
from our position was another Mesa slightly higher than ours,
its Edge, a sharp dark line against the sky.
We were completely utterly alone.
I felt a surge of satisfaction. This was preparedness.
This was Freedom. We set up camp quickly, the
tents went up, the fire pit was established, and soon the smell
of grilling sausages. Cut through the clean dry air.
The initial mood was celebratory.
Been cracked, open beers, Chloe, put on some music from a small
speaker and we watched the high desert Sunset paint the clouds
in violent Strokes of orange and purple.
You know, Chloe said leaning against me.
Sometimes I forget how quiet it can get.
There's nothing not even crickets.
She was right. The silence was profound a solid
thing that pressed in from all sides, as the last sliver of
sun, vanished below the Horizon, the sky transformed The thin air
at this altitude made the stars look like holes punched in Black
Velvet. I was pointing out the summer
triangle to Chloe when Maya who had been sitting on the edge of
the rise, looking out over the canyon stiffened, Liam who is
that? Her voice was quiet, but it cut
through the night, we all turned to look where she was pointing
on the crest of the opposite Ridge silhouetted perfectly
against the Deep Indigo of The Twilight Sky.
Where four figures. They were distinctly human in
shape, but that was the only discernible feature.
They were impossibly still standing evenly spaced from one
another facing our campsite. My mind immediately started
cycling through explanations other campers who got a late
start locals out for an evening hike.
Probably just people from the Pueblo, been said though his
voice had lost its boisterous Edge.
He grabbed the high-powered binoculars from my trucks glove
box and raised them to his eyes. He was silent for a long moment.
What do you see? I asked I can't make out any
features. He said his voice low, no
clothes, no faces. They just look dark like shadows
and involuntary chill, moved down my spine.
The distance was significant, maybe half a mile across the
canyon, but even from here they're Stillness was unnatural,
people don't stand like that, not for so long.
Hello, been shouted, lowering the binoculars.
His voice carried across the canyon the sound quickly
swallowed by the immense space. There was no reply, no wave, no
movement at all. We stood there, the four of us
watching them the sausages on the grill started to burn.
Chloe turned off her music, The Silence rushed back in heavier
than before. My rational explanations felt
thin inadequate? Why would anyone stand on a
remote Ridge in the dark? Just watching why?
No fire. No flash lights?
No sound. for the next two hours, they remained We ate in
near silence, our eyes constantly drawn back to the
four shapes on the ridge as full night.
Descended in the moon began to rise.
They became harder to distinguish from the gnarled.
Juniper trees that dotted the Ridgeline yet.
We knew they were still there. The feeling was inescapable, we
were being observed. Finally the cold and a creeping
dread drove us from the fire. I'm turning in Chloe, said her
voice small, One by one, we retreated to our tents zipping,
the thin nylon walls shut against the vast silent dark.
I lay there in my sleeping bag, my heart beating a little too
fast, staring at the fabric ceiling.
I told myself, it was nothing. I told myself that in the
morning, they would be gone and we would laugh about how jumpy
we'd been But as I listened to the profound unnerving Silence
of the land, I couldn't shake the image of those four
motionless figures watching us from across the dark.
I woke with a jolt the pale gray light of dawn filtering through
the thin nylon of the tent. My first conscious thought was
of them. I unzipped the tent flap with a
single sharp pole and looked out.
The opposite Ridge was empty, just rock and Juniper Stark
against the brightening Sky. The air was cold and still a
wave of something that felt like relief.
But weaker and more fragile washed over me.
They're gone. I said to Chloe, who was just
stirring beside me? Soon.
We were all out of our tents coffee brewing on the camp
stove. The morning ritual of flimsy
Shield against the memory of the night.
See, probably just some kids messing with us, been said,
stretching his arms over his head.
His voice was a little too loud, his cheerfulness a little, too
forced They got bored and went home.
I agreed with him seizing on the logic of it.
Exactly will probably see their tire tracks on the way out.
Only Maya was quiet. She stood at the edge of the
rise, sipping, her coffee and staring at the empty Ridge as if
she could still see them there. We tried to salvage the day with
our plant hike, but the mood was broken.
The vast silent landscape. No longer felt like a majestic
wilderness. It felt like an empty room where
you knew someone was hiding. Every dark recess.
In the Rocks, every oddly-shaped tree drew our eyes, the silence
itself, felt different, it was no longer peaceful.
It was expected. We cut the hike short after an
hour and returned to the relative safety of the campsite
the unspoken feeling of being. Watched following us the entire
way. as the sun began, its descent that afternoon the
anxiety returned, thick and suffocating No one suggested
music this time. We built the fire higher its
crackle, the only sound to push back against the immense, quiet.
We all kept scanning the opposite Ridge.
A shared compulsive habit, it remained empty.
For a few hours as the light faded.
And the first Stars appeared, I allowed myself to hope it was
over. Chloe had gone to the truck to
get another jacket. She was halfway back to the fire
when she stopped dead. A small sharp, gasp escaped, her
lips. She pointed her hand.
Trembling Liam my head snapped in the direction of her gaze.
My blood went cold. It was at the base of our own
Sandstone rise. Just at the edge of the fires
flickering light. One of the figures it stood in
the same unnaturally rigid posture a solid black shape
against the scrub brush. No more than 100 yards away.
It hadn't been there. Second before there had been no
sound of its approach. No, crunch of gravel or snap of
a twig. It was simply there.
Panic raw and Electric Shot through our group.
I started to yell something a warning, a challenge, but the
words caught in my throat been reacted with rage.
I'm done with this. He snarled his fear coiling into
aggression, he grabbed the heavy four-cell Maglite from the truck
been, no, Maya cried out, don't I yelled finding my voice, he
ignored us. He Strode toward the figure, the
flashlight beam, cutting a stark, white path through the
darkness. He walked with a purpose that
was terrifying to watch the figure remained Motionless.
As been closed, the distance, something strange happened.
When he was about 20 feet away, the figure seemed to Thin.
It didn't run or fade, it was more like the darkness.
It was made of became indistinguishable from the
deeper Shadows of the Juniper Bush behind it.
And then it was gone. Been swept the powerful Bean
back and forth across the empty space.
Nothing. He called back his voice
shaking, but loud. It's gone.
Nothing there. He walked back to the fire.
His face pale in the flickering light.
He was trying to project bravado but his hands were shaking.
I'm going to my tent for a minute.
He disappeared inside. A moment later, we heard a
choked guttural cry. We all rushed to his tent and
threw back the flap. Ben was sitting on his sleeping
bag. His shirt pulled off.
He was staring at his own reflection in a small hand
mirror. Across his back were three deep
parallel, gouges, raw, and red against his skin.
They were perfectly straight as if drawn with a ruler yet, they
looked like claw marks. They were beginning to bleed the
dark fluid welling up along the lines.
Nothing. He whispered his voice,
trembling uncontrollably, as he looked up at us.
His eyes wide with a horror that was beyond fear.
Nothing, even touched me, that broke me, my carefully,
constructed wall of logic of rational explanations crumbled
into dust. This was not a prank.
This was not a misunderstanding, this was real pack.
Now, I ordered my voice tight and unfamiliar were leaving.
Absolute animal Terror, gave us a energy.
We threw our gear into the bed of the truck with a clumsy
desperate haste, Tents were collapsed with without being
folded. Sleeping bags were tossed in the
cooler of food. Was abandoned next to the fire.
All that mattered was getting into the steel cage of the truck
and driving away. I jumped into the driver's seat.
Chloe beside me with Maya and a pale shivering been in the back.
I jammed the key into the ignition and turned it.
The engine turned over with a healthy, strong crank, It did
not catch. I tried again the headlights,
blazed the dashboard lit up. The radio would have played if I
turned it on. Every Electronic Component was
perfect, but the engine would not fire.
It was a simple mechanical and complete refusal.
My hands tightened on the steering wheel.
My Knuckles white. I tried again, and again, my
initial Panic, giving way to a rising tide of helpless Fury.
A small horrified sound came from Maya in the backseat.
Liam stop Her voice was so strange that I actually did.
I turned to look at her She was staring out the back window at
the ground illuminated by the trucks reverse lights.
She slowly opened her door and got out.
I followed my heart pounding against my ribs, by the stark,
white light of the headlamps, she pointed to the ground.
Scratched into the hard packed dirt in closing the truck, the
fire and the flattened space where our tents had been was a
circle. It was near perfect and within
its boundary etched into the Earth with a Precision that was
impossible. Were strange intricate symbols a
mix of sharp geometric lines and what looked like the stylized
forms of animals. they hadn't been there that morning they
surrounded us completely, we were trapped There was no talk
of trying to cross the circle. The symbols etched into the dirt
were a barrier more absolute than a concrete wall.
We rebuilt the fire its light pushing back the darkness, but
offering no Comfort. We huddled together.
Four people on a tiny Island in an ocean of hostile silence.
I don't think any of us slept every half-hour like a grim
ritual. I would get back in the truck
and turn the key. The result was always the same
the healthy strong crank of a perfectly, functional engine,
that simply refused to catch. After each failure, I would
return to the fire. The metallic taste of dread
thick and my mouth. We didn't see the figures again,
but the feeling of being scrutinized was a physical
weight. The air itself.
Felt heavy dense with a pressure that made it hard to breathe.
We just sat there. Listening to the fire crackle
waiting for the Sun. The moment, the Eastern Sky
began to bleed from black to gray.
A decision was made without a single word being spoken.
We were walking, I looked at my truck my meticulously maintained
Ford I looked at the expensive tents, the Yeti cooler, the
camping chairs, thousands of dollars of gear, that 12 hours
ago, had been my pride, Now, it was just trash.
We abandoned it all. I grabbed a backpack stuffing it
with four bottles of water in a handful of protein bars, the
others did the same. We were leaving everything else
behind I consulted. My paper map.
My hand shaking so badly, it was hard to focus.
The interstate was too far north.
Our only chance was New Mexico State Road 124 about 7 miles
south across a landscape with no trails.
Stepping out of the circle of cymbals felt like breaking the
surface of water after being held under for too long.
We scrambled down the side of the Sandstone rise and began the
Trek across the canyon floor. The terrain was a brutal mix of
loose Rock thorny scrub, and steep-sided Arroyos that forced
us into long detours. The New Mexico, son climbed the
sky and the heat became a physical Force.
Been already weakened stumbled constantly.
The scratches on his back were an angry red and his face was a
mask of vacant Terror. Khloe and I had to support him
between us for much of the way. Maya walked ahead her face a
grim, determined mask. She never looked back.
The Silence of the land. Was absolute, no birds, no
insects just the crunch of our feet on the gravel and our own
ragged breathing. After five hours that felt like
five years. I saw it.
Thin black line shimmering in the distance.
Asphalt. We stumbled the last half, mile
our legs. Cramping, our throats raw from
thirst. We collapsed onto the shoulder
of State Road 124. A cracked in empty two-lane
Highway. We were lucky less than 20
minutes later. A Dusty Ford Ranger slowed and
pulled over an old Rancher with a face like a dried.
Riverbed looked down at us. He didn't ask what happened.
He just saw the state. We were in told us to climb in
the back and drove us to the Sheriff's substation, in Grands.
The state police officer, who took my report?
Was a young man with a professional detached heir.
He listened to my story. His expression unreadable.
I left out the symbols, the figure of Vanishing the
scratches. I just said our truck wouldn't
start and we had to walk out. He nodded his skepticism, clear.
I can give you a ride back to your vehicle, sir.
He said his tone suggesting. He expected to find four hung
over campers. Who didn't know how to work a
fuel pump. The drive back was surreal The
officer made small talk about the weather.
I just nodded my mind. A blank wall of exhaustion and
fear. When we pulled up the dirt track
and the campsite came into view a pit formed in my stomach.
It was just a campsite. The tents were half collapsed
the cooler Sat by the dead fire pit.
And my truck was parked exactly where I had left it.
The air was clear and Light. The oppressive heavy atmosphere
from the night before was completely gone.
I got out of the patrol car my legs on steady, I looked at the
ground around the truck. The dirt was smooth.
The intricate Circle the bizarre symbols they had vanished.
There was no Trace they had ever been there.
Well, the officer said arms crossed gonna try it.
I walk to my truck on numb legs. I slid into the driver's seat,
The Familiar smell of the cab. Doing nothing to soothe me.
I put the key in the ignition fully expecting the same dead
result. The engine roared to life on the
very first turn. It, idled perfectly the sound
deafening in the afternoon quiet.
The officer gave me a look, that was a mixture of pity and
annoyance. Sometimes you just got to let
him rest. He said, as if offering a piece
of mechanical wisdom, he followed me back to the main
road. Then turned off leaving us
alone. The drive back to Albuquerque
was conducted in a thick suffocating silence.
The Friendship, the easy camaraderie.
We'd share just two days before was gone.
It had been replaced by a shared trauma that was two monstrous to
put into words. We never properly spoke of it
again the group shattered been quit his job.
The last, I heard he was living with his parents diagnosed with
severe. Agoraphobia and refusing to go
outside the scratches on his back healed into thin white
scars, he would carry forever. Chloe and I broke up a month
later. We couldn't look at each other
without seeing the terror in the others eyes.
Maya changed her major at UNM from anthropology to archival
studies. Choosing the quiet predictable.
Safety of Library, basements over fieldwork.
As for me, the engineer, the man of logic and reason my world was
broken. The simple mechanical fact of my
truck refusing to start and then starting again was an
impossibility. I could not reconcile.
The world no longer operated on the principles.
I understood. New Mexico.
The place I was born the Landscapes.
I had loved now felt alien and threatening Six months after
that weekend, I sold my truck. Put in for a transfer and took a
job with an engineering firm in Munich.
I left the vast open spaces for the old human built.
Certainty of Europe. I have not been back since
Sometimes late at night, I pull up a satellite view of that part
of the world. I look at the patch of pale
sandstone, a meaningless Speck in a sea of brown and green.
The wind and the rain of smooth over our tire tracks.
The land remains quiet and undisturbed under the vast,
empty Sky. It holds its silence.
The trespassers, are gone. The land endures.
My dad spent 30 years working for Wisconsin's Department of
Natural Resources and when he retired last year, the one thing
he wanted most was more time in the woods.
Hunting had always been our bond.
And with me leaving for Air Force, basic training soon, this
late season deer hunt. In Michigan's, Upper Peninsula,
felt like a farewell trip something important to both of
us. Dad had chosen, the Trap hills
region of Ottawa National Forest.
It was isolated Wild Country back in town locals in Berlin.
Gave us. Uneasy looks when dad mentioned
where we plan to hunt A cashier at the gas station even told us
hunters went missing up here once the snow began piling deep.
Dad laughed at all thanked. Her politely and we left.
The morning. We arrived.
Fresh snow had buried everything need deep.
Our pickup barely manage the narrow logging roads.
Dad parked the truck, three miles short of where he planned
to set up camp and we trudged through untouched snow, each
step, slow and exhausting. Our rifles, heavy on our
shoulders, Our campsite was a small clearing near Norwich
Bluff in the dim winter sunlight.
Everything around us was stark white sharp black branches
etched against a gray sky. We'd barely unpacked when dad
told me about an old deer stand. He'd built decades ago with
friends, nestled high in the branches of a sturdy Spruce.
Half a mile away. Let's go check it out.
He said excited, like I hadn't seen him in years.
As we walked, I felled uneasy though, I tried not to show it.
The woods were too quiet. The kind of Silence that made
your ears ache. Not far from Camp.
I spotted deer tracks, clear and fresh.
Dad nodded approvingly and suggested I Scout ahead to find
where the deer headed down. Feeling proud of myself.
I followed the trail each print crisp in the snow.
But after just a few hundred yards, I saw something that
stopped me dead in my tracks. Hanging impossibly high in the
branches of a tall birch tree was the skinned carcass of a
deer. No Blood Stained the snow
beneath it. Its limbs were splayed awkwardly
as though placed their carefully.
I stared my stomach tightening. There was no explanation for
this. I called Dad over my voice
shaking slightly when he arrived his expression changed
instantly. All excitement Faded by
something colder. It's probably just poachers.
He said examining the deer with narrowed eyes, but his voice
lacked, the usual confidence, or someone sick idea of a joke.
A new dad well enough to recognize when he was lying.
He glanced around scanning the silent woods.
Let's keep this to ourselves, okay?
I nodded and we made our way back to camp.
Both of us quiet. Dad built a fire as night fell
early. The woods swallowing Us in
darkness. We cooked canned stew and warmed
our hands by the fire. The silence deepened, oppressive
and heavy later in sleeping bags.
Inside the tent. I lay awake.
Sleep wouldn't come something about that.
Deer carcass had unsettled me. Deeply dad, shifted, quietly
beside me. Restless too hours.
Dragged by then through the thin tent walls.
I heard something move in the snow outside, not the crunch of
steps, not the brush of branches, just a subtle shifting
of snow as if something were dragging or sliding carefully
around the tent. Dad.
I whispered my heart pounding in my ears.
I hear it. He answered his voice.
Barely audible. We waited breath held tight
listening. The movement circled, the tent,
slow and deliberate. There was no sound of breathing,
no snapping twigs. Just absolute silence.
Except for the gentle shift of snow being pressed under
something's weight My chest tightened with fear, then the
sound stopped mourning arrived pale and gray without any
warmth. When we stepped outside the
tent, what we saw made my stomach Twist Again all our
tracks from the day before had vanished completely erased.
Instead surrounding the camp in a slow, careful Circle where
strange deep hoof prints, large, sharp cloven imprints pressed
cleanly into the snow. Nothing like any deer I'd ever
seen. Dad knelt beside one tracing its
outline with a finger, his expression, darkened.
Eyes Hollow with concern. This isn't right?
He muttered quietly. Dad what made these?
I asked voice tight. He shook his head slowly
standing back up scanning the Silent Forest around us.
The empty trees seemed to press in closer colder.
I don't know he finally admitted but tonight we sleep in the deer
stand. I didn't argue something was
deeply wrong in these woods. And for the first time I saw my
dad, frightened dad's old deer stand had been built high up on
a thick Spruce, about half a mile from our campsite It's
whether it would was faded and cracked worn down by years of
harsh, Upper Peninsula Winters but it held together.
Well enough, when Dad reinforced the platform with fresh rope and
Timber from nearby trees, I helped silently two anxious to
speak. Something felt deeply wrong, as
if every shadow between the trees watched us.
As evening approached, we climbed up.
Rifle's strapped to our backs and settled onto the narrow
platform, From here, the woods stretched endlessly around us
silent beneath a Grace Sky heavy with snow.
Dad had insisted we sleep here tonight, elevated above,
whatever had circled Us in the dark.
Neither of us, said it out loud, but we both knew it wasn't an
animal. Not any animal we recognized
anyway, We huddled under thick wool, blankets and dad said, our
rifles carefully at Arms Reach. Darkness fell quickly,
swallowing the world around us. Cold, seeped steadily through my
clothes until my teeth chattered.
Dad didn't start a fire. He seemed afraid to attract
attention his eyes, constantly scanning the woods, alert and
tense. Finally after what felt like
hours of Silence dad. Spoke, his voice was a low
murmur. Barely audible above the faint,
wind rustling through the branches below, you know, Caleb.
He said quietly. This isn't the first strange
thing I've seen out here. I stared at him in Surprise,
waiting for him to continue. Years ago, he said, softly
staring into the dark trees. I was hunting out here with my
friend, Mike, Good Hunter tough guy weed tracked, this big buck,
deep into these Hills, Mike took point and I held back waiting to
flank suddenly Mike just disappeared.
Dad swallowed hard pausing. When I got to where he should
have been, there was nothing no sign of him at all only his
rifle snapped clean in two barrel bent like something
grabbed and twisted it. Nobody ever found Mike I sat in
stunned silence shivering now for more than just the cold.
My dad wasn't one to make up stories.
His seriousness, frightened me deeply.
I wanted to dismiss it pretend he was just trying to toughen me
up, but the edge in his voice told me otherwise.
After that, neither of us spoke again.
I leaned my head back against the rough bark straining.
My eyes against the darkness, my heart pounded at the slightest
rustle of branches or distant crack of ice, each passing
minute tightened my nerves until sleep.
Finally, claimed me uneasy and fitful a sudden motion woke me
in the dead of night. I opened my eyes instantly
alert. Dad, sat upright Ridgid staring
silently into the forest, beyond our stand, my heart hammered in
my chest, something was wrong. Dad.
I whispered terrified to make, even the slightest.
Sound quiet. He breathed So Soft.
I barely heard him. It's back slowly carefully.
I leaned forward peering through the dark branches toward where
Dad was looking At first, I saw nothing just dense trees and
shadows. Then something shifted.
Something pale and thin among the trees.
It stood motionless. Taller than any man thin limbs
stretched unnaturally visible. Only as patches of faint
Moonlight reflecting on pale flesh.
It made no noise, no sound of breathing or movement, it just
stood there still as death watching us. my pulse pounded,
in my ears as we stared helplessly The thing didn't
approach, it didn't Retreat, it just remained there, half hidden
by darkness and trees. Letting us know, it was aware,
that it knew exactly where we were then silently almost
imperceptibly. It melted away into the Shadows,
Vanishing, as quietly as it had appeared.
Dad exhaled. Sharply releasing breath.
I hadn't realized he was holding.
Neither of us spoke until the first gray hints of dawn crept
through the woods washing away the night.
We're getting out of here, Dad finally said voice flat and
Hollow. Now, I climbed down from the
deer. Stand, my legs trembling with
exhaustion and fear. Before we could pack, I glanced
toward a distant Ridgeline suddenly freezing in place.
Standing motionless. Atop The Ridge clearly visible.
In the weak Morning. Light was a figure.
A man dressed. Exactly like my dad.
I blinked and confusion. The clothes matched.
Dad's perfectly. Same coat.
Same hat. It just stood there.
Rigid, staring down at us. I glanced quickly to my side.
Dad was right beside me. Eyes wide with fear as he stared
at the distant shape dad. That's, I started my voice
shaking. I see it, he cut me off.
Sharply, don't look at it pack. Quick we moved fast grabbing
only our Essentials leaving behind everything heavy and
unnecessary. My eyes flicked back toward the
Ridge. One last time, as we began our
hike back toward the truck, the figure was gone.
But I knew deep in my gut, it hadn't left.
It was still here somewhere close and it wasn't finished
with us yet. We moved quickly, the only
sounds coming from our boots crunching steadily through fresh
snow. As the morning Sky turned from
dull, gray to pale white. The silence between us felt
heavy. Both of us too afraid to speak.
Dad led the way rifle held ready.
Eyes. Darting constantly through the
trees after a couple of miles. I began to feel safer.
The distant Ridgeline, where we'd seen that strange figure
standing like a twisted reflection of dad was far behind
us. My muscles ached from exhaustion
and the adrenaline slowly wore away replaced by a bone deep
weariness. Hold up a minute.
Dad whispered coming to a stop near a dense cluster of Cedars.
I'll be right back. I nodded watching him disappear
behind a Thicket. Alone, I stood quietly.
Listening intently to the forest around me.
Second stretched into minutes but Dad didn't return the
titaness crept back into my chest.
Dad I called my voice shaking slightly no answer my heart
pounded as I circled the thicket careful not to trip in the thick
snow Dad wasn't there instead at the edge of my vision.
Something else moved, I turned sharply I scanning desperate to
see Dad stepping out from behind another tree but what I saw made
my stomach twists painfully. Standing about 50 yards away
near the trunk of a large Spruce.
Was my father or something that looked horribly like him.
He stood perfectly still his back to me.
Head tilted, strangely downward. The Familiar all of hunting
jacket was unmistakable. My voice caught in my throat.
Dad, I said again, barely above a whisper slowly stiffly, the
figure turned around, as soon as I saw the face clearly, I
recoiled instinctively, my blood turning cold.
It wore my father's clothes, but the limbs beneath were
grotesquely elongated bones pushing, oddly, beneath the
fabric. The face was thin and Hollow
skin stretched. Tightly over sharp, cheekbones
eyes, sunken and staring, Emily. It opened its mouth far too wide
but no sound emerged. Then without any warning, the
figure dropped onto all fours. Its limbs bent at unnatural
angles, joints shifting grotesquely beneath the clothes
as it began racing toward me. It moved silently and impossibly
fast disturbing the snow without any noise.
Pure Terrace through me, I turned and ran legs pumping
frantically snow dragging at my feet.
My lungs, burned each breath tearing painful at my chest.
I didn't dare glance back. The thought of seeing that
Twisted shape closing the gap between us pushed me faster.
As I stumbled down a steep slope and idea flashed through my
panicked. Mind the extra tents strapped to
my backpack, it might be my only chance my fingers fumbled
desperately as I pulled it loose grabing the lighter from my
pocket and flicking it frantically it sparked.
Once then again, finally igniting the corner of the
fabric. Flames erupted rapidly sending
Thick, Smoke billowing upward, I tossed.
The burning tent onto the snow, covered ground behind me.
The creature recoiled sharply from the sudden burst of fire
and smoke stopping its Pursuit momentarily, circling an
agitation, at the flames. I see my chance and sprinted
harder. Adrenaline driving me Beyond,
exhaustion my lungs, heaved painfully.
As I pushed through the last half mile to the truck.
I slammed into the door wrenching at open and scrambling
inside. Locking it behind me with
shaking hands, my pulse, thundered wildly in my ears, as
I turned the key, praying desperately for the engine to
start it, roared to life and without hesitation, I threw it
into reverse skidding sharply before regaining control.
I didn't stop didn't slow down until the forest had given way
to open Highway. And the snow-covered Hills faded
behind me days later, search and rescue teams found our camp and
the deer stand. But never found dad. near, the
stand authorities, recovered scraps of clothing and fragments
of bone scattered and shredded The official report listed him
as missing presumed dead. No predator or animal
identified. In private Whispers though
locals said we'd gone into wendigo country.
The forest swallowed Secrets easily.
I never hunted again. Growing up in Western
Massachusetts. I always felt drawn to the
mountains, a specialty, the unforgiving, peaks of New
Hampshire's White Mountains. Mount Washington was the
ultimate test, a granite Beast Infamous for unpredictable
weather and punishing storms. They said conditions on its
Summit, could change in a heartbeat.
I'd heard plenty of stories, in my time, as a Wilderness EMT,
but to me, the challenge was part of the Allure.
I was novice to hiking or cold weather.
After serving as an army combat medic, I took pride in being
ready for anything. Solo hikes had become my
therapy. My solitude they grounded me
kept my mind clear I was careful.
Meticulous always packed with backup gear, redundant plans and
Alternate Routes etched clearly into my mind.
I didn't hike to get attention. No, social media updates, no
pictures. Just me the elements and the
silence. In early March, I decided to
tackle the presidential Traverse a challenge across the
presidential range Peaks. The weather forecast had
indicated mild conditions with only minor snowfall expected
over the next few days enough to make it interesting.
I thought, but nothing dangerous for someone of my experience.
I intended to cross from Mount Adams, Southward over Washington
Summit, staying cautious, but confident the first day was
uneventful, Chris bear and clear skies made the ascent toward
Mount Adams in joyful. But on the second day halfway
across the open Windswept Alpine Tundra toward Washington, the
conditions started deteriorating fast.
By noon, what had been predicted as a mild snow flurry quickly
turned into a dense white out visibility plunged.
Snow came down and thick sheets whipped sideways by an icy wind.
I could barely see 20 yards ahead, the trail markers, small
Stone Cairns vanished quickly beneath the accumulating snow
I'd studied the maps and there was a crude emergency warming
Hut nestled into a sheltered area just below Washington
Summit Ridge. It wasn't well known omitted
from most Trails, but locals and Sr Cruise, trusted in Desperate
Times. I adjusted my compass setting a
direct bearing toward the Hutt. Fighting through drifting.
Snow my breathing steady but strained beneath my fleece neck
gaiter. It took me nearly two exhausting
hours in knee deep powder, before the shape of the Hutt,
finally loomed through the storm.
It was smaller than I had expected.
Nothing more than a rectangular. Timber structure, it's flat snow
covered roof, barely visible. I quickly approached relief to
find shelter The wooden door swung open easily.
The latch was broken in darkness and cold are greeted me.
I clicked on my headlamps scanning the room, there wasn't
much inside a cotton to the floor.
An old stone fireplace with the black and steel chimney.
And walls lined with rough Timber I removed my backpack
preparing to settle in and make hot food.
Then my headlamp swept across the walls.
I froze and uncomfortable. Chill crawling down my spine,
carvings Crude deep etchings covered.
The Timbers scratched frantically into the wood.
Stick figures thin bent and distorted around them.
Were taller shapes elongated and twisted.
Unmistakably crowned, with antlers, the carvings repeated
becoming more chaotic. The further they went beneath
some Figures were small strange symbols.
I vaguely recognized as Algonquian pictographs.
I leaned close closer running gloved.
Fingers along the gouges in disbelief.
Whoever had made these carvings had done so forcefully,
desperately as if driven by Madness or fear.
Then illuminated, by the narrow beam of my headlamp, a single
word, stood out, clearly among the chaotic drawings wendigo.
My heart beat a little faster. The word was familiar.
I'd heard it whispered jokingly among guides and Trail veterans
around campfires and Sr. Briefings a mythical, Algonquian
creature, born of starvation, cold and Madness.
Supposedly it haunted these mountains.
Consuming the Lost I'd always dismissed it, as folklore
spooky, campfire, nonsense, but alone in this Hut with the storm
raging outside and these unsettling images carved
violently around me, it felt disturbingly real.
Shaking myself clear, I forced rational thought back into my
mind. Someone had simply spent too
much time trapped here alone, scrolling nightmares into wood.
Maybe hypothermia or Cabin Fever had gotten the better of them.
Still, I found myself glancing repeatedly at the carvings as I
lit. My small stove and cooked a
quick meal. The strange figures seeming to
shift each time the flame flickered.
By to my sleeping bag on the cot, gripping my knife out of
instinct. Wind battered the Hutt.
Snow hissed, softly against the walls.
Around midnight something, jolted me awake, a single loud,
thud rattled the back wall. I sat upright, heart hammering
silence. I waited breath held straining.
My ears, another heavy impact shook the wall.
Again, harder this time, my mind raced for explanations falling
ice shifting, snow, no trees, stood nearby.
No branches to break or fall outside was open Tundra and
rock, nothing that could slam into the Hut, like that yet.
It had happened twice now heavy and deliberate I gripped, the
knife Tighter and listened. My breath forming clouds.
In the cold, are my ears ached from the silence that followed
desperate to hear footsteps or movement.
Anything that might explain the noise rationally, There was
nothing, just the steady pounding of my heart.
I stayed that way until dawn finally crept into the Cracks
around the wooden door exhaustion tugging at me, but
sleep and impossibility. I forced myself up and gather my
courage approaching the door and pushing it open cautiously.
Outside my breath caught painfully in my throat.
The snowfall had erased all traces of the path I'd taken.
My footprints were gone completely, but Fresh Tracks.
Impossibly, large elongated footprints, on like, any animal
I'd ever encountered circled the Hutt approaching close and then
pulling away into the snowbound nothingness.
My stomach Twisted, as I turned back inside, shutting the door
firmly behind me, heart thudding in my chest.
That's when I saw them. Clearly claw marks, long and
deep were carved violently into the inside of the Hutt store.
They hadn't been there before something had been inside with
me. My pulse pounded, in my ears, as
I stared at those impossible gouges carved deep into the
wooden door from the inside. They were superficial scratches,
they were long ragged furrows, cut with force and precision,
whatever had made them had been inches from me during the night,
separated only by the thin fabric of my sleeping bag and
the feeble beam of my headlamp. I stepped back heart racing and
turned my eyes. Again toward the crude drawings,
covering the walls, the Twisted stick-like human figures, the
looming. Antlered, shapes the word
wendigo scratched, repeatedly into the woods, stood out
vividly now. Mocking my early or skepticism I
forced myself to breathe slowly. Panic.
Wouldn't help me survive, this My training kicked in, assess
your surroundings, manage your resources, make a clear plan and
stick to it. Right now, survival meant
getting off this mountain as soon as possible.
I grabbed my pack checked my gear methodically and pushed out
into the biting cold. Morning, had broken gray and
heavy snow continuing to swirl softly around me.
The landscape was featureless an empty white expanse, blending
seamlessly with an equally pale sky.
The trail I had followed here was invisible under deep powder.
My earlier Footprints were erased completely replaced by
something else entirely. my stomach lurched, as I saw the
tracks circling, the HUD again, clearer, now in the dim
daylight, They were impossibly large sunk deep into the snow as
if whatever made them had unnatural weight.
For elongated toes, protruded from each print, claw tipped and
widely spaced. I knelt to examine them fingers,
trembling slightly, as I felt the compacted snow beneath.
Whatever had left. These tracks had approached, the
Hutt multiple times during the night pacing around its
silently, then the tracks veered off, sharply leading out into
the open Tundra to the south west.
I pulled out my compass, hoping to find my bearing.
But the needle swung erratically refusing to settle.
Frustrated, trying to Steady My Hand.
After several attempts, the needle, finally stopped spinning
pointing uncertainly Southward. I had no choice, but to trust
it, I had to descend toward the lakes of the clouds Hut closer
to safety. I started walking slowly,
navigating carefully around snowberry Boulders and hidden
dips in the terrain. The world felt closed in
oppressive and endless blank canvas of disorienting white.
Minutes passed slowly each step. Deliberate cautious.
Then my stomach Twisted again, in sickening recognition, I was
passing the HUD again, I stopped dead disbelief clawing at the
edges of my mind. I'd walked straight following
the compass yet. Somehow, I circled back to the
warming Hut. I swallowed hard and forced down
a wave of panic. This was impossible, the tundra
was featureless but I knew navigation well enough.
My roach should have been clearing my teeth.
I altered my direction. Bearing slightly Eastward this
time. I'd ever unseen.
Obstacle had turned me back before.
My breathing was, shallow, ragged driven as much by fear as
exertion. I pushed on snow crunching
beneath my boots. 15 minutes later, I saw it again.
The Hutt, still silent standing bleakly against the Horizon.
I felt a deep instinctive dread take hold of me.
It was as if the landscape itself refused to let me go
holding me prisoner in an endless loop was I hallucinating
from cold or exhaustion. Know, I still felt Lucid alert
but trapped in a nightmare, the wind began to pick up gusting
and sharp bursts driving needles of ice into my Exposed Skin
shivering uncontrollably. I was forced to retreat back
into the Hut, Darkness would return eventually.
And if I was still lost out here, when night fell again, my
chances of survival would plummet Back in side, I stared
bitterly at The Familiar carved warnings on the walls then a
cold realization spread through me among the carvings near the
fireplace was something new. Something I was certain had not
been there before. A skeletal figure tall and gone.
Crowned with a deer skull in Long Twisted, antlers beneath it
scratched. Deep into the wood.
Were two words frantic and ragged.
Stay inside. I clenched, my fists feeling, a
helpless, anger, building someone or something was toying
with me. My instincts screamed to run to
fight to escape, but I had nowhere left to go outside the
wind rose to a steady howl, the temperature dropped sharply
bitter, cold seeping into the small structure night was
returning and dreads settled into my bones.
I prepared my gear tightening straps, checking my ice axe and
knife, laying them within easy reach.
I knew one thing with absolute certainty, whatever had left.
Those carvings whatever had circled me during the night.
It was still out there somewhere.
Close waiting patiently. As Darkness, reclaimed the
mountain, the silence, inside the hut grew unbearable.
Pressing on my senses like a physical weight.
And then in the dead quiet, something scrapes slowly across
the roof. I held perfectly still my head.
Cocked toward the ceiling muscles, taught with tension.
The scraping overhead was slow and methodical, the sound of
something heavy being dragged carefully across the Hutt's
roof. My heart hammered in my chest.
So loudly, it seemed impossible that whatever was up there
couldn't hear it. The dragon stopped abruptly
replaced by silence. Not a peaceful silence, but one
filled with a terrible anticipation, then without
warning, snow and debris. Burst down through the chimney.
Scattering, soot and Ash onto the Stone Hearth below.
I spun around grabbing my ice axe from beside the cot.
My headlamps beam shook as I aimed it upward Illuminating,
the stone flew, a sickening dread Twisted in my stomach.
A pale elongated hand slowly extended downward from within
the chimney. Bone white, skeletal fingers,
curled around the bricks. The fingernails were blackened
and cracked chipped and splintered scratching against
Stone as the hand reached further down, my breath caught
painfully in my throat. Something else emerged above the
hand long thin antlers impossibly, Twisted jutting from
the shadowed chimney shaft, my blood went cold The carvings on
the walls were not symbolic, they were warning.
The word wendigo etched in frantic repetition flooded, my
thoughts. Those Algonquian Legends, I
dismissed rushed back to haunt me.
A creature born of starvation in Madness.
Endlessly hungry, always seeking the warmth, of the living, I
snapped into action. My body moved on Instinct
training overcoming paralysis. I lunged forward grabbing the
small metal fuel canister. From my stove, kit twisting open
the nozzle and spraying it directly upward into the
chimney. The pungent chemical odor,
filled the small Hut instantly stinging.
My eyes. The pale hand retreated,
slightly twitching violently. I flicked my lighter and hurled
it upward into the chimney. Flame roared upward igniting the
fuel in a brilliant violent burst of heat and light a deep
guttural hiss erupted from within the flu as the flame
surged upward. I stumbled backward coughing as
stood and smoke filled the small space above something heavy
scrambled and scraped its way off the roof retreating Into the
Storm outside for several long minutes.
I sat crouched by the cot acts gripped, tightly lungs aching
staring upward into the darkness.
Silence returned to the Hutt. The fire in the chimney died.
Quickly leaving only faint wisps of smoke curling upward.
My ears strained against the suffocating quiet desperate for
any sign. The thing had truly fled, my
nerves were shredded and my limbs trembled from exhaustion
and Terror, the rest of the night passed in near total
Stillness broken. Only by occasional gusts of wind
rattling, the Hutt's wooden frame.
I stayed awake gripping the axe tightly my back pressed firmly
against the wall opposite. The chimney Dawn arrived slowly,
the faint grey light filtering through gaps in the timber.
Cautiously, I Rose my body stiff and weak from fatigue and cold.
Outside a calm had settled over the mountain, a bitter Clarity
after the chaos. Whatever held me trapped the day
before was gone. I felt it instinctively.
Something had changed the oppressive sensation of being
watched was absent. I gathered my gear and pushed
open the Hutt door. Cold air rushed in sharp and
painful against my Frost nipped skin, but it felt cleansing
reassuring. I wasted no time setting out
Southward again. My compass pointed true.
Now, steady in my hand leading me away from that cursed
shelter. After an hour of careful,
navigation, shapes emerged in the distance bright, orange
jacket, standing out starkly against the monochrome,
landscape a search and rescue team, had ventured upward from
the lakes of the clouds, Hut, scanning the ridge.
I called out my voice raw and weak waving an arm desperately.
They rushed forward, helping me to sit wrapping me in a thermal
blanket. Relief flooded my body, a heavy
exhausted relief, unlike anything I'd ever known.
Between trembling breaths. I tried to explain to warn them
about the Hutt about what I had seen at first, they listened
politely nodding sympathetically, but as I spoke
of claw marks, carvings an antlered things emerging from
chimneys. Their expressions became
guarded. They exchanged quick uncertain
glances convinced I was suffering from hypothermic
hallucinations only later after I was safely down the mountain
warmed and stabilized. Did I learn what the rescue team
discovered when they returned to inspect the Hutt?
The Tsar leader came to my hospital room visibly shaken to
quietly share the details. Inside the warming Hut, exactly.
As I had described, they found bricks torn loose from within
the chimney. Deep gouges marred, the inside
of the door matching my description precisely.
The Hutt had been hastily boarded shot, the chimney
permanently sealed. The leader can fighted quietly.
It was not the first strange incident there.
Merely the most recent He offered.
No explanations just quietly. Advised that I never speak
openly about what happened? Months passed.
I relocated South away from mountains and snow far from the
memories of that Endless Night. But some things never leave you
entirely. To this day.
I still keep that ice axe. Tucked safely in a closet, the
handle stained dark from soot and fire.
A silent remind her of the cold in the clause in the antlers to
sending slowly toward me in the dark.
I'd spent most of my adult life in places like this quiet remote
and rugged. It's a life, I chose a Solace.
I found in the vast Untamed corners of the country.
Before the New Mexico Department of Game and Fish, I was a
Yellowstone field researcher comfortable with the profound
Silence of trekking alone, through vast stretches of forest
and back country. I'd face down Grizzlies and
spent weeks with only wolves for company.
But my assignment. Now, simple enough on paper.
Felt different from the start. Caller elk and collect
biological samples in the Gila Wilderness.
Following a shocking in unexplained. 40% drop in
population. The Gila is no Yellowstone
though. Yellowstone has a certain rugged
Grandeur and openness to its wildness.
The Gila is rougher somehow more Primal and less forgiving dense.
Thorny forests tumble into shadowed.
Canyons that seemed to swallow the light and the terrain
conspires to make you feel like an intruder. it feels untouched
not in a pristine way, but in a way that suggests even the
locals know better than to go too far in, I've made camp three
miles off the main trail last night, near turkey, feather
pass, and it pushed even farther north this morning toward the
headwaters of bear wallow Creek, My objective was to call her elk
in an area where motion triggered cameras had picked up
something deeply odd. Herds breaking apart and blind
panic. Scattering for no discernible
reason. It didn't match the behavior of
any known, Predator, Wolf, lion or bear.
By noon, I reached the area. I'd marked on my map, an Open
Meadow a Serene looking clearing.
Ringed by a silent Congregation of old growth, Spruce and
ponderosa pine. My boots sank, slightly into the
soft Dark Earth, still damp from recent rains.
I paused to get my bearings and check my gear tranquilizer.
Rifle strapped, securely over one shoulder tagging supplies in
my backpack and the biological sampling kits.
Secured to my belt. Everything was accounted for.
The first sign that something was profoundly wrong.
Hit me about 50 yards into the clearing.
It was the quiet an unnatural suffocating quiet.
I've spent enough time Outdoors to know that silence often
signals danger the tents. Pause before a predator strike's
But this was different, it wasn't a pause.
It was a vacuum. As if sound itself was being
actively suppressed. I scan the tree line, slowly, my
hand resting on the stock of my rifle.
But there was nothing. No shapes moving through the
brush. No, flicker of a tail.
No signs of disturbance. I nearly stumbled on the first
elk without seeing it. It lay perfectly still collapsed
in The Tall Grass as if it had simply laid down for a nap,
Kneeling, I touched its flank, gingerly Cold Stone Cold.
Rigor mortis had already set in the limbs stiff as iron,
suggesting it had been dead for days.
But that was impossible. The grass beneath the massive
body was fresh green and completely undisturbed.
There were no signs of a struggle.
No Turned Up Mud and more unnerving.
Still no wounds, no blood, no bite marks from predators.
Not even a scratch. Nothing as I Rose and looked
around the meadow a cold not tightened in my chest.
There were more. Five additional elk, lay
scattered evenly across the clearing, forming a near-perfect
circle with the first one. Each was positioned in the same
bizarre, Placid State lying down legs.
Stiffly extended neck stretched out and eyes wide open staring
at the empty sky. Their tongues protruded
slightly, a grotesque uniform touch to an already surreal
scene. I forced my training to take
over pushing back the rising tide of dread.
I moved from one carcass to the next.
A grim circuit around the clearing documenting the same
inexplicable symptoms. No trauma, no Scavenging, no
apparent, cause of death. Matically, my hands moving with
a Precision that belied the Tremor in my gut.
I took tissue samples, hair samples, blood samples from each
animal. I labeled each glass tube with
meticulous care, the scratch of my pain, the only sound in the
unnerving. Stillness.
The whole time I fought off the distinct and terrifying feeling
that the forest had gone. Even quieter as if it were
holding, its breath watching me, It took me an hour to finish.
The samples were critical and needed to get to the lab
immediately. But when I tried my satellite
phone, the signal struggled flickering with a single week
bar before. Dropping out completely, no
connection. I tucked the precious samples
securely into a cooled pouch in my pack and stood knowing I
would have to carry them out myself tomorrow morning.
As dusk began to bleed through the trees.
I made Camp just outside the meadow seeking.
The meager shelter of a thick Spruce stand, I wasn't hungry.
I wasn't tired. I was coiled tight.
Every Instinct screaming at me to pack up and get out now.
But Logic, the scientist in me, held me back there.
Had to be a rational explanation a localized disease, a toxic
fungus, an environmental poison, I couldn't abandon my assignment
without more data. I lay awake long after Darkness
fell staring at the thin nylon of my tent wall listening.
The forest had finally begun to stir again, the faint rustling
of nocturnal animals. The distance soothing murmur of
the creek, normalcy was returning, then everything.
Went quiet. Once more in that absolute
silence came a sound, I know I will never be able to erase from
my memory. Along piercing scream that
erupted from somewhere high of the ridge.
It wasn't human. It wasn't elk mountain, lion
bear, or coyote I've heard every sound the North American
Wilderness can produce and this was none of them.
The scream Rose in a sharp agonizing, Crescendo a sound of
pure Terror and Malice. And then it abruptly cut off
leaving a void of Silence that felt deeper and more threatening
than, before my heart, hammered against my ribs.
As I sat bolt, upright, my hand closing around the cold steel of
my tranquilizer, rifle, Then came a sudden sharp snap of
brush close. Maybe 20 yards out.
Another followed slightly off to my right.
Whatever was out, there was moving deliberately circling my
tent at a regular intervals. Each crack of a branch each
crunch of leaf litter, sounded heavy intentional.
This was no deer wandering. By, with a trembling hand, I
clicked on my high Lumen flashlight tour, opened the tent
flap and blasted the beam into the trees.
I saw nothing just the stark white trunks of Aspen's, the
Deep Shadows between them and empty spaces where something
should have been standing. slowly methodically, I swept the
light in a full circle around my campsite Nothing moved, but I
knew with a certainty that went deeper than sight.
That something was there watching me from just beyond the
edge of the light. I zipped the tent closed again
and waited my back pressed against my pack rifle, in my
lap. My eyes were wide open in the
oppressive dark fully aware. I wouldn't sleep.
Another minute until daylight came. at the first pale hint of
Dawn, I abandoned any pretense of scientific Duty, My fingers
clumsy and shaking fumbled with my gear.
It wasn't the morning cold that caused the Tremor, but a raw
Edge dread. I'd never experienced before.
Not even when I had been Bluff charged by a grizzly in
Yellowstone. Every Instinct I possessed
shouted at me to leave to put as much distance as possible
between myself and the clearing of dead.
Elf between me and whatever had patiently circled my tent during
The Long Dark Night. I said out quickly heading south
along a narrow game trail that would eventually lead toward the
ranger station near Bonner. Canyon As the son climbed
higher, casting Long Shadows through the trees.
I forced myself to breathe evenly to rationalize my fear
exhaustion Solitude, an overactive imagination.
Playing cruel tricks. But no amount of logic could
erase the memory of that scream, echoing through the darkness.
By midday I came across a cluster of elk bones scattered
across the trail. I knelt to examine them and a
fresh wave of ice flowed through my veins.
The bones were entirely clean unnaturally stripped of every
shred of muscle sinew and ligament What remained had been
carefully. Arranged in precise anatomical
order the ribs laid out in a perfect parallel fan the
vertebrae aligned in a neat delicate column.
There were no teeth marks from scavengers, no evidence of
insects. The scene felt clinical sterile
almost purposeful. It wasn't a kill sight.
It was an exhibit. I stood back up.
The acidic Taste of bile rising in my throat.
A sudden, sound behind me, a heavy footstep, the definitive
crunch of a boot on gravel, it was so close.
It sent a jolt of electricity up my spine.
I spun around pulse sleeping, scanning the trees and the trail
behind me. Nothing only silence, I exhaled.
Sharply my breath. Clouding in the air.
I tried to convince myself. I had imagined it, but the
forest around me felt suffocating oppressive.
I started walking again, faster. This time.
After only a few steps, the sound returned, a distinct
rhythmic crunch on the forest floor matching my stride
perfectly. I took one step a second later a
step echoed mine. I took three quick steps three
quick crunches answered. I stopped dead.
So did it. I tested it again and again, raw
Panic clawing at my throat as the horrifying pattern
continued, this wasn't an echo or a coincidence.
It was deliberate mocking, mimicry unable to stand it.
Any longer I broke from the trail fearing sharply into the
dense undergrowth. I plunged through, thorny cat
claw, Acacia The spine's Ripping at my pants and legs drawing
blood. I didn't care.
I welcome to the pain. Something tangible to Anchor me
against the rising wave of unreasoning fear.
The footsteps behind me. See for a moment, only to be
replaced by the heavy snapping and crunching of something much
larger forcing its way through the brush nearby.
Paralleling my course desperation surged through me I
pressed forward ignoring the pain until the forest floor gave
way to a steep Rocky slope. I scrambled up loose grease
slipping and clattering beneath my boots.
Halfway up the incline. I paused to catch my breath.
My lungs, burning gripping, the rough Stone for support and
that's when I saw it. Below me standing motionless.
Under a deep rock overhang was a figure unlike anything I had
ever encountered in Life. Or in Nightmare, it was tall
impossibly. So at least seven feet with
unnaturally elongated limbs draped in what looked like
ragged Patchwork animal hides. Its body was emaciated skeletal,
the outline of its rib cage. Clearly visible beneath the
tattered skins, but the head I couldn't clearly make out its
features. There was only a Halo.
Absolute Darkness, beneath what appeared to be some sort of
ceremonial Hood, fashioned from Antlers and bones.
I was frozen my breath trapped in my chest.
It didn't move or speak it just remained perfectly still a
silent tenebrous shape. Observing me from the Shadows of
the overhang. My paralysis broke in a surge of
pure adrenaline. I turned and lunged upward
scrambling desperately over the jagged Terrain.
My pack caught on a jutting piece of granite and without a
second thought, I Shrugged out of the straps, letting it fall
away, my precious supplies scattering down the rocks.
I couldn't afford to stop. Couldn't dare to look back.
My lungs felt like they were on fire and my legs screamed in
agony, but the terror drove me. Relentlessly forward behind me.
The sound began again. The clear rhythmic footsteps,
steady and unhurried crunching on leaves and breaking twigs.
Whatever it was. It moved effortlessly through
the same obstacles. I struggled to navigate.
I saw a narrow crevice between two massive Boulders and
stumbled into it pressing myself flat into the Gap.
My chest heaving sweat streaming down my face, the approaching
footsteps slowed, and finally stopped, just beyond my hiding
spot. I held my breath willing, my
self silent listening. And then I heard it the low ring
sound of slow measured breathing, just on the other
side of the rock, it was so close.
I imagined I could smell its breath a rancid earthy odor.
Sour and ancient my heartbeat pounded, in my ears, like a
drum, a frantic countdown to inevitable discovery.
But Discovery never came in instead.
I remained wedged their tents and rigid as daylight gradually
faded into the deep purple of Twilight.
The breathing, never shifted, never retreated it simply
lingered a patient terrifying presence in the dark, all I
could do was wait eyes, wide muscles aching knowing I had no
choice but to endure the night. The first pale streak of dawn,
cut through the sky and I forced my stiff aching body from the
narrow Gap. Dried blood crusted, the deep
scratches on my legs. I stepped gingerly into the
open. Bracing myself for the figure
that attracted me relentlessly, but the space beyond the
boulders was empty. Silent nothing moved.
I started cautiously downhill trying to orient myself toward
the Bonner, Ranger cabin. My abandoned pack along with my
map, sat phone and supplies, lay scattered somewhere on the slope
behind me. But I knew this part of the
Wilderness, well enough to navigate by instinct.
I moved slowly at first. Fighting dizziness and
exhaustion every snapping twig making me.
Jump my head constantly swiveling to glance over my
shoulder. The figure was gone yet.
The sensation of being watched never subsided hours passed.
with each mile, my Pace quickened, as the harsh Rocky
landscape, gave way to more forgiving to rain Gradually
landmarks became familiar. The long abandoned Logging Road,
the Crooked stump, were the trail forked.
Finally, just before noon, I stumbled upon something that
made me freeze mid-step there. Flying, open in perfectly
centered on. The trail was my field notebook,
my chest tightened I knew for a fact, I'd packed it securely in
a side pocket of my pack. Yet here, it sat miles from
where I dropped it untouched, except for one small detail.
The elastic band that held it closed was missing.
Kneeling cautiously, I examined it, half expecting some Sinister
message scrawled across its pages.
But they were pristine undisturbed.
A cold dread worse than anything before.
Ran down my spine. This wasn't just a monster.
It was intelligent. It was toying with me.
Carefully. I placed the notebook in my
pocket and continued on forcing myself, not to dwell on the
impossible Logistics of how it had gotten there.
The airflow for midday. Though, the weather had been
mild, my breath began to condense visibly before me.
I pulled out the portable thermometer clip to my jacket.
It read 64 degrees Fahrenheit. Yet.
I shivered on controllably from a chill that felt like it was
radiating from the inside out. By the time, I finally reached
the ranger station dusk was creeping over the Wilderness.
Again, the small wooden cabin, stood alone, silent and empty
the door was unlocked, as it always was a common refuge for
emergency. I stumbled inside and without
hesitation barricaded the door, with a heavy wooden table
shoving it tight against the frame until it wouldn't budge.
Only then did my legs finally give out I sank to The Cabins
rough wooden floor. My body shaking with a violence.
I couldn't control exhausted, dehydrated and physically
drained sleep. Took me swiftly.
Darkness. Claimed my Consciousness, a
black dreamless void, free of movement, free of fear, it felt
mercifully, empty. I awoke early the next morning,
still curled on the floor, blessedly on touched outside.
The world had returned to normal birds were singing sunlight
filtered, gently through the cabin's Dusty Windows Gathering,
what remained of my strengths, I un barricaded the door, stepped
outside and began the final long Trek out, along the service
road. Within hours, a forest patrol
truck, spotted me, limping down the dirt road.
They rushed me to the district office where I handed over the
carefully preserved samples. The next two weeks were a blur
of debriefing and medical checks of trying to regain normalcy, to
erase the memories of that shadowed.
Canyon the figure Beneath The Rock, overhang the circle of elk
frozen, stiff their wide open eyes staring endlessly at
nothing when the lab results, finally arrived my supervisor a
grizzled man named Frank called me into his office.
His expression was Grim as he placed the report on his desk
between us. Rachel.
He began his voice, low. The elk.
You found something happened to their bodies on a cellular
level. The tissues showed evidence of
flash freezing. The kind of Rapid
crystallization of intracellular water that normally only happens
in cryogenics or sudden exposure to Sub-Zero conditions but it
was mild out there, right? I nodded slowly my throat dry?
Yes, temperatures were in the 60s.
He hesitated drumming his fingers on the desk.
And there was something else there, adrenal glands were
flooded with stress hormones. The levels were, well, they were
physically impossible higher than any biological organism,
should be able to produce. They were literally scared to
death and then frozen solid in an instant, His eyes full of a
deep weary concerned fixed on mine.
He leaned in slightly lowering his voice until it was almost a
Whisperer. Listen, Rachel, this isn't the
first time. Something inexplicable has come
out of the Gila. There are old reports stories
from ranchers. We always dismissed as folklore,
if I were, you, I would request reassignment somewhere closer to
civilization. He didn't have to tell me twice,
I never minded the quiet not when I was overseas.
And certainly not now that I was running snow plows for Arizona
Department of Transportation along Arizona's White Mountains.
Some of the guys complained about the night shifts said the
isolation got to them. but after four tours in Afghanistan, with
an engineering unit clearing IEDs from Lonely Mountain Roads,
this felt peaceful Until tonight.
Anyway, it was mid-april technically spring, but this
late snow storm had blown in like a slap across the face.
Burying root 273 beneath two feet of thick wet powder.
Dispatch had called me in after dinner, a four-hour job at most.
They'd said Simple enough, clear?
The route get home by sunrise. but the storm was heavier than
forecasted visited dropping and the temperature already down
into the teams, it felt colder, every minute, even inside the
cab, The wipers clicked steadily, as I ease the plow
along, the dark Highway snowbanks building on either
side tall stands of spruce and fur crowded.
The road thick branches bowed low beneath snow, that kept
falling. The cab heater fought hard
against the cold outside but I could still feel the chill
seeping through the windows ice forming on the edges of the
glass. My headlights.
Barely pierced the swirling white shadows flickering through
my peripheral vision. Each time the beams swept across
the trees. I was near Crescent Lake when I
saw the car, a silver. Subaru Forester knows crunched
into a drift on the side of the road hazards flashed dimly
nearly hidden beneath a mound of fresh snow.
I slowed, the plow and rolled to a stop behind the vehicle.
The engine idling low. It wasn't uncommon for people to
underestimate these storms and end up stranded, especially this
close to the reservation boundary.
Dispatched, this is Kyle Moreno. I said in to the radio mic got
an abandoned vehicle near mile marker. 47.5 comma Route, 273
looks stuck. Good gonna check it out.
Static buzzed back at me, faint voices, lost somewhere in
between reception, had been spotty all night.
I logged the vehicles location into my notebook.
Zipped up my jacket and stepped outside.
The wind hit like Frozen nails, bitter and stinging, numbing my
cheeks instantly, I trudged over to the Subaru, through
knee-deep, drifts flashlight, slicing through the darkness.
The driver's side, door hung wide open snow blowing inside
ways already starting to pile up on the empty seat, the keys
still dangled from the ignition chiming softly.
With each gust of wind, I leaned inside scanning quickly, a
wallet, sat untouched in the cup, holder flipped, open to a
tribal ID. Desiree end White River 26.
The photograph showed a young woman smiling.
Shyly. Dark eyes.
Looking out with quiet warmth. I glanced up in felt my chest
tightened. A large smear of Blood Stained
the fabric seat dark and already partially froze.
Frozen trailing out onto the snow outside.
Swallowing hard, I stepped back and swept the flash light beam
around the Subaru. Looking for signs of struggle or
a crash victim. That's when I saw the tracks,
Barefoot prints, not boots or shoes bare feet pressed deeply
into the snow. The toes played wide unevenly
spaced as if limping or stumbling.
The tracks LED straight from the driver's side, door away from
the road and into the dense Woods below the embankment.
I stood Frozen for a moment, listening to the crack of
branches, shifting under the heavy snow in the distance.
My training told me to follow to look for someone who might be
hypothermic or injured. But my gut Twisted in
apprehension. Something felt wrong.
It wasn't just the absence of shoes or the bitter cold that
nagged at me. It was the unnatural spacing of
those Footprints stretched and uneven.
Like whoever made them wasn't walking normally wasn't even
walking comfortably. Dispatch, I called again, into
the radio, urgency edging into my voice possible injured,
motorist Footprints going into the woods, requested immediate
assistance. Only static responded and empty
hiss, that seemed to mock me from the silent cab.
I took a few tentative steps toward the tree line, Flash
Light Beam, trembling slightly in the Wind.
The footprints, LED downward plunging, Straight Into
Darkness, swallowed by dense. Fur trees, whose branches
Tangled together like grasping hands.
Snow drifted, steadily quickly filling and softening, the sharp
edges of the prince. I hesitated at the tree line.
Flashlight, trembling slightly in my grip.
The darkness was impenetrable dense and oppressive.
Deep Shadows moved with the wind branches creaked under the
weight of snow. And somewhere further in a
single Branch snapped sharply quick brittle as if Stepped On
by something heavy, every nerve in my body warned me to stop to
step back. It wasn't cowardice, I'd faced
worse fear than this in deserts, thousands of miles away but
something deeper older a feeling more Instinct than thought.
I retreated slowly still facing the woods then hurried back to
the plow, slamming the heavy door shut and locking it behind
me. Snow swirled angrily against the
windows as if annoyed that I escaped back to shelter,
dispatched, this is Moreno. I said, again, throat.
Tight need someone out here. ASAP, I've got blood on scene,
Footprints leading into the woods injured, persons suspected
the static wavered briefly then silents.
I set the mic down, heart hammering.
I stared through the windshield at the dark wall of trees.
Snow obscuring. Everything now except for the
faint irregular, depression's marking where Desiree had fled
into the night and as I shifted the plow back into gear and
slowly continued forward, I couldn't shake the Sensation
that something out there in the Frozen.
Darkness had watched the whole thing on folding patiently for
me to return. I'd moved on from the abandoned
Subaru but my mind wouldn't let it go.
The image of those Barefoot tracks kept replaying in my
head, the blood on the seat Vivid behind my eyes.
The radio still wasn't working nothing but static, hissing back
at me, each time, I tried dispatch.
It felt as if the snowstorm had cut me off entirely from the
rest of the world, trapping me alone along Route, 273.
It was just passed midnight and visibility had fallen to less
than 50 feet. Snow piled up relentlessly
thickening into heavy. Drifts along the edges of the
road. The cab was getting colder.
Despite the heater running at full blast the windows slowly.
Fogging with condensation, every mile crawled by painfully slow
my headlights. Cut feebly through the swirling
flakes. Illuminating only glimpses of
empty road ahead as if the world outside down to nothing the
plows engines suddenly sputtered jolted then when silent taking
every electrical system with it. The cab went dark headlights out
dash lights off heater silent. I tried the ignition twisting
the key then pressing the starter repeatedly nothing.
Not even a click. It felt as though, someone had
simply flipped a switch killing everything at once.
My breath. Plumed out into visible Mist as
the warmth drained from the cab. Already feeling the bite of the
cold seeping inside. I grabbed my flashlight and
stepped out cautiously Wind immediately ripped at my face
snow, stinging my eyes. The beam of my flashlight.
Flickered through swirling powder, as I circled the front
popped the hood and checked beneath Battery terminals,
secure belts and tacked. No leaks.
I couldn't find a single visible cause for the sudden shutdown,
frustration, nodded at me mixing with unease, something like this
should never have happened not all at once, not without
warning. As I stood staring helplessly at
the silent engine compartment. I heard it clearly a sharp
sudden, inhale from somewhere down the slope.
Not quite animal, definitely not human.
It was a wet strangled intake of breath followed by the distinct
sound of a large Branch snapping on weight.
I turned flash light shaking in my hand, as I swept the tree
line. My beam skittered nervously over
snow-covered Spruce searching for movement.
Only darkness and snow, thick and endless, but something
shifted, a shadow, just beyond where my beam reached, whatever
it was. It was tall.
Upright moving slowly between the trees careful and quiet.
I hurried back to the cab locking the doors behind me.
My pulse throbbed rapidly in my throat, ears ringing with
adrenaline. I tugged open the lock box
beneath the seat removing my Ruger 357 and gripping.
It firmly comforted by the weight in my hand.
I stared out through the windshield, trying to call
myself. Watching snow pile up across the
glass. Nothing moved.
Nothing stirred outside. But the silence didn't feel
empty. It felt intentional like
something was choosing not to make noise.
The forest outside was quiet. Frozen, almost waiting.
Then the entire plow shifted suddenly just a small Tilt at
first as though something had stepped onto the bumper at the
back, my heart pounded louder, breathe shallow.
I turned slowly staring through the dark rear window, a scraping
sound echoed, softly long rasping like something hard and
sharp Dragon itself along the steel siding of the plow It
moved slowly deliberately from the back toward the driver's
side. Then came the heavy distinct
thump of footsteps in snow. They stopped just beside my
window. I gripped the revolver tighter,
raising it slowly. My breathing turned ragged
shallow puffs of vapor rapidly fogging the glass.
I stared out at the snow blurred night, too terrified to move, or
look away. Slowly a shape appeared a tall
figure thin and impossibly gone emerging silently from the
swirling snow. My stomach knotted as the flash
lights dim reflection illuminated a rib cage
stretched. Tightly beneath pale stretched
skin. Arms hung on naturally long Nabi
joints protruding through a Macy at flesh.
Its head. Something between an elk skull
and bare bone Rose into the beam.
Two, immense, antlers jutted Skyward each time sharp and
twisted like dead branches. My breath caught a strangled
noise in my throat. I sat frozen fingers, clenched
around the revolver, my whole body tense with dread, it
stopped there directly outside the window.
Dark empty sockets, turned towards the cab for a long
moment. It stood Motionless in the
swirling storm, almost a statue carved from Ice and Bone.
Then slowly and deliberately it raised one elongated skeletal
hand and tapped a single finger against the glass.
Tap tap, tap, I didn't move, I didn't breathe the.
Tapping echoed painfully in my ears.
The revolver trembling uselessly in my grasp every muscle in my
body urged me to fire to scream to flee, but my instincts held
me still. Then from the trees behind the
plow. Another sound cracked through
the night. A second, inhale, deeper wetter
more guttural. The figure outside the window
tilted, its head toward the sound.
As if listening it dropped, its hand turned silently and stepped
away disappearing into the snowstorm.
I stayed rigid Frozen in the seat.
Watching the snow pile up against the windshield.
Until my limbs began to cram. Hours, passed or minutes.
I couldn't tell. Nothing returned to the plow.
I could only sit there in agonizing silence trapped in
darkness knowing that whatever had been outside.
Whatever was still out there, hadn't left me it had merely
stepped back waiting Somewhere Out of Sight the hours crawled
by My watch Red 419, mm but it felt like time itself had
stopped. Every muscle in my body ached
from the tension of remaining perfectly still cramped into the
freezing cab. My breath frosted heavily on the
inside of the windshield blocking.
Most of my view outside the cold seeped, into my bones, despite
layers of clothing biting deep into my skin.
But I barely noticed, I couldn't stop replaying that skeletal
shape in the tapping finger on the glass, couldn't silence the
memory of that thing's. Empty Hollow stairs.
I shifted slightly just enough to ease the ache in my legs.
My hands still gripped. The revolver, my Knuckles stiff
and white. I hadn't moved from the driver's
seat in hours. Had endeared, look away from the
window. Outside snow continued piling up
in thick of layers. Further isolating me.
I strained my ears for any noise, any movement in the
Frozen silence. Nothing just my own shallow
breaths. Filling the cab with vapor and
the faint groaning of metal as the plow settled, beneath the
weight of the snow, but then a quiet.
Click almost lost beneath my briefing.
I twisted my head toward the passenger door.
The handle jiggled. Softly once twice, as if being
tested from outside, I lifted the revolver aiming shakily
toward the door, my heart pounded violently blood roaring
in my ears. But the movement stopped no
entry. No attempt to force the handle
further, just a sudden empty silence as if the Intruder had
decided against it. I couldn't move could barely
breathe every nerve in my body burned with adrenaline pulse.
Hammering rapidly through my veins minutes passed.
Then an hour. Maybe two, I didn't lower the
revolver. Didn't relax, my exhaustion,
blurred into numbness, Eyes heavy, but unblinking fixed on
the shadowy windows. Eventually Dawn began to break.
then shafts of pale, gray sunlight, filtered through gaps,
in the ice crusted, windshield, Slowly stiffly.
I leaned forward, squinting into the murky.
Half-life snowdrifts nearly buried the plow and everything
outside was blanketed white and Silent the dark tree line was
still empty, no movement, no skeletal figures nothing but
endless snow Taking a long ragged breath.
I forced myself, upright and unlocked.
The driver's door, pushing it, open with trembling hands, cold
air bit into my face. Snapping me, awake alert, I
stepped unsteadily out into knee-deep, snow stumbling
slightly as my numb legs tried to regain their feeling.
I circled cautiously around the plow pistol.
Still raised ready? What I saw stopped me in my
tracks, breath hitching painfully in my throat.
The side mirrors were shattered, metal twisted and bent outward
Jagged edges glinting in the weak Morning, Sun.
The passenger door hung Askew violently wrenched away from its
hinges. As though, something
unimaginably strong had tried to pull it loose.
Deep irregular, scratches gouge, the metal.
Siding forming patterns that looked like long claw marks,
dragged through the paint, and around the entire vehicle.
Circling endlessly relentlessly where the same Barefoot Prince.
I'd seen back at the abandoned Subaru.
But these were different now, wider deeper impossibly large in
elongated. They didn't walk away, they only
circled again and again overlapping in places as though,
what ever made them had pasted, endlessly patiently around the
plow all night. I backed away stumbling out onto
the road. Revolver still gripped tight in
my hand. Panics swelled in my chest
without thinking. Clearly I turned and staggered
down. The road away from the plow away
from the circling Footprints away.
From whatever had waited all night just outside my window two
miles. I walked legs heavy clothes.
Frozen stiff. I didn't feel the cold anymore,
only the Deep penetrating numbness.
Finally headlights appeared through the swirling, snow
cutting toward me. Another Adobe.
I collapsed to my knee's on the icy pavement, as the other
driver jumped out rushing toward me, He said something I couldn't
make it out his voice. Sounded distant distorted lost
in the noise inside my head. His face blurred and swam before
me, as he reached down grassing, my shoulders yelling, my name,
his eyes widened. As he looked down at My
Revolver, still tightly clenched.
In my trembling hand, what happened Kyle, he shouted, voice
cracking. Where is your truck?
I tried to speak to explain but words wouldn't form.
Instead I found myself repeating a single horse sentence.
Don't follow those Footprints. That's not her out there not
anymore. Later.
I sat shivering beneath blankets in the warmth of a rescue
vehicle watching silently, as emergency crews and Tribal
Police. Combed the snow around my
abandoned plow. They found nothing.
No sign of the missing woman. No skeletal figures.
Just a single bloody footprint on the floor of my cab too,
large, too elongated to belong to any human days later.
The official report listed exposure, exhaustion and
possible hallucinations due to hypothermia.
The missing woman was never found and I refused to return to
Route 273 again. But every time I closed my eyes,
I saw these Footprints circling endlessly around me through the
snow patient and hungry in the Darkness.
And even now in the safety of my home miles away, I know with
absolute certainty that whatever had stalked me out there on the
Frozen Highway had in truly left.
It was still waiting somewhere beyond the Snow Line biting its
time. My name's West called her and up
until about a year ago, I spent nearly half my life.
Leading hunting groups through the back country around, Aztec
New Mexico, After a divorce that took more out of me than I care
to admit. I traded guiding elk hunts and
mule deer Expeditions for selling Hardware to Weekend.
Warriors, at the local supply store, it wasn't exactly
thrilling work but it beats staring at walls, drinking alone
and waiting for life to turn around.
That's why when Dr Eileen Graves called from the University of
Illinois asking for a guide into the Badlands near Navajo Dam.
I said yes faster than I probably should have.
It had been months since I set foot off Trail and her offer was
generous enough that turning it down, would have felt like
throwing cash into the San Juan River.
Eileen was straightforward. She was chasing fossils exposed
by seasonal runoff. I didn't much care about bones
older than dirt. But I knew the area she had her
eyes on a twisted, stretch of sandstone ridges and washes
locals called Hogback a place. Quiet enough to let your
imagination run wild if you aren't careful.
She showed up early on a Friday morning with her research,
assistant, Jonah Mathers. Jonah had wide eyes and a
nervous way of laughing at things.
That were not really funny. We shook hands and loaded gear
into my truck, then made the hour drive toward the BLM Access
Road West of the Damned It was Springtime which meant rain had
carved new patterns into the land leaving ribbons of exposed
rock, and freshly scoured, creek beds in its wake.
Beautiful. But brutal country.
If you made a mistake out here, nobody would find you until
coyotes and vultures made sure you were beyond recognition.
We parked by the start of a half a race Trail.
I could tell no one had been out here in a long time.
The official BLM marker was nearly hidden by Sagebrush son,
bleached and unreadable. Is this really?
The trail? Jonah asked.
Looking around uneasily. It used to be.
I replied probably washed out years ago.
I felt their hesitation but didn't give it any voice
instead, we loaded our packs with water and Essentials
checked our compasses and started walking The land rolled
out before us in Erie, silents. Scrubby junipers hunched over
cracked Earth. Rock Finns jutting from the
ground like ribs of some massive buried Beast.
Every step felt alien. By the time we found a suitable
campsite under an overhanging ledge Shadows were long enough
to cloak the Hills, We Gather dried branches and scraps of
juniper bark to make a fire. And as Jonah and Eileen took
notes, I studied the ground around us.
Scattered cattle, bones bleached white by son, Le partially
buried near the edge of camp. Clean, but Unbroken.
There were no signs of claw marks or tooth scrapes.
It struck me as odd though. I chose not to alarm the others.
Strange things happened out here sometimes, and there was rarely
a simple explanation. Darkness came swiftly, dropping
a deep silence over us, like a heavy blanket.
The fire crackled as we talked briefly about plans for the next
day. Eileen explained geological
formations excitedly while Jonah nodded along but my attention
kept drifting toward a distant Ridge.
Twice. I caught myself staring into
Shadows. Each time certain I'd seen a
shape against the dim glow of evening sky. something upright
and still, I convinced myself, it was my eyes playing tricks.
Sleep came hard and shallow. I lay awake staring up at the
canopy of stars visible through the branches, listening to Jonah
and Eileen's quiet breathing. Just as I began to drift off, I
heard something a soft step on dirt and Stone.
It was careful, slow rhythmic. My hand tightened around the
grip of the revolver beneath my sleeping bag.
I listened to closer. Heart thumping.
The steps circled, our camp methodically whoever or whatever
it was moved with a smoothness, that bothered me a steadiness
unnatural in this Rocky Terrain. I sat up slowly and flicked on
my headlamp the beam swept through Shadows catching only
empty desert. The sound stopped immediately.
I sat intense silence for a long moment.
Waiting listening, nothing moved nothing breathed only the faint
Whisper of wind in the junipers. Eventually exhaustion forced me
back into my sleeping bag, but my fingers remained curled
around the cold metal of My Revolver until dawn unwilling to
trust the darkness fully. When Dawn finally broke, I sat
up slowly my muscles stiff and aching from the tents Sleepless
hours across the fire pit Eileen.
Rubbed her eyes stretching silently as she took in the
first hints of daylight creeping over the ridge.
Jonah. She called softly glancing
toward his sleeping spot, my stomach knotted instantly.
Jonas sleeping bag, lay empty, it's nylon Fabric.
Rumpled in Twisted as if he'd left in a hurry, his boots
backpack and jackets still sat neatly beside it untouched.
Eileen stood stepping closer. Jonah, you out here.
Her voice had an edge, barely hidden by forced calm.
I Rose slowly scanning the surrounding area forcing myself
to stay steady. Maybe he stepped away, I offered
quietly but my gut said otherwise, I crouched by his
gear inspecting, it closer Jonah wouldn't have gone far Barefoot
in the terrain, we spread out calling his name.
Louder each time each unanswered.
Shout echoed through the Canyons bouncing back mockingly until it
died away. I carefully studied the ground
looking for tracks or scuffs. Anything that might give us a
Direction but found only faint, disturbances, two vague to
follow reliably. Finally, after nearly an hour of
fruitless searching, I caught sight of something through my
binoculars. Just a smudge, at first
something upright, among the Juniper bushes down in a narrow
Ravine below. I hesitated adjusted the focus
and felt my blood, chill instantly Eileen.
I called voice drive down here, she came quickly.
Following my pointing hand, We scrambled down a rocky
embankment slipping on loose gravel until we reach the
bottom. Ahead of us, stood Jonah or
rather Jonah's body. Positioned, stiffly against the
Twisted trunk of a juniper tree, his shoulders squared, awkwardly
head, tilted to an unnatural angle.
The posture was impossible. Bones, couldn't bend like that
without breaking. And yet Jonah, stood upright,
Ridgid propped, like a grotesque mannequin, Eileen, gasps sharply
pressing a hand over her mouth eyes wide and fixed and horror.
I stepped closer fighting nausea.
His eyes had been removed the sockets empty dry and clean
staring blindly toward the sky. But worse was the absolute lack
of blood wounds or tracks nothing Disturbed.
The dust around him. It was, as though, he'd simply
appeared here. Oh God, Ilene, whispered voice
barely audible. What, what could have done this?
I shook my head slowly unwilling to guess allowed.
I'd seen animal kills, plenty mountain, lions bears, but
nothing like this. Nothing that placed bodies like
statues stripped clean without any trace of violence.
We need to get out of here. I said firmly pulling gently on
her arm, guiding her away now. Eileen.
Stumbled numbly beside me silent as we climbed back toward Camp,
the bright daylight did little to ease.
The dread sitting in my chest heavy and suffocating when we
reached our site I immediately started packing jamming gear
hastily into bags. I avoided looking at Jonah's
untouched belongings, the empty sleeping bag that now seemed
sickeningly ominous. Eileen stood quietly shaking
staring at the ground. As if reality was too difficult
to process. I nearly finished packing.
When she let out a low breathless.
Gas West, look across the dry. Wash silhouetted against the
distant Sandstone Ridge. Someone was walking toward us.
Naked slowly moving step by step through the brush.
My pulse quickened the shape was familiar too.
Familiar its Jonah Eileen murmured, barely breathing No, I
said, trying to sound calm voice.
Betraying my disbelief. It can't be.
But the figure moved closer slow and deliberate revealing a tall
frame and gangly limbs matching Jonah.
Exactly. It.
Pause at the edge of visibility the failing daylight blurring
its features and then the face tilted up slightly into view
causing a surge of pure revulsion to twist my insides.
It wasn't Jonah, not truly, the features were stretched too
long, the smile Twisted into something impossible inhuman.
The eyes dark empty pits seemed to fix directly on me.
My hand moved instinctively to the revolver on my belt.
As if recognizing this action, the figure steps silently back
into the junipers disappearing without another sound.
Neither of us spoke. There was no sleeping after that
we sat by the fire Hearts. Pounding Eyes Wide.
Open waiting desperately for Dawn.
We didn't wait for full Sunrise before breaking camp.
My hands trembled as I stuffed gear into packs, abandoning
anything, unnecessary Eileen, barely moved her face, pale eyes
Hollow and glassy as she silently.
Watched me work The revolver felt reassuringly heavy on my
hip, but my mind kept flashing back to the impossible shape
we'd seen in the darkness Jonah or whatever had taken his form.
It had vanished without sound or Trace my grip tightened in
voluntarily on the Pax straps. Stay closed.
I told Eileen firmly. My voice.
Rough from Sleepless tension. Don't stop for anything.
She nodded once I still vacant following me numbly.
As I let us back along the faint remnants of our entry Trail.
We moved quickly, the morning sun rising hot turning rock into
ovens and baking away the night's chill.
Hours passed in an exhausting blur but the terrain wasn't,
right. Familiar landmarks seemed
distorted washes, had shifted and ridges blurred together.
Sweat. Stung, my eyes.
We had overshot our Trailhead badly forced deeper into the
Badlands by the Maze of twisting Sandstone fins and sheer Cliffs.
Eileen, stumbled behind me slipping frequently as
dehydration took its toll. She was fading quickly and panic
started gnawing at the edge of my resolve.
Just as I prepared myself to stop to figure out, some way to
find water or shade, the distant Rumble of an engine echoed
faintly through the canyon. We froze.
Listening an old dust covered Ranch truck.
Crested a ridge. And came bumping along an
unmarked Service Road toward us. It's faded paint and battered.
Fender's, unmistakably local. I waved frantically relief
flooding through my chest as the vehicle rolled to a stop beside
us. The driver's window lowered.
Slowly revealing the weathered face of an older dying, man.
His eyes, briefly flicked toward the revolver on my hip, then he
silently gestured for us to get in.
We climbed inside Eileen collapsing, onto the cracked,
leather seat, breathing, raggedly.
He said, nothing his lined face. Expressionless eyes.
Fixed Straight Ahead as we drove I opened my mouth several times
questions bubbling in my throat but the set of his jaw kept me
quiet. We drove in silence Myles,
passing beneath us and we were far beyond the shadowed Ridges
of Hogback Finally the old man. Cleared his throat, softly
breaking the silence. His voice was low.
Each word carefully chosen. That washed doesn't get used
anymore. Not since the last cattle were
torn up down there. He turned slightly his dark eyes
meeting mine. Briefly, that thing walks in
daylight now. I swallowed hard fighting
nausea. He continued slowly almost
reluctantly. You didn't shoot at it, did you
know, I whispered hoarsely my throat dry as sand.
Good. He nodded once eyes, back on the
road ahead. Never aim at something that
doesn't leave tracks. He didn't speak again until we
pulled into a gas station near Blanco.
The truck idled noisily. As we climbed out my legs,
unsteady beneath me, Before I could thank him.
He drove off leaving a cloud of dust swirling in his wake Eileen
left town. That night, we didn't exchange
numbers or speak again as if each blamed the other for what
we'd seen for what it happened to Jonah.
A week later, I piled every piece of gear, I owned into a
rusted, metal drum behind the hardware store and lit it all on
fire. Maps, Compass sleeping bags, all
of it, burned until nothing remained, but Ash, and metal
buckles glowing, dull, red and fading, Twilight.
I never guided again and I never went back to the Hogback.
When you spend enough time alone in the wilderness, you learn the
difference between ordinary silence and the kind of quiet
that warns you something's wrong.
It's a silence that settles over you slowly.
The kind you don't notice until you realize you've stopped
breathing just to hear better. My name's Jason Weller and two
years ago I resigned as a Backcountry Ranger at Zion
National Park after an accident that I still don't talk about
These days, I earn a living writing about Solitude and wild
places authentic unfiltered and completely analog.
No GPS, No cameras. No electronics.
Just Maps journals and intuition.
This time, my assignment was to tackle the Grandview Trail on
the south rim of the Grand Canyon.
It was late November well past the tourist season and the
canyon was nearly deserted. Perfect, for the kind of article
I had in mind. Raw isolated real.
On my first day down from the rim, I remembered why few hikers
Venture onto the Grandview Trail.
It drops fast too fast for Comfort switch, backing sharply
through crumbling, Rock and loose gravel.
The wooden Trailhead sign. Whether in splintered had warned
unmaintained, path, proceed with caution.
I'd been warned about worse. My boots, slid and skidded
kicking up dust and sending loose Stones, bouncing away into
nothingness. I paused briefly to look back up
at The Rim above a sheer wall Rising into the sky.
Already, I felt small. By Sunset.
I'd made it down to Horseshoe Mesa.
I picked a spot close to a rust colored.
Rock wall sheltered. Just enough to block the cold
wind blowing up from Below. My Camp came together quickly
tent staked out, stove, and fuel canister.
Set carefully to one side map folded, neatly by my sleeping
bag. I ate without thinking
distracted, by The Canyons shifting Shadows.
Exhaustion. Said in fast.
Pulling me under before I had even finished my journal entry.
I woke hours later. My watch read 215 mm.
I blanked unsure at first what its startled me awake.
Then it came. Again, the sound of something
breathing, just beyond the thin nylon fabric of my tent.
Not the quick animal like breath.
I'd come to recognize. Know it was slow.
Call measured Almost Human. I sat upright every muscle
tightening ears, straining against the darkness.
The breathing can continue for another 20 or 30 seconds.
Then, as abruptly as it had started it ceased.
I reached for my headlamp, my fingers, fumbling with the
zipper. The tent flap opened revealing
the Stark emptiness of the night.
I Shone my light around the camp, sleeping bag pack stove.
Everything seemed exactly as I left it, except My right glove
lay near the fire ring 20 feet from where I remembered setting
it down. Cold anxiety settled in my
stomach, but I forced logic back into my mind.
Maybe a gust of wind had moved it, or maybe I dropped it
without noticing. My brain spun excuses.
As I zipped up the tent, pulling my sleeping bag tighter around
my body. Sleep returned, uneasily.
When Donna, arrived, hail and reluctant.
I stepped from the tent and froze.
The camp had changed. My fuel canister had been
disconnected from the stove and now lay neatly atop a rock 3
feet away. The map I distinctly remembered
leaving folded. Inside, my tent was now tucked
under my sleeping pad edges perfectly aligned and on top of
my pack folded neatly where my extra socks side by side, I scan
the dust around my campsite desperate for tracks.
There was nothing. Clear, nothing identifiable,
just loose dirt and Scattered stones.
The canyon walls loomed silently above me indifferent and
unmoving. Heart pounding.
I grabbed my journal and wrote quickly my fingers trembling
slightly. This doesn't feel like my Camp.
The words stared back at me from the page, heavy and dark.
I underlined them twice then closed the journal with a tight
snap already. I felt the canyon changing
around me pulling at the edge of my mind, it was subtle a tug, a
whisper of uncertainty, but unmistakably present I packed up
quickly and quietly glancing around too often.
There were no signs of life. No evidence of visitors yet.
I felt eyes somewhere watching me.
It was no longer just a Wilderness trip for an article.
It had become something else entirely though.
I didn't yet understand what, and it was only the first
morning. The deeper I moved into the
canyon. The more I felt eyes on me.
It wasn't constant more like flickers at the edges of my
awareness brief moments that made me glance back over my
shoulder. Nothing was ever there, just
silence stretches of rock and shadowed crevices.
Still, I couldn't shake the feeling of being observed.
By midday, the switchbacks tightened into steep zigzags
along the Cliffside. My thighs burned, as I climbed
lungs tight from the thin dry air.
I reached an exposed ledge deciding to stop for water and
check my map again. The sun hammered down and I
shielded my eyes squinting across the vast emptiness to The
Cliff face opposite. Mine.
Then I saw it on a narrow shelf, about 400 feet away.
Stood, a figure, I squinted harder hoping.
It was just a trick of sunlight on Rock.
But as my eyes adjusted, I recognized the unmistakable
shape of a person tall and slender standing rigidly still
arms relaxed at the side's. I raise a hand, in a hesitant
wave. No response.
Unease tightened in my chest. I shifted position slightly and
in that exact moment, the figure mirrored my movement precisely
delayed by perhaps two seconds. A cold chill crept down my
spine. I tilted my head to the left
waiting. Breathlessly the figure tilted
its head too. Again delayed unnatural, my
throat went dry, Without taking my eyes off it.
I slowly stepped back until the cliff Edge obscured the figure
from View. For several long minutes, I
leaned against the stone wall. Breathing hard, fighting Panic,
eventually. I mustered the courage to look
again, the Shelf was empty, but when I reached the spot where I
thought the figure had been fresh boot prints, clearly
marked the dust large. Oddly elongated pointing toward
my trail that night, I chose my campsite carefully.
I pitched my tent in a shallow Ravine, the walls close enough
to feel somewhat secure. Anxiety made me work.
Mythically rocks, arranged protectively around the
perimeter bareback hoisted extra.
High on a strong tree, limb. Darkness, descended fast cold,
air settling sharply, making my bones ache.
Sleep seemed impossible and I lay awake listening to the faint
of wind through Dry scrub. My body was exhausted yet.
I was alert waiting listening at exactly 12:48 a.m. footsteps
crunched through the gravel nearby.
Slow. Deliberate steps.
Human steps. I lay perfectly still gripping,
my knife so hard. My Knuckles thawed, my heart.
Pounded violently the footsteps halted, only a few yards from my
10th silence, then a voice low, quiet, and perfectly calm, my
voice. Stay awake.
It said stay awake. A wave of nausea surged through
me, sweat pooled along my spine. I fought the urge to open the
tent. I knew somehow that seeing what
stood outside would break me completely.
Instead, I fumbled in the dark for my journal, forcing my
shaking fingers to grip a pen eyes, wide, I scribbled blindly
onto the paper repeating. The only words I could think of,
it's not me, it's not me, it's not me.
The voice didn't speak. Again the footsteps moved, no
clothes, sir nor did they retreat, they simply lingard
motionless. Just beyond the canvas of my
shelter Dawn took forever to arrive weeks on light.
Finally, spilling Over the Horizon and seeping through my
tent. Trembling I pushed the flap open
and stepped out side knife. Still clutched in my hands, my
boots were gone vanished entirely my bear bag hung
untouched swaying gently. But beneath it in the dirt was
something new, A Perfect Circle of Ash and rocks.
Placed exactly where I had left my journal bag the night before.
I knelt slowly. Heart racing my journal, lay
inside the bag. Carefully closed.
I opened it slowly. My breath catching sharply in my
chest. The page at opened to was blank.
I was certain I had written last night.
Frantic desperate words But the pages showed nothing just
pristine unmarked paper. Staring back at me.
I sat Frozen breathing shallowly staring at the empty Journal.
Around me, the canyon walls pressed in silently offering no
explanations or Comfort. Whatever watched me wasn't done
yet, and I knew deep in my bones, that the canyon wouldn't
let me leave easily. At first light, I packed what
little courage, I had left along with my gear Without boots, I
duct taped slabs of foam for my sleeping pad to my feet.
They provided almost no protection and the rocks and
sharp gravel tore through with every step but the physical pain
was welcome. It kept me grounded, kept me
moving. I'd longed in the original plan,
my only goal now was simple and Urgent climb out.
The trail was relentless with each switch back, I felt weaker.
My pulse hammering relentlessly behind my eyes.
Every so often a shadow would Flicker at the edge of my
vision. Forcing my head around, each
time, there was nothing there, the canyon walls remained, blank
and unforgiving. My breathing grew ragged harsh
against the empty silence. To stay focused.
I muttered quietly to myself. Just keep moving Jason One Step.
Then another Then a voice echoed back, clearly from above a
familiar unsettling, mimicry of my own one step, then another, I
froze, a cold sweat prickled, my skin.
My stomach Twisted violently. I looked up to the ridge above
me, seeing nothing but rocks and dry scrub.
Who's there my voice broke? As I spoke sounding thin and
Afraid the reply was immediate eerily exact and chillingly.
Casual. Whose there It was my voice, but
Halo flat. There was no life in the
imitation. No human warmth.
It mocked me, stole my words and twisted them into something
sinister. My pulse surged painfully Panic,
flaring into pure Terror. I sprinted uphill, ignoring the
agony, in my feet. The duct tape tour, exposing raw
skin to Sharp Stones. Blood smeared the Rocks beneath
me as I stumbled and clawed upward.
I crested one of the final switchbacks almost Delirious
when something caught my eye. Just off the trail, a small
flash of movement turning sharply.
I Glimpse to shape crouched lobe beside a juniper tree.
It Rose slowly emerging into clearer view.
My throat closed tightly breath catching, in my chest.
It was a person impossibly thin and draped and tattered clothing
and on its feet, my boots. I opened my mouth to scream but
nothing came out. The figure took a single step
forward. Leaning slightly toward me.
No words, no sounds. Just an unbearable silence as
its head tilted, slowly mimicking, the angle of my own
Instinct took over. I ran blindly staggering forward
crawling on all fours at Times, Desperate just to reach the rim.
Gravel cut deeply into my palms and knees.
My makeshift shoes had shredded completely leaving my feet, raw,
and numb. The final 100 yards stretched
forever. When I finally reached the
trailhead parking lot, I fell to my knees chest heaving Vision
spinning violently. Everything blurred together, the
dust the sky, the trees at the edge of the canyon.
Slowly. A shape came into focus, a green
SUV, the unmistakable Insignia of the National Park Service on
its side. A Rangers, stood leaning.
Calmly against it watching me carefully.
He took slow steps toward me, his movements steady cautious,
easy. Now he said, quietly, you're all
right, I tried to speak. Throw it painfully dry lips,
cracked it. Warmed my voice.
I managed to whisper words. Trembling out of me.
He hesitated only briefly recognition Crossing his eyes.
Without another word he opened the vehicles rear door and
gently helped me inside. As I sank onto the seat, shaking
uncontrollably, the ranger looked out toward the empty
Canyon before turning back to me.
His voice was quiet, resigned as he spoke, you're not the first
Growing up my brother Jesse and I spent almost every summer,
camping near big lake in the Apache.
Sitgreaves National Forest. It was dad's favorite spot
somewhere. Quiet enough to Lose Yourself,
but familiar enough to feel safe. even now years after dad
had passed, I could still recall the faint of Pine and Trout the
feeling of Cold Lake water on sunburn skin and nights spent
counting stars but things changed Life has a way of
twisting even the good memories into something else.
Jesse's recent divorce had turned him bitter restless and
desperate for something familiar.
It's time. We went back.
Jesse insisted one. Cold.
November morning. Clear, our heads like the old
days. I didn't want to go.
Not really but he needed this trip and deep down maybe I did
too. We loaded dad's old Tacoma, the
paint faded in chipped with camping gear and headed out,
leaving Phoenix's warmth. Behind for the high elevation,
chill near Big Lake At 9,000 feet in November everything felt
emptier quieter. It was laid.
Autumn the leaves long gone from the Aspens and frost glittered
like tiny Blades of glass in the morning sun.
The lake itself was barely recognizable.
Now mostly dry. Nothing.
But cracked mud and gray dirt spreading out like an empty
crater. Only a small stagnant pool
remained at the northern Edge. A sad.
Reminder of what had been Jesse parked above the lake bed on a
rough dirt Trail, and we set up camp in the cluster of tall,
Aspen's that rattled dryly in the Wind.
This isn't exactly what I remembered Jesse mudered,
kicking a chunk of dried mud. Seasons change.
I said, watching him carefully. He ignored me gazing toward the
ridge beyond the lake bed. We should go up there tomorrow.
Bet the view is still the same. We build a small fire as evening
approached and the sky shifted from pale blue to Deep Purple.
it was brutally cold once the sun dropped and our breath
turned to fog between us The crackling fire did little to
ease the bitter chill in my bones.
After a quiet meal, we retreated to our tents.
Sleep was slow to come but eventually exhaustion pulled me
under The next morning, I woke to frost coating the tent flaps.
Jesse was already moving around outside, impatiently urging me
to hurry up. By mid-morning, we started
toward the ridge. He'd mentioned each step
crunching through half Frozen Earth and Scattered pine
needles. I fell behind Jesse slightly
lost in thought when my foot hits something hard, almost
twisting, my ankle. I looked down expecting to see a
rock or tree root, but instead saw bleached White Bones
partially covered by fallen leaves.
Dear bones. My stomach tightened as I looked
closer. They were stacked neatly
deliberately arranged in a pattern that no animal could
manage. Ribs laid out like a small cage.
A skull resting neatly at its Center Jessie.
I called stepping back from the bones come see this?
He jogged back examining the bones with an uneasy expression.
Probably some Hunter with too much time or bored kids.
I nodded slowly trying to accept the simple explanation.
Yeah, probably we moved forward again but the site lingered in
the back of my mind. A silent question nagging me.
Who would take the time to stack?
Bones like that miles away from anywhere back at camp that
evening as the sky turned dark, we busy at ourselves making
dinner sharing strained. Small Talk.
Jesse was staring off into the forest.
When a sudden scream pierced, the air distant yet.
Undeniably human We both froze. Eyes locked listening, intently
It came again. Clear, this time a woman's voice
raw and terrified. Jesse stood, grabbing his flash
light. Someone's out there.
We should go help. Wait, I said holding him back.
There's no one else up here. We haven't seen anyone, the
scream echoed, again, fading deeper into the trees, Jesse
hesitated conflicted, then shook off my hand, what if she's hurt?
We can't just sit here. I watched helplessly as he
disappeared into the woods, his Flash Light Beam swallowed by
Darkness. Minutes, dragged into an hour.
I pasted the perimeter of Camp ears.
Straining for any sound. When Jesse finally, reappeared,
he was pale and out of breath, couldn't find anything.
He said quietly, avoiding my eyes, nothing at all.
He dropped into his tent without another word.
I followed suit heart racing. Unable to shake the sense that
something about him had changed. Sleep.
Eluded me. Every Russell.
Every snapping twig jolted my nerves.
I knew animals knew their sounds.
Their calls whatever screamed out.
There wasn't Wildlife. It was something else entirely.
I woke early, my breath visible. Inside the tent crystallized by
the freezing air. A creeping dread settled into my
bones, even before I realized Jesse was missing.
His sleeping bag, lay empty Twisted, open the zipper wide
apart, as if he'd gotten out quickly, his boots sat untouched
beside the tent flap, and his heavy jacket was still hanging
from a low Branch Frost clinging to the sleeves Jessie.
I called out softly at first, then, louder Jess, where are
you? The only reply was silenced
absolutes, mothering silence. Stepping outside.
Barefoot, I winced at the Chill by biting into my toes.
The morning sun barely reached our campsite leaving a grey
Twilight across the frozen lake bed.
Something wasn't right. Jesse wouldn't leave without
boots or a coat not in this weather my heart sped up.
Adrenaline overcoming the cold. I quickly dressed pulling on
extra layers and started searching around camp for
Footprints. There were none just a thin
undisturbed layer of frost and snow dusting the ground.
That didn't make sense, even a squirrel would leave tracks
here. For hours, I circled the
campsite calling Jesse's name until my throat burned.
The more I searched, the more desperate I became The Eerie
quiet only heightened the growing anxiety in my chest.
By mid-afternoon, I had covered every possible path.
Twice each sweeping with no sign of Jessie.
The fourth oppressive around me, looming trees, casting Dark
Shadows, that crept slowly across the ground.
Just as Panic began overwhelming, reason a faint
rustling broke through the silence.
I spun around heart hammering and stir, Jesse Hale,
expressionless walking stiffly from the direction of the ridge.
He wore only his thermal pants and long sleeve undershirt.
His hands were stained dark red with dried blood Jesus.
Jesse. Where were you?
I rushed toward him stopping short at the sight of the blood.
What happened? He stared at me blankly as if I
was a stranger. He looked down at his hands.
Slowly confusion clouding, his face.
I don't know. He murmured.
Are you hurt? I reached out cautiously
grabbing his wrist to inspect him but there were no injuries.
No wounds at all. Just blood dried and flaking.
I don't know. He repeated, softly eyes,
unfocused. I woke up near the rock pile
that's all I remember the bones. My voice trembled, the deer
bones. He nodded slightly, then his
gaze sharpened focusing somewhere behind me into the
woods, maybe he whispered. Let's get you warmed up.
I said, urgently guiding him toward the fire pit.
He stumbled slightly unsteady on his feet but said nothing else.
I managed to build a fire watching, Jesse closely his
silence Disturbed me more than his disappearance.
Jesse was never quiet. He joked talked.
Endlessly tried filling any Gap with noise.
This Jesse felt wrong. I sat across from him.
The fire crackling between us. You really don't remember
anything. No.
He kept his gaze fixed on the Flames, his voice distant.
You've got blood on your hands. Jesse.
That's not nothing. You had to have done something
out there. My patience, frayed fear,
sharpening my words he looked up sharply sudden anger flaring in
his eyes. I told you Mike.
I don't know later as Darkness seeped into the sky.
Jesse retreated to the tenth collapsing into sleep, almost
instantly, I stayed awake, feeding the fire, and listening
carefully to every rustle and snap of branches around us.
Jesse began muttering in his sleep, low fragmented words.
I couldn't quite catch. Almost like another language.
Harsh syllables Twisted together.
It didn't sound like my brother. The firelight flickered and
shadows stretched to cross the ground.
My hand stayed tight around the hatchet handle all night.
I didn't dare sleep. Something had happened to Jesse
out there something he couldn't or wouldn't share the blood, the
missing hours, the unnatural quiet around Camp, it all felt
connected as Dawn, approached exhaustion tugged at me, but I
jolted awake at the crunch of Frozen Earth.
Jesse was outside the tent again, standing Barefoot and
shirtless in the freezing Dawn staring silently toward the
ridge. I scrambled up heart racing,
Jesse, get back inside but he didn't move.
He just stood there. Muscles tense eyes fixed on,
something beyond the trees. I followed his gaze, my breath
hitching. When I saw a shape.
A dark hunched, figure crouched low on a distant Bolder watching
us. Jesse do you see that?
I hissed urgently fear nodding my throat.
He didn't reply he didn't even blink.
Then the figure was gone slipping quietly into the
Shadows. Beneath the trees, anger
overtook, my fear frustration, bubbling up from somewhere deep
in Desperate. I grabbed Jesse roughly by the
shoulder spinning. Him toward me.
What the hell happened to you? He shoved me violently stumbling
back, don't touch me. He growled his voice was low and
guttural unrecognizable Panic surged through me.
Instinct overpowering. Hesitation where leaving now
know, Jessie shouted, voice cracking and panic.
You can't it watches when you speak its name.
What watches? I demanded grabbing his
shoulders. He twisted in my grip, his eyes
wild and terrified. You don't understand.
He shoved me again. Harder, I stumbled back rage
overtaking. Reason my hand found a thick
Fallen Branch gripping. It, tightly Jesse lunge toward
me again, Fury distorting his features.
I swung instinctively the branch cracked against his knee and he
dropped instantly snarling in pain.
My stomach. Churned guilt colliding with
survival Instinct. Sorry, Jesse.
I'm sorry my voice broke. He lay there, gripping his leg
glaring at me with a fury that felt foreign and chilling.
I bound his legs. Tightly with paracord, lifted
him into the truck bed and threw our gear.
In haphazardly, his eyes, never left me filled with hatred and
something else. Something darker I couldn't
name, I drove fast headlights. Cutting sharply through the
trees desperate to reach civilization.
Jesse remains silent unmoving but I knew the thing from the
ridge was still with us lingering at the edge of my
vision, just beyond the tree line.
I didn't look back. Two days later, Jesse opened his
eyes in an urgent care clinic in Springerville, he stared at me
blankly confusion, clouding, his expression.
Outside the window sunlight warmed.
The White Walls of the Small Town Clinic, creating an
unsettling contrast to the dark cold Woods.
We left behind What happened? Jesse asked, softly shifting
uncomfortably on the stiff Clinic bed?
You don't remember my voice came out?
Strained raw from exhaustion and worried.
He shook his head genuine bewilderment in his eyes.
We went camping, right? Why am I here?
I hesitated words caught in my throat.
How could I explain the missing hours?
The blood on his hands. The look in his eyes when he'd
come back from the ridge. How could I describe the Twisted
figure watching us from the trees, you disappeared?
I finally said choosing my words carefully.
I found you hours later, you were disoriented He frowned
deeply glancing down at his bandage, knee and back at me.
Did I fall? I don't know.
I lied. You aren't yourself a nurse
stepped in quietly, interrupting before?
Jesse could question further. She checked his vitals scribbled
notes and gave me a look that implied.
I shouldn't push him too hard. Jesse drifted back into Restless
sleep, leaving me alone in the quiet room, haunted by
questions, Later, two forest, rangers arrived to speak with me
in the waiting room. They were polite cautious but
their questions probed deeply. Can you tell us exactly where
you camped? Asked the older one, his voice
steady but concerned. Above Big Lake.
I said vaguely uneasy under their scrutiny.
We grew up camping there. Wanted to revisit old memories.
The younger Ranger, studied me carefully.
His voice lowered. Did you notice anything unusual
out there? My throat tightened the memory
of stacked Dearborn bones Vivid in my mind, Jesse's, empty stare
and the distorted figure on the ridge.
I hesitated then shook my head, no, it was quiet.
The older Ranger exchange to glance with his partner.
Something unspoken passing between them.
After a few more formal questions, they left me alone.
I sat for a long time hands shaking unsure, why?
I had hidden the truth. Perhaps I feared, what
acknowledging it might mean days later.
I drove Jesse back to his apartment in Phoenix.
He didn't say much lost in thought staring, vacantly out
the passenger window. we never returned to the topic of the
woods, as if an unspoken agreement had settled between us
one of confusion and fear Over the next weeks, my sleep grew
worse riddled with nightmares of those woods, and that figure.
One night after waking, drenched and cold sweat.
I turned on my computer and searched the Apache sitgreaves
Forest desperate to find some rational explanation for what
we'd experienced. Hours passed my eyes aching
until I stumbled upon old Navajo and Apache folklore.
The accounts spoke clearly of being that walked in the shadows
mimicking voices hiding in the skin of others.
One word, appeared again. And again, Skinwalker my pulse
quickened, as I read further, descriptions matching Jesse's
strange Behavior, the unnatural sound, the inexplicable
disappearances A chill ran through me deeper than anything.
I fell in these cold Woods Closing the laptop sharply, I
stared into the darkness of my room.
Heart racing with a terrible certainty.
Something had found us at Big Lake within days.
I burned our camping gear unable to shake the feeling that
something had followed us back. The old Tacoma the truck.
Dad loved. I sold.
Quickly practically giving it away at a scrap yard in Tucson
desperate to several connections to that trip.
Months passed and Jesse stayed clear of the Wilderness entirely
refusing to discuss our experience.
He moved to San Diego, exchanging Arizona's, deserts,
and forests for a busy City, distancing himself from
everything familiar. I relocated to Oregon seeking
cooler Greener, Landscapes, hoping to replace the shadowed
Woods of Apache. Sitgreaves with something
brighter safer. We talked occasionally, but the
conversations fellow cautious. Each of us careful not to
trigger memories of those lost hours.
But one late winter after noon, something broke the silence
between us. Jesse called sounding shaking.
Mike, it's happening again. What do you mean?
I keep waking up outside. He whispered his voice ragged
with exhaustion Barefoot. I don't remember getting there,
but I'm always facing East toward Arizona, toward the lake.
Fear tightened, my chest, memories, flooding back, Jesse
listen, don't think about it, don't talk about it.
Just try to forget. He laughed bitterly.
I can't forget. Mike, something happened to me
there. Something still inside my head.
Then come here, I urged. Stay with me.
We'll figure this out. He didn't respond right away
then Softly. I'm not sure it's safe for you,
I think it follows me days later a small postcard arrived at my
new address, no return label just a single brightly colored
image of big lake in summer. My hands trembled as I flipped
it over reading, a simple message, scribbled and familiar
Jagged handwriting. Still watching still listening.
I called Jesse immediately, angry and terrified.
Why would you send this? Send what he sounded confused
anxious, Mike what postcard in that instant a cold certainty
settled in my stomach. Jesse hadn't sent it.
What ever we'd found or what ever had found us had never
left. I'd always been drawn to
isolated places the more remote the better that's probably why I
chose landscape photography as a profession.
You can't find good shots by following the crowd.
So when March rolled around and I saw a small window before comb
Ridge, would be swarmed by tourists.
I jumped on it. My goal was simple capture
BlackRock Arch at Sunrise lit up by that fleeting perfect morning
glow. To get that shot, I'd have to
Camp miles from civilization. Exactly the Solitude I was
craving. Comrade was spectacular, a
towering Ripple of Navajo Sandstone, slicing through
Utah's Southeastern landscape. It wasn't easy getting there but
the Bureau of Land Management had primitive sites scattered
near the ridge accessible via a rough Gravel Road.
That was perfect for me. The last campsite, the one
furthest out promised. True isolation, no neighbors, no
traffic. Nothing between me and the
Stars. I turned off US Route 163 late
in the afternoon. My truck rocking gently, as the
tires rolled over washboard ruts and loose stones.
Juniper's blurred by in dark green streaks.
The canyon walls painted orange by the dropping son. 40 minutes
later, I reached the campsite my headlights cutting through the
fading light. The spot was just as I'd hoped
empty quiet and tucked in near the mouth of a dry wash with
comb Ridge. Looming, just behind.
After setting up my tent, I sat by the small Fire Ring heating
water for dinner. The night sky deepened, a spray
of stars, blooming overhead, the world around me was silent
except for the soft crackle of firewood and somewhere far off a
faint chorus of coyotes. I felt completely alone and
completely at peace around midnight, I crawled into my
sleeping bag and Switched Off My headlamp.
It took mere minutes before, sleep pulled me under.
I don't know what woke me at first I laid perfectly still
listening Coyote's, maybe something in my subconscious
registering danger. I checked my watch 208, mm
outside, the darkness was absolute thick enough to swallow
everything beyond my nylon tent walls.
Then I heard it again gravel crunching faint but clear like
footsteps circling the perimeter of my campsite My pulse
quickened. Maybe it was Wildlife a deer or
a straight cow wandering through stepping cautiously on the loose
ground. That would explain the
hesitation the careful steps. But the longer I listened, the
less certain, I became the steps didn't sound random, they were
purposeful two steady to be an animal to calculated.
I unzip the tent flap as quietly as I could peering out into the
night. Blinking away, sleep.
A light Breeze. Rustled the junipers, the world
beyond my tent was still empty. Nothing moved, no animals, no
shadows. And yet the silence felt forced
somehow, as if the world was holding, its breath, waiting for
something to happen. Hello?
I called softly immediately, feeling foolish, my voice hung
in the silence unanswered. I stepped out fully my bare
feet, sinking slightly into the cold sand.
Shining my headlamp around, I found no tracks.
No sign of anything Disturbed. The fire ring was intact, my
gear undisturbed, but the feeling of being watched pressed
on me, prickling, my spine returning to my tent.
I zipped the flap tight, reassured myself, it was nothing
and settled back into my sleeping bag.
It took a long while for sleep to come back.
My ears straining to hear another sound eventually.
Exhaustion overtook Vigilantes and I drifted into Restless
dreams The next morning stepping outside, I froze.
The campsite wasn't as untouched as I thought.
The firewood which I had stacked neatly.
Lay scattered about pieces tossed.
Several feet from the fire ring. My tent flap closed securely.
When I went back inside was now halfway open fluttering slightly
in the morning Breeze. Unease settled like a stone in
my chest heavy and unmoving Maybe it was wind.
I rationalized again it had to be but deep down, I knew it
wasn't and I knew I wasn't alone.
I spent the day hiking capturing the shifting light on the
sandstone and scouting potential locations around BlackRock Arch.
The unsettling events of the night before lingard though I
kept telling myself it was nothing.
A combination of imagination and isolation playing tricks on me.
Still a quiet, unease clung to the edge of my consciousness.
Whispering doubts, no matter how I tried to push them away.
By late afternoon. I was high up on a Ledge
overlooking. This sweeping Sandstone waves
below shooting frames in Rapid succession.
Through the viewfinder, the world narrowed down becoming
manageable. It was easier behind the camera
less real. Maybe but as the sun began, its
descent behind comb Ridge. I lowered the camera stretching
my shoulders and reality flooded back in.
I was miles from anyone else, utterly alone in a place older
than human memory and it felt suddenly overwhelming.
Then a sharp crack rang out from somewhere below the ledge.
Echoing through the empty Canyon I leaned forward peering
cautiously down into the Steep Ravine beneath me.
Nothing moved. But the sound had been
unmistakable. A stone dislodged, a step taken
somewhere below. I stood perfectly still
listening. Heartbeat quickening minutes,
passed silence again. My pulse slowed reluctantly and
I began packing up quickly. The Fading sunlight urged me
back toward Camp. I didn't want to navigate these
narrow paths after Dark. As I descended The Ridge Trail,
I stopped suddenly breath catching in my throat.
Ahead of me, clearly outlined in the Sandy.
Dirt was a single boot print. I knelt down, studying it a
sickening, feeling settling deep in my stomach.
The print was unmistakably mine, the distinctive zigzag tread of
my hiking boots. But it was facing backward
heading up the trail toward me. My mind spun desperate for an
explanation. Maybe I had turned around
earlier, stepped awkwardly. Yet.
No other tracks Disturbed. The Path nearby.
Just the single print pointing directly toward me. a chill,
crept, down my spine, the hairs on my neck, Rising I quickly
continued toward Camp, my Pace quicker senses on high alert.
By the time I reached my campsite Twilight had drained.
The color from the landscape leaving.
Everything gray, and shadowed a small fire forcing myself to
breathe steadily, the warm glow and crackling Flames, providing
some false sense of comfort. As Darkness settled in fully, I
kept looking around the campsite eyes darting toward every small
noise, a distant twig, snapping the rustle of dry brush, my Unis
deepened into dread hours, crawled by until finally
exhausted. I retreated to my tent, keeping
my boots, just outside the flap. Sleep felt impossible and I lay
there in the dark eyes wide open body.
Tensed. Just after 1:30 a.m.
I heard it again. The unmistakable sound of slow.
Deliberate steps crunching. The gravel outside, each
footstep approached, my tent methodically stopping directly
behind my head. Fear paralyzed me my heart
pounded. So loudly, I worry whatever
stood outside might hear it. Hey I whispered Horsley
surprised that how small my voice, sounded no response just
silence and then clearly audible through the thin nylon of my
tent. Came along deep, exhale.
It sounded human butt off somehow like someone imitating
breathing rather than actually needing to it lasted too long
ending in a wet rasp that made my blood run cold.
Terrified. But needing answers I forced
myself to sit up and yank. Open the tent flap shining my
headlamp outward? Nothing was there.
Just empty Darkness. Stretching out beyond my small
circle of light. But as I scanned around my
stomach dropped again, one of my boots was missing leaving the
other sitting alone in the dirt. I stared into the silent desert
night. Breathing shallowly, feeling
trapped by the realization that whatever was out there.
Wasn't just watching me. It was slowly taking pieces of
me one at a time. Dawn brought no relief.
The sleepless night had left me drained, my nerves stretched
thin. I found myself questioning the
wisdom of staying but stubborn Pride kept me anchored.
I wasn't leaving, not yet not without getting the shot.
I had come here for All morning, the desert felt oddly muted.
The Familiar rhythm of nature something.
I usually took for granted seemed off, somehow it felt as
though, the land itself had become cautious.
Wary of something I couldn't quite Define.
I trudged out toward Black Rock Arch, around noon, moving slower
than usual feeling heavy and unsettled my missing.
Boot forced me to wear a pair of Old Trail Runners.
I kept behind the seat of my truck thin Souls, that were
barely enough protection against the rough sandstone.
And prickly brush beneath The arch Rose before me.
Striking an ancient, its graceful Sandstone curve's worn
Smooth by millennia. Normally I'd be inspired by a
scene like this, but today I couldn't shake the feeling of
being observed. I glanced over my shoulder every
few minutes searching. The canyon behind me eyes,
scanning the Ridgeline but finding nothing out of place.
The Shadows lengthened faster than I'd realized.
By late afternoon, I hurried to finish up and started back
toward camp. The daylight faded too quickly,
turning the landscape, Bleak colorless.
I walked as fast as I dared heart.
Pumping my ears straining to catch every sound. when I
finally saw my tents silhouetted against the last dim, streaks of
daylight relief flooded through me, But as I approached the
sense of unease returned, 10 fold.
Something was wrong, my boots. Both of them were missing.
Now I had left the remaining one sitting outside my tent flap and
now it was gone. I spun around suddenly aware of
movement at the edge of my vision.
My breath caught in my throat. Someone was there emerging
slowly From the Canyon Shadows. I squinted through the Twilight
blinking rapidly certain my eyes were playing tricks.
The figure stepped forward steadily with familiar boots on
its feet. My boots, my pulse raced as it
approached moving closer into the dim evening, glow.
I felt Frozen unable to move. Barely breathing because now I
could see clearly. It wasn't just my boots.
The figure wore my pants, my shirt, my gear.
It was dressed exactly. As I was it moved strangely
though limbs swung awkwardly Gates stiff and uneven.
As though each step, required immense concentration.
And then I recognized the face and my chest went tight, it was
mine, or at least a close imitation thin and stretched
features. Slightly distorted cheekbones,
sharper, eyes, sunken deep reflecting, no light.
I took an involuntary. Step backward, my mind struggled
to understand what I was seeing dread clouding.
My thoughts. This imitation stopped abruptly
about 20 feet away. Swaying slightly on legs.
That looks stretched too long and angular.
It didn't speak. Didn't breathe.
Just stood silently facing me. I whispered shakily.
What the hell at the sound of my voice?
The figure jerked forward a single unnatural step.
Its head tilted slightly, it's dark eyes studying me, observing
calculating. It was like watching my
reflection, come alive, twisted and wrong every instinct to run,
but I was frozen in place Paralyzed by a feared deeper and
more Primal than I'd ever known. Then as if it had seen enough,
the imitation took another slow step forward that movement broke
my paralysis adrenaline surged. And suddenly I was running
sprinting Barefoot into the Gathering Darkness, leaving
behind my tent, my truck, everything I didn't look back.
I couldn't The thought of seeing myself standing silently behind
me, watching was more than my sanity could handle.
I ran blindly into the darkness, my bare feet striking, the
gravel sharp rocks. Slicing into my skin with every
frantic step. Pain shot through my legs but
Terror propelled me forward. Drowning out.
Everything else. Each breath came in ragged
gasps, branches tore it. My skin, Juniper Thorns catching
my clothing, but I refused to slow down.
My thoughts, raced, wild and Scattered.
As I sprinted through the blackness Images of that Twisted
imitation flashed through my mind.
The vacant stare, the unnatural movements and my own stolen
boots on its feet. What was it?
A hallucination, some desert Madness or something, worse.
Something real time. Lost all meaning, I moved
instinctively toward where I thought the washboard rode was
navigating only by the dim silhouettes of Canyon walls
against the Stars. Twice.
I stumbled hitting the ground hard and scrambling back up
without pause. I kept running until my legs
trembled and my lungs burned. Finally, the darkness began to
fade into Early. Grey Dawn, exhausted.
Trembling, I slowed, my Pace to a staggering walk glancing over
my shoulder every few steps terrified.
I'd see the thing behind me, but the landscape was empty.
Silent bathed in the cold morning glow, then faintly in
the distance came, the low Rumble of an engine.
Hopes surged painfully in my chest, and I limped forward
stumbling toward the sound. A Dusty red.
Jeep Wrangler, rounded the bend its headlights, cutting through
the Morning Mist. I raised my arms waving wildly
desperation clear on my scratched bloodied face.
The driver, an older man, with weathered skin, slowed,
immediately and stopped a few yards from me, leaning out his
window eyes wide with concern, my godson, what happened to you.
He asked urgently Please, I guessed staggering forward.
I need help. He jumped out.
Steadying me by the shoulders and guiding me carefully toward
his Jeep. I collapsed into the passenger
seat shaking uncontrollably as exhaustion, and relief washed
over me. I told him everything in
fragmented bursts as we drove. about the footsteps, the stolen
Boots, the thing that looked exactly like me but wasn't He
listened quietly, his expression troubled, but not disbelieving,
nodding slowly as I spoke. we drove directly to the BLM
station just outside Bluff where a ranger listened intently eyes
narrowing, as I recounted what happened at BlackRock, Despite
my condition. I insisted we returned to the
campsite immediately. I needed answers needed proof.
I wasn't losing my mind. It was mid-morning when we
arrived back at my campsite the ranger stepped out first.
His hand hovering near his belt as he scanned.
The area cautiously, I followed my heart, pounding erratically,
as I saw, what remained or rather, what didn't The campsite
was stripped bare my tent sleeping bag camera gear.
And even the fire pit were gone as though they had never
existed. No tracks.
No drag marks nothing. Just empty ground impossibly
clean and undisturbed. Then, I saw them, my boots
sitting neatly side by side. Exactly where the fire pit had
once been laces, perfectly tied, The ranger glanced at me,
uneasily, clearly unnerved by the unnatural sight.
Come on. He finally said shaking his head
slowly. We shouldn't stay here.
As we walked back to his truck, the ranger paused glancing.
Once more toward the empty, campsite his voice was low,
hesitant Locals. Don't talk much about this place
but sometimes hikers are campers come back, shaken up, they
mentioned things. They can't explain figures that
look human but aren't quite right.
He looked away briefly clearly uncomfortable.
Folks around here. Call it a skinwalker old Navajo,
Legend. We don't usually share it
without ciders. I said nothing absorbing his
words as dread tightened its grip on me.
On the drive back to Bluff. I stared silently out the
window. Knowing one thing for certain
I'd never returned to comb Ridge.
And later, when I sat alone in a hotel room, I deleted every
photo I take in from the trip. Unable to bear the thought of
what might appear. The Rangers words stayed with me
though. Long after I had left Utah,
whatever had stalked me out there wasn't human, wasn't an
illusion. And the image burned into my
mind. My own boots carefully arranged
in that empty desert was proof enough of the terrible truth.